Although the big words were released, both Lun and Kazuya knew that it was definitely not an easy task to complete this task of revising the script without the guidance of Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

And this is very clear to him, but he deeply remembers that Shi Yu completed twice his script task in much less time than himself, and the speed of a person like him who has written a lot of things has still been completely blown up by Shi Yu, so it is the first time to write, not to mention the speed of Lun Ye, who has no experience and no reliable teacher to guide him.

"So how often do we aim to complete new script revisions?" Same as when he worked with Shiyu, Kazuya and Lun also divided labor, but this time it was Kazuya who took the lead, and he alone undertook the modification of three independent female lines - Weiyang Line, Liuli Line and Patrol Glass Line, and Lun Ye's task was to enrich the plots of other branch characters.

"I think it's better to do it as soon as possible, right? After all, the original painting on the pear side is still waiting to be revised, and it takes a lot of time to modify the script, so it would be best if it could be completed within a week! Lun also said a little dumbfounded at the computer screen.

For Ryonya, it's not that he doesn't know what he wants to write, in fact, before Kato proposes to let him and Kazuya take responsibility for revising the script, he already has a vague sense of wanting to revise it himself, and he also has a rough estimate of the plot of many side scripts.

However, thinking about the plot in his head is not the same as writing it concretely, especially before writing, when he is aware of many problems with other people's writing, and wants to avoid and correct similar problems. On the other hand, although he has read the script countless times, he is still far inferior to Kazuya, who created the script with Shiyu, for what he wanted to express in the script itself.

Therefore, compared to Kazuya, who started working while inquiring about the progress, the progress of Lunye's side is really not optimistic.

"Can't you? Sure enough, at the beginning, let me directly create a rich plot.,It's too reluctant.,If there's only one or two lines.,I can still try it hard.,But at the same time, I want to write the tsundere childhood sweetheart line.、My sister's girlfriend line.、Some natural school sister lines.、The partner lines of other clubs so many branch characters are written with enough cute points.,It's too early for me.。 ”

Finally, after two hours of no progress, Lun still sighed heavily, "Although there are several specific strategy plots of side characters that can be added in the form of Finaldisk, but if these characters don't have cute points at the beginning, they won't attract players, and the follow-up finaldisk will be useless!" ”

This situation reminds Len of his situation when he first wrote the plan for this game, when he couldn't write a single word, but the current situation is completely different from the situation at that time, when it was procrastination when the inspiration was very vague, and now, for Lenya, it is the feeling of fear of the consequences of his failure when he is full of inspiration.

"Can't you write it?" glanced at Lun Ye, whose face was flushed, and turned his head a little worriedly, in fact, his state is not very good, although he will feel more relaxed when he revises the script of the Weiyang line he is responsible for.

However, when he thought of the different options for modifying the glaze line and the patrol line in the later stage, he couldn't help but be a little apprehensive, because he knew that, especially the character of the glaze, Shi Yu had put a lot of effort into it, and if his modification was not successful, it would not only be the result of the unsuccessful game, but also the achievement of Kasumigaoka Shiyu directly.

However, in the current situation, it is clear that the problem of Lun is more important.

"There's no way, although I've worked hard, but when I think that if I can't write well, it may lead to the failure of the whole game, and I can't use the pen under this pressure!" Lun also said dejectedly, apparently this was his real and frustrated idea.

"Don't be too nervous, right? In the end, Aragaki and Kasumigaoka-sani will check for you, so you just need to create! Kato said with some comfort, but apparently it didn't play any role in the recovery of Ryiya's form.

"I think so too, but at least you shouldn't add an extra burden to Kazuya and Shiyu, especially Kazuya, if Senpai can't lift the retreat for a long time, then the task of reviewing the manuscript may have to be handed over to you, right? It's not that I'm worried about you, but after all, you don't have the ability of Senior Sister Shiyu? Lun also tapped on the keyboard with some pain, and secretly looked at Kazuya and said, after all, what he said might indeed be a little hurtful.

Of course, Kazuya didn't realize this at all, he just nodded and said, "That's right, I really don't have the ability of a senior sister, but if you don't work hard to write, I won't have a chance to review!" ”

"Okay, I'll do my best!" Lun also glanced at Kazuya, who also had a somewhat unpleasant face, sighed heavily, and said.

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After reluctantly comforting Lunye, the two continued to work, of course, the audio-visual classroom is naturally not a place where people can work all night, and after a simple tidying up, the work location of the three of them was transferred to Lunye's home.

As for why it wasn't Kazuya's home that should be more spacious, it was because Kazuya was a little worried about bringing some unnecessary trouble to Ayase.

Of course, why did Kato join with the two, and Kazuya didn't care about these things, but the natural trust in Kato made him feel that Kato would definitely handle some logistical work.

Of course, this logistical handling includes not only the provision of dinner and supper, but also some notices to the family.

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"So, is it possible that my brother won't come back today?" Ayase, who received Kato's call, held the microphone tightly in his hand and said with a somewhat complicated face.

"I'm sorry, Ayase, there's an important problem on the club's side, so Aragaki has to stay here to solve it!" Kato also said apologetically to Ayase. If there is a person who Kato can't deal with so well, that person is probably Ayase, although he has maintained a good relationship with Ayase before, but the conscious deception of Ayase before still makes Kato always maintain a sense of guilt towards Ayase.

Therefore, even if he tried to avoid this kind of feeling, Kato subconsciously lowered his posture in a conversation with Ayase.

"Actually, it's nothing.,If it's the club of Sister Hui and her brother.,Is it the club that Anyi's predecessor founded to make games?" After Ayase found out about his situation, Kazuya also told Ayase about his work at Blessing-Software, and of course, he also told Ayase the true meaning of the so-called "Bishoujo Game".

It's just that, in order not to disgust Ayase, he just told her that this is an all-age dating simulation game, and he didn't confess to Ayase about the 18 forbidden clips that may appear in this kind of game. So, although she is a little scornful of this kind of virtual love game, Ayase still understands the real situation of this kind of thing.

"That's right, it's just that there's a little bit of a problem with the game's script, so Aragaki is working hard to revise it."

"But, if I'm not mistaken," Ayase's voice said with a hint of confusion evidently in her voice, "The script of the game should be in charge of that Kasumigaoka-san, right?" And my brother is just the person in charge of the implementation and coordination in this community, so there is no need for him to accompany Kasumigaoka Senpai to supervise at all times, right? ”

Although Ayase's words were polite, there was still a dissatisfaction with the inability to return to Kato, and this feeling was also detected by Kato.

"That's right," Kato wanted to explain with a little headache, and then she realized that it would not be easy to explain all these things to Ayase, and in the end, she still said the situation succinctly, "The current situation is that Kasumigaoka-sani can't revise the script, and the production time is relatively tight, so I can only let Aragaki-san, who has experience in writing novels, work hard." ”

"I see," although this answer was not too satisfying, Ayase could feel that Kato on the other end of the phone was not lying, and gently agreed, Ayase said, "So, if my brother doesn't come back, will Megumi also stay at Senior Yasui's side?" ”

"What's this?" Kato didn't know if it was because she was too sensitive, but now that she was not so confident in front of Ayase, she still suspected Ayase's motive for asking now, so, by mistake, she couldn't help but tell a small lie, "I'll prepare a little dinner for the two of them and go back, after all, I'm useless here, and it may interfere with their writing ideas." ”

Of course, in fact, Kato had already called home and expressed the idea that he might not go back, and her family, as usual, agreed to her request.

"Okay, but if I don't take care of it, I'm still a little worried! Especially the senior An Yi, I still remember the last time my brother stayed with him for a night, nothing good happened, this time they can't get it and stay up all night again, that will seriously affect rest and study, right? Not to mention, if he is not in good spirits, it is likely to affect his afternoon football training. ”

"Aragaki has taken a leave of absence from training, but I don't think you should have to worry about that, after all, they have plenty of time this time, so they should still sleep on time." Kato looked at Kazuya and Ryonya, who were obviously preparing for the night, and comforted Ayase with some helplessness.

"Okay? Then please ask Senior Sister Hui to take care of her brother more? Receiving Kato's reassuring reply, Ayase surprisingly did not dwell too much on the issue and simply replied.

"Well, Ayase, you don't have to worry about it! I'll take care of him. ”

"Okay, so that's it?" Ayase chuckled softly and put down the phone.

"OK, Ayase, you pay attention to yourself too."

Ayase's last chuckle always made Kato feel that something was wrong, and after thinking about it for a long time, she gasped a little: What do you mean to trouble me to take care of Kazuya more? I told her I was going back, huh?

"Kato, what's wrong, I've worked hard for you, there's no problem with Ayase, right?" Noticing that Kato had hung up the phone, Kazuya's words interjected and interrupted Kato's thinking.

"Ah, it's not a big problem, but you'll have to be beaten by Ayase when you go back, I think Aragaki-san, your parents are your sister and not your parents?" Kato quickly switched states, made a more relaxed and normal expression, and said.

"Well, this can't be helped, my parents may just trust me too much? After all, when I was unconscious, I was consumed when I was a child, right? So in order to help me, Ayase can only play the role of this so-called overseer? Kazuya smiled a little helplessly.

"Okay." Listening to Kazuya's somewhