This is a very thoughtful book, very valuable, is the prominence of its social environment, is relatively rare in online texts, inspirational. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 infoIn addition, the writing skills of the insect are obvious, and it can be regarded as a masterpiece in women's urban literature, and the control of "Poor Dad Rich Dad" in all aspects can be seen with intentions, and from a certain point of view, it also has physical publication value.

The bug calls this book "Crossing Over", and the wolf thinks it is more appropriate to call it "Urban Rebirth", because time and space have not changed, but about urban rebirth, it has also been a popular topic recently.

Female authors write less about male leads, and this book has a unique side in terms of protagonist building. The scene where the protagonist appears, the wolf tentatively describes it as "alternative witty", and it also has the flavor of irony in society. In many novels, the male protagonists are almost all handsome guys, and the uglier they are, the harder they are to write. But the bugs seem to be familiar with this aspect, under normal circumstances, the big money is arrogant, and the sad ones are women, but the highlight of the insects is "the big money also has sadness", here is a first praise.

However, the insect is also worthy of being a big "stepmother", and it is unlucky enough for the male protagonist to be deceived and killed, and he must be reborn and enter the slums and become the father of five children. But on second thought, this paved the way for the "restart" later.

The ups and downs of the plot are another feature of this book, and many plot pieces have been described by insects. I feel that the writing of the bug has an affinity, especially in the fragments of slum life, and it seems that when I read it, it is like the plot in the book is happening around me. The online text should not be too deep, especially the urban text is more popular, the gap between the bustling city and the slum life, the insect makes good use of the contrasting technique, adding some folk customs to make it closer to life.

In addition, family affection has been shown in the book.,If this book exposes the reality and there is a touching at the same time.,It should be this struggle with the protagonist.。

A few points that need to be mentioned in particular

1. Delicate description is the characteristic of most female authors, but the description of the first few chapters is too delicate, which will undoubtedly have some big or small impact on the promotion of the plot. Because I don't know how many of the total words of the worm are going to write, if it is about 300,000 words, it is recommended to carry out two or three space conversions within every 4,000 words. In the following chapters, it can already be seen that the author has gradually overcome this, which is very good.

2. When the plot is changed, the wolf personally thinks that the use of "montage" can be more natural. For example, the male protagonist wants to get back to his former self, from the slum to the city, and the transition can be directly removed, that is: when he arrives at the destination, add a little explanation of how he inquired about the destination, and add the technique of psychological description, which will remove some defects of dryness and logical development.

3. Individual typos should be paid attention to, such as "work" rather than "kung fu" and so on, but there are not many typos overall, hehe.

Finally, I want to say that the wolf is not good at writing comments, this so-called comment, please take it as the subjective feelings of the wolf, for reference and discussion only, there is something inappropriate, and please bear with the insects and relatives. I look forward to seeing more progress and more exciting highlights next time I read this book.

---- bug remarks----

Wolf Han claims to be the wolf girl, and her pen name is actually the famous Han Zhao, and the books she writes are also very good, the list is as follows:

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/html/?bid=26522 Beijing Chess

/html/?bid=26522 "Billions of Light Years"

The three books belong to the Crossing Woman, Ancient and Modern Romance and Interstellar Wars, a very powerful all-rounder~

Another: It turns out that Han Zhao has a soft spot for this rhyme, and the names of the three books are all rhymed with this rhyme, Wahaha, I don't know if it's the first discovery ~

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