It's hard to explain Shiyu's current mood, in the process of playing the game, she has already realized that the so-called game script written according to "her script" does not seem to be going as she imagined, but she simply thinks of this situation as some bug fixes, not to mention, from her point of view, a series of options on the correction of the problem, it seems that the benefits of the game itself are not small.

So, although she was a little dissatisfied with the changes to the game's script that seemed to be handled by Kazuya, she also understood the situation, considering that it was a choice when they couldn't contact her. After all, she is only the person in charge of script writing in this club, and it is An Yilun who will ultimately decide the game itself, and even Kazuya is more qualified to decide the game than herself.

However, when Shiyu's long-awaited ending of the glazed line became the goods-end of the Kazuya-style, Shiyu's mood was difficult to calm down, in Shiyu's view, the role of Liuli, she could only be a completely tragic character, even if Kazuya's stubbornness reluctantly accepted the ending of the harem line, but she only regarded that ending as a situation like human creation, and let herself accept it through the subconscious denial in her heart that it was the "true" glazed ending.

And the real glass ending,It's something I wrote.,It's the glass ending that doesn't allow anyone to tamper with and sublimate all feelings.,That is, the glass TE in preparation.,But,It looks very bold and can't help but modify her options.,Supplement her ending.,This is undoubtedly a stain on her work for Shiyu.,And this kind of stain.,Even if it's a harmony.,She can't forgive.。

And this kind of dissatisfaction with and also,After she read all the scripts,,It's reached its climax.,Not to mention the plots of the side heroines that she doesn't attach so much importance to have deviated from her initial estimate.,The two she created by herself,In a sense, it's the core of the main plot of the glass line and the patrol glass line,There are also traces of obvious changes by and also.,Forcibly adding an ending is just one of the points that Shiyu notices most obviously.。

In order to make the game a game, rather than simply having only the only electronic novel, Kazuya also greatly expanded the performance of the corresponding characters in the case of wrong option selection, and in the process of modification, on the one hand, it was limited by time, and on the other hand, there was no Shiyu to make specific answers to doubts, so Kazuya could clearly feel that his character and plot setting would not be so in line with Shiyu's ideas.

And Shiyu also felt this, this feeling, as if her daughter had been defiled by someone else.

Although the creation of the new novel seems to be very difficult, the thing that gives Shiyu a chance to talk is that she has also created a game script that she is very satisfied with, and the story in this script makes her feel that it is the most perfect. However, the purity of this story, by the time she returned, was already unrecognizable.

"In my absence, you guys seem to have really done a big job!" So, forcibly suppressing his urge to explode, Shi Yu said in a much hoarser tone than usual.

"Yes, Senior Sister Shiyu, don't get too excited yet, you can play another game first." And Kazuya also saw that Shiyu's state was on the verge of exploding, and handed over the game trial version that Lun Ye had reserved according to Shiyu's original script, and said.

Shiyu looked at Kazuya with red eyes for a long time, and finally took a heavy breath, put the disc into the computer, and restarted the original game.

As when playing the game before, Shiyu, who chose a few options a little wrong under the prompting of Lunye, quickly realized the problem of gameplay, so halfway through the game, he didn't even play the ending, and Shiyu silently quit the game and sat there without saying a word.

"So Senior Sister Shiyu, you also understand why I made so many changes to your script, right?" Seeing Shi Yu, it seemed that he understood the reason for the revision, and said while the iron was hot, "Although I'm really sorry, a lot of revisions have been made to the script that senior sister attaches great importance to, but, senior sister, you have to admit that if you make a game according to your script, it will only make a very bad game." So, we've made a lot of changes to your script on a gameplay level, somewhat without permission. ”

"Even then, wouldn't it be okay to notify me in the first place? Tell me, let me revise together, am I such a person in your hearts who is not good at accepting your mistakes? Shi Yu finally couldn't bear the mixed feeling of frustration and disappointment in his heart, and said a little excitedly, but deliberately suppressed his voice.

"But at that time, we tried to contact you, but our editors stopped us, and we didn't know when you would be able to come back, so we had to do that." This time it was Lun Ye on the side who explained, obviously because Kazuya had already decided to talk about it, and Lun Ye didn't have so much pressure on him, so he also carefully explained that he didn't let all the spearheads of Shiyu be aimed at Kazuya alone.

"My edit?" Shiyu was stunned for a moment, and then immediately realized that it was Machida who rejected these applications for herself in a state of retreat, but then she immediately realized that something was wrong, "But, Machida editor told me that you don't have such an important thing to find?" If it's such an important thing as a problem with the script, she'll tell me what you tell her, right? ”

"Actually," Kazuya and Ryunya looked at each other in some surprise, and then, Kazuya told Shiyu the words of Machida's editor, and said, "Although we told Machida about this, she rejected mercilessly, and in her opinion, a 'child-like club' like ours is not worthy of your sister." ”

"What do you mean by 'unworthy'!" Shi Yu's eyes widened, "How can there be someone who is not worthy of it!" I've put so much effort into this club, and we've worked together for so long, don't you know? Don't you trust me at all? ”

Remembering that he had completely lost his mind and was blamed for himself by the Machida editor, Kazuya suddenly felt very frustrated, and Shiyu's words completely broke the "lie" of Machida's editor, which also made Kazuya suddenly a little disgusted with Machida's guy who always frustrated himself.

