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How do little people shine? Commenting on "Poor Dad, Rich Dad"

- Silent cows

Scanning the book in the middle of the night, I swept the worm's "Poor Dad Rich Dad", and after reading it, I felt that it was really tasteful, so I simply discussed it with the bug here. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

The story of "Poor Dad Rich Dad" is very ordinary, the rich ugly man was murdered and reborn into the body of the poor and scumbag Uncle Shuai, unfortunately, the handsome uncle also carried five oil bottles......

I like the style of the bug, "Tang Sword Song" and "Poor Dad Rich Dad" The two books give people a very fresh and decent feeling, which is a rare clear stream in today's smoky online novels.

The latest thing that attracted me to this book "Poor Dad Rich Dad" is that Worm intends to write a contradiction - the contradiction between poor and rich, beautiful and ugly. The sublimation of this contradiction is the unity of the opposites of truth, goodness and beauty and false, evil and ugliness, which is in line with the changes in human nature in social development and is very meaningful. This book is classified in ancient and modern romances, but its essence is inspirational, and it is the insect that wants to tell everyone that no matter how the world is going down, how materialistic desires are rampant, truth, goodness and beauty will always make the little people shine with brilliant brilliance.

The protagonist Li Yingjun is a typical example of the insect to create, he is sincere, kind, and handsome and chic, he was ugly in his previous life, but he is still sincere and kind, but unfortunately because of his goodness and truth, he was framed by his evil and fake cousin, and he died with a whimper. This character is written very cute by bugs, he doesn't look like a huge rich man at all, even if he had a lot of money in his previous life, but he was still stupid to pursue a girl with clumsy means, (it was me, just hire 2 thugs, grab that chick, tie it to the bed and let me ooxx...) It's a pity that it's hard for an ugly and golden-looking person to associate him with goodness and truth, and as a result, he was misunderstood and died. This character is a bit like a pure little boy, simply pure and cute, a little silly, a character with a high IQ and low emotional intelligence. However, this character is so pure that it makes people feel fake, just like Guo Jing, the old man of Jin, has become a label, and it is difficult to call him a person.

The characters are the bones of the story, and through such a protagonist, it is easy for me to guess the follow-up plot, I am afraid it is a warm, warm, and interspersed with twists and turns.

I don't want to go into the trouble of the original intention of the bug and the characterization of the characters, the bug should stick to his own style, and this style does make me appreciate. However, the book doesn't seem to have very good grades, so I started from the grades alone and talked to the bugs about how to write more inspirational dramas for little people.

First of all, the first question of the book is: there are contradictions and no conflicts. For example, the protagonist was sent to be a duck because of his handsome appearance, which is a contradiction, a contradiction between beauty and ugliness, and the protagonist does not want to be a little white face with a beautiful appearance and an ugly heart, so he escapes. This is indeed a contradiction between beauty and ugliness, both in appearance and in mind. But the bug didn't write this paragraph to reflect the conflict, what is the conflict? It is the spark of the fierce collision between the two sides of the contradiction! The protagonist said to go, and he gave himself a few mouths, and this contradiction was over? Too easy, right? Too easy, right? That's an understatement, right? A huge contradiction, just like that? I think it should be added that such a plot should be added, the protagonist was beaten and insulted by a woman surnamed Luo, and was betrayed by the pouting female company and the little white face who introduced him to the industry, not only was he seriously injured, but also his spirit was greatly stimulated, but he was aggrieved, but he also set up his ambition - he would never make a living from this good-looking skin. After that, you can write about his poor sons, his poor neighbors, who selflessly helped him and suffered a lot for him. This is the conflict, the worse you write the protagonist, the stronger the conflict. The grievances of the protagonist will also resonate with readers, and YY highlights will also come up.

Secondly, the supporting characters are not attractive in terms of character creation. First of all, the first woman who came into contact with the protagonist, the female college student, this character is inexplicably portrayed, and the bug intends to write her as a woman who is blinded by the villain's character? Or is this woman very scheming and planned to kill the protagonist from the beginning? If she is blinded, but even if a normal woman finds out that she may be **, how can she think of killing? And it was killed cleanly. If she were a normal woman, her reaction would have been to look at the protagonist in disgust and turn away, right? How can you consider retaliation? If she is very scheming, how can there be that conversation in the cemetery? So this character is inexplicable and I don't know what to say. I think she is very scheming, and it is reasonable for her to be a femme fatale. Besides, the five sons of the protagonist, except for Da Le's good portrayal, needless to say, the others are very bland, very boring, and very symbolic. Five sons, I think it should account for a large proportion of the story of the bug, these five sons represent responsibility, is the protagonist is the pressure of survival, but also the purpose of the protagonist's survival, if these five children are not likable, then this book is really nothing to read. I think that five children are a bit too much, and they are not representative, since they represent responsibility and family affection, then they should have their own characteristics. I don't agree with the characteristics of the makeup artist's mouth when packaging them later, because it wasn't reflected before. Five sons is a bit much, and why are all five sons? Lori's lethality is definitely far greater than Zhengtai.,Lori's cuteness is bound to be much greater than Zhengtai.,Lori needs far more protection in society than Zhengtai.。 Besides, it's unreasonable! Since the eldest son is a boy, why did he give birth to five? This is inconsistent with the basic situation of China's blind stream. Children are not expensive, three children are enough, in fact, I think, 2 is enough, a man and a woman, each with its own characteristics, get five children, messy, and it will be difficult to describe one by one in the future. And then there's the heroine, it's all 200,000 words, right? Where is the heroine? Don't say that the reporter is, she is also a dead run, not to mention that the otaku girl, she is a gag. Bugs, look at it, in addition to the protagonist and Da Le, how many characters are there to see? And the more you write, the more you weaken the protagonist's sense of existence, alas...

Finally, the most difficult problem to solve is not real enough. If this book is a YY** book, I don't have to talk nonsense, but if Worm is going to write about small people, he has to be serious, because your readers are small people, and they know what life is like for little people. The helplessness of the little people, the suffering of the little people, the little people have the most experience, you write that you have tens of billions in your waist, and you take a helicopter when you go out, I and other little people have not experienced it, and I don't know what it feels like. But you write beggars, singers, I tell you in all seriousness, they will encounter unimaginable suffering! When the protagonist organizes the team to sing, what about the ruffians? What about the Chengguan Brigade? Of course, the plot of being deceived in finding a job is very feeling, but the reality of this life is fleeting, and the follow-up, how can there be so little suffering in life, and the trivial life has only given the protagonist such a small lesson, which is too merciful. It's not so easy to be motivated! The feeling of this book is not deep enough, have you read Yu Hua's "Brothers"? I want to write about the feeling of my brother's last episode~ Otherwise, this book is just a Korean soap opera, which can only deceive the cheap tears of middle-aged women.

Cows talk a lot of nonsense, and the bugs are more inclusive, more inclusive.

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