Although it's not the first time that Machida's editors have used that kind of retreat-style reminder in a way that is similar to kidnapping, but,Every time this state still makes Kasumigaoka Shiyu a little unbearable.,Although it is said that people will show unusual combat effectiveness when they are in a desperate situation.,But,If this "desperate situation" lasts too long,,It will only lead to an overdraft of one's own combat power.。

And Shiyu is now on the verge of overdraft, although she has barely completed the first draft of the novel and the initial revision, but Shiyu herself can feel that, at least in terms of quality, the content of the second half of her novel is really not very satisfactory.

However, Shiyu couldn't care so much anymore, and used this somewhat unsatisfactory manuscript to hand in first, and she still escaped from Machida's control.

In fact, Shiyu doesn't know why she's been in such a bad state lately, obviously after Kazuya completed the task of writing the game script together, the burden on her body has been much lighter. Of course, when she first started writing her new work, her thinking was indeed clear, but this situation did not last long, and soon, she entered a low ebb for some inexplicable reasons.

Of course, for this, Machida editor comforted himself like this: "Xiaoshi, you don't have to worry too much, after all, the content you want to write this time is a campus style with a slightly different style, and this kind of transformation must be a little confusing for you, but as long as you keep writing, you won't find it very difficult to find the feeling." ”

Out of trust in the editor, who had been happy to work with him, Shiba followed the advice of Machida's editors and continued to persevere, although it did feel that it became more comfortable in the writing process, but that kind of ease was only the ease of the specific style at the operational level, not the kind of inspiration that poured out.

And this reminds her of the scene when she wrote the script with Kazuya not long ago, when although the things she wrote deviated from her favorite aspects to a certain extent, the inspiration was constantly pouring out, and it was in this situation that Kazuya felt that the speed burst out.

Ever since she delivered the manuscript for the last volume of "Love Metronome", Shiyu's novel writing has been in a hazy state, and she has never been able to grasp that feeling of writing, which is why she decided to join in the first place when she heard about the child's play of Kazuya and Ryoya.

In her opinion, maybe writing different types of things like game scripts can help her find inspiration, and in fact, she seems to have found that creative state, but she didn't expect that when she returned to the novel, she still felt that the feeling of having grasped at a certain moment flew away.

There is a vague consciousness in Shiyu's ambiguity, and she feels that the existence of possible and also is a great incentive for her, but this is also a point that she will never admit, in her opinion, if she admits this, then she will not become a girl with no independent ability at all? This is something that Shiyu can't admit.

But the more she denies this situation, the easier it is for Shiyu to think of Kazuya when she is having difficulty writing, although Shiyu knows that guy is very bad and his personality is not so good, and many times it will give her a feeling of frustration, but when she is with him, it is a feeling when someone of the same status is together, which will weaken the irritability in her heart.

So, when she learned from Machida that Kazuya only expressed the most basic concern about her disappearance, and there was no further action, Shiyu's irritability rose to the peak, and if she could maintain her level in the first half of the novel, she felt that she was making up the word count in the second half of the content.

Although she knew that such a thing would definitely not be approved by the editor, and even if it was approved by the editor, her own perfectionist character would not allow such a poor work to be published, but Shiyu still handed over the manuscript to Machida, her purpose was simple, to get out of this state first, and then go to the guy to question it.

Obviously, when I was writing with him, I wrote quite a satisfactory work, but now it is such a cold look!

As for what to ask, Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't have a clear answer in her heart, she just felt a little dissatisfied with the other party's indifference to herself.

It's a must, isn't it? Obviously, not long ago, I was a senior who worked hard together, but after I had no use value, I kicked this old woman away? It's not that easy to kick me away!

Shiyu thinks so.,So,Even if she doesn't know the exact time when she comes out of a hotel room that always maintains a kind of brightness,Her first target is the audiovisual classroom of Toyonosaki Gakuen.。

Of course, Kasumigaoka Shiyu feels that she is still relatively lucky, because everyone in the club is there except herself, which also means that her arrival happens to be the time for club activities.

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And the sudden appearance of Kasumigaoka Shiyu really caused a little turmoil among the other people in the community who were busy with their own affairs, after all, everyone seemed to have adapted to Shiyu's non-existence, and they were used to leaving her the exclusive seat in the back row where no one sat even though it was necessary. The appearance of Shiyu himself, who broke this peace, also made everyone suddenly feel that this community had become complete again.

"Shiyu senior? I think you didn't come to school today, huh? Lun also helped his eyes on the bridge of his nose and said in shock.

"That's right, I'm still rushing to the editor's deadline in the morning, but now that it's done, I want to come here to take a look, how is the work going?" Shi Yu suddenly felt that after not appearing in this classroom for a long time, she was like a stranger in the classroom, although the people in front of her were all very familiar, but she had no idea what everyone was doing, even to what extent the work was going, which also made her feel a sense of alienation.

"Well, it's going well," Lun Ye's head lowered, obviously Shi Yu's sudden appearance made him not know how to deal with it, whether to tell Shi Yu immediately that everyone had revised the script, or hide it for a while, and let Shi Yu find out about this matter himself, "That, how is the senior's novel?" ”

Lunya tried to change the subject, and at the same time glanced at Kazuya on the other end, trying to get Kazuya to tell him what to do next.

"The novel, it's just so-so, although it is estimated that it will have to be revised, but it should be no problem to catch up with the release date." Shi Yu obviously didn't want everyone to know that his novel was actually just a little bit of improvisation.

As a result, the two of them, each with a ghost, did not dare to look into each other's eyes, which also made Shiyu's return, which should have been an important and happy thing in the community, into a very strange and embarrassing atmosphere.

"Well, then seniors have to come on!" Looking at Lun Ye's eyes asking for help, although Kazuya didn't know what to do for a while, he still took the initiative to resolve the embarrassment.

And then, looking at Shi Yu's evasive expression, he also made up his mind: "I must not let Senior Sister Shi Yu find out all this by herself, I must take the initiative to admit it to her, whether she accepts it or not, I will directly tell her this, the necessity of revising her script." ”

Kazuya raised his head, nodded to Lun on the other side, and said resolutely: "By the way, Senior Sister Shiyu, Lun Ye has basically completed the script writing, do you want to try it?" Of course, there are still a lot of music and pictures that are not added, and it may just be a pure reading text selection option. ”

"Huh? Done, huh? The efficiency of Ethics is really high! Shi Yu nodded as if he had just woken up from a dream, looked at Kazuya who took the initiative to speak to him, and said in a little panic, "Ah, if I let me play, I don't need it, after all, I wrote it myself, and I still know the ending or something!" ”

"But you still have to try it out to know if it's good or not, right? Senior sister can try Lunye's game, more people play, in order to find more game violations, and then find bugs, and then solve it! ”

"That's right, anyway, I really don't have anything to do now," Shi Yu looked at Kazuya, who was patiently persuading him a little differently, nodded, and said, "Then I'll play for a while." ”

"Well, Lunye, take it out and let the senior sister try it!" Kazuya nodded, took a deep breath, and said.

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For the game script itself, which should have been re-written by Lun, everyone else in the community has already tried it.,It shouldn't be a big problem in terms of gameplay.,But maybe it's because the illustration work of Ying Lili hasn't been fully completed.,Maybe it's because Michiru's music hasn't been matched.,So even if the script is modified.,The whole game still feels like a decent feeling.。

So, although Kazuya's main purpose is to make Shiba aware of the changes to the script by playing the game herself, in fact, Kazuya also has an idea that she wants Kasumigaoka Shiba to discover some other aspects of the game through her perspective as a writer.

Of course, Kazuya definitely doesn't want to admit that it's their changes to the script that create a lack of gameplay and storytelling, which he does his best to avoid.

Shiyu's game progress is very smooth, after all, the entire script is the result of her own creation, judging from her strategy for the glass line, she should be familiar with the road.

However, the relaxed appearance at the beginning slowly changed, and Shi Yu's gaze continued to become solemn.

And of course I know why.,Because of the common line at the beginning and the first few options to enter the glass line.,And he didn't make too many changes.,The situation he made changes was a lot of additions to other plots and the enrichment of the bad-end plot when the other options were wrong.,So at the beginning, when Shi Yu chose the right option,,These problems will not be exposed.。

But,It's different in the middle of the game.,In Shiyu's script,When you enter a heroine's personal route, you only need to choose the right one of the most critical options.,The later options, although they seem confusing.,But it's basically the kind of meaningless confusing option.,Anyone can easily make the one that seems to need a choice.,In fact, it's the only decision.,That is, in this aspect,It's the biggest adjustment that Kazuya makes.。 And Shi Yu is obviously aware of the situation where someone has changed his choice.

However, with Kasumigaoka Shiyu's acuity, she could clearly feel that Kazuya's approach had improved the gameplay, so although she realized that the game might be developing in an unfamiliar direction for herself, she continued to play patiently.

And he also knows,The next final unfolding,It will be the most surprising point for Shi Yu.,That's because,In a sense,The only ending that belongs to the glass line of Shi Yu has been changed by and.,In order to enhance the gameplay,And also set up the two endings of the glass lineTE and GE,And according to the different options before,And the change in favorability of Weiyang、Xunli and others,Depending on the situation, there will be two endings about the glass.,One is the GE left by the glass.,The other is the TE that the glass eventually disappeared. , and the latter is the ending of Shiyu, and the former is the original ending of Kazuya.

As for the hidden harem line ending, you can only do it after clearing all the endings.

If Shiyu can choose all the way to TE, maybe she won't find too many problems, but in the process of watching Shiyu play the game, Kazuya can also notice that Shiyu doesn't seem to care too much about the difference between the options, which also makes it halfway through, Kazuya has already understood that Shiyu will eventually enter the ending of GE, an ending that will be liked by many other players, but not so satisfying to Shiyu.

Sure enough, when the scene of "Liuli resurrected" appeared in the conversation of the day after tomorrow in the picture, Shiyu was stunned.

For the first time, she turned her head to look at Kazuya, and with a somewhat sour and bitter tone, she spoke: "Wait a minute, Kazuya-kun, can you show me the script when you wrote the script?" Like, something unexpected happened! ”

Kazuya nodded silently and handed the script that Lun had already prepared on the side to Shiyu.

And Shi Yu, after quickly scanning the script, said a little hoarsely: "When I was away, you guys seem to have really done a big project!" ”