However, despite what Shiyu said, the feeling of uncertainty in Kazuya's heart still couldn't be dissipated, because, this was also the question he had from the beginning: "But, with the ability of the senior sister, even if you want to write a game script, there will be many top game production companies asking you to write, and if it's a club, there are no longer a few clubs that dig you to, right?" Didn't Iori want to poach you to his rouge-en-rouge last time? ”

"I know," Shiyu nodded lightly and said, "For me, Kasumi Shiko's game script debut or something, if a game company can dig up something in this regard, it will definitely be a big sensation, right?" If a fandom allows me to create, it can also provide them with plenty of leverage to officially transform into a commercial community. ”

"Yes, that's right." Kazuya asked a little strangely.

"But none of them told me to make a 'best Bishoujo game,' did they?" Shi Yu gently retorted, "Just like Ethics Jun said at the time?" Just like what you swore to me at the time. ”

"'The best beautiful girl game' or something, don't you think it's a big talk from that person?" Kazuya's eyes widened and he said at a loss. In fact, although his idea at the time was to make Kato's character more obvious, Tsunoya's idea of making a game with Kato as the heroine also made him think he could give it a try.

But the so-called "best beautiful girl game",This has always been an empty talk in Kazuya's opinion.,No matter how many mountains this community has not crossed before.,This kind of rambling goal was put forward at the beginning.,It's only someone like Lun who still has some fantasies that can do it.。

Although, it is true that the composition of this club is very attractive, whether it is Ying Lili or Shiyu are the top figures in their respective fields, but there are many top characters, and there are many companies and clubs where top characters are combined, and I want the best of these artists and script writers to play a "1+1>2" effect of the community is not much.

However, it is such an unrealistic dream, but in Shiyu's view, it seems to be a real goal that he wants to achieve, which makes Kazuya suddenly feel a feeling of being in the clouds.

"That's right, although I know this club is bad, but I believe in everyone, I believe in you, I believe in myself, if this club starts out as a small club, then use my script to make it grow, if this club starts out as a playful combination, then use my script to make a good game, and then let everyone realize that everyone can do it. I'm confident in everybody, you know? Shi Yu showed a very confident look, and his eyes stared straight at Kazuya and said, "For you, Kazuya-kun, I have always been very confident. ”

"Senior Sister Shiyu?" Kazuya responded a little stunned. For Kasumigaoka Shiyu who trusted him like this, he responded to her with such a lack of knowledge and self-blame again and again, and Kazuya suddenly had the urge to drag himself out and find a piece of frozen tofu and hit his head.

"That's right, even if you guys go to extremes a lot of times and have such an awkward personality, I have confidence in you! After all, the two of us are the same people! Shi Yu said in a daze.

Although I don't know what Shiyu's so-called "the same person" means, Kazuya has deeply felt Shiyu's deep trust in him.

"I understand, Senior Sister Shiyu, I won't live up to your trust! So, keep up the good work in the future! If we don't do it well this time, we can have a next time, and there will be a more next time, and one day, your wish can be fulfilled by us! Kazuya stood up firmly, and the confusion in his eyes was swept away.

"Well, the best Bishoujo game!" Lun also stood up excitedly, and by the way, Eiri and Kato, who had not spoken much on the other side, but had been listening carefully to the conversation here, also called over.

The hands of the four people stretched out into the air, but the only thing missing was the hand from Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

"Senior Sister Shiyu?" Kazuya asked a little confused.

"That's right," Shi Yu smiled bitterly and said, "That's right, until now, I have a lot of confidence in you!" The best illustrator, the best club manager, the best atmosphere coordinator, and the best bug filler, but I don't have confidence in myself anymore! ”

"No, no, no, Senior Sister's script is still the best, there's no doubt about it, right? Who would question how good Senpai's script is? ”

"Yes, this is a very good script," Shi Yu nodded, his eyes showed a very deep sense of chagrin, "A very good script, if you treat it as a script for a drama, if you use it as the outline of a novel, I will be very satisfied, so, you guys will abandon it, right?" ”

"That's because—"

"That's right, that's because this script is not a game script, it wasn't from the beginning, what you used in the end, that's not my thing, that's not my script!"

"However, the basic logic of the script and the basic result of the story are determined by you, senior sister, and we just supplement and improve them." Kazuya said with some struggle.

"But, this still doesn't belong to me, this is your script, Kazuya-kun! This is your script, you brought this game script of mine to life that looks dead, if this script is my daughter, then my daughter is almost dead from the beginning, and you are the one responsible for picking her up and rescuing her, you know? Kazuya-kun? ”

"Senior sister?"

"I'm a creator, I don't want my original intentions to be tarnished, even if it's someone I believe in, even if it's someone I approve of, a creator can't allow his own things to be changed by others, especially when others change it, it seems to be better than the original! It's a bit ironic," Shi Yu smiled dismally.

"So, I'm sorry, this club may not need me anymore!"

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The quality of these chapters should be improved slowly, and sure enough, the quality can be improved a lot without quantitative pressure.

And,Although I'm not good at writing this kind of slightly sadistic emotional plot.,But I really feel that it's not perfect without this kind of scene.,Of course, the specific psychological condition of the senior sister will continue to be explained clearly.,Above.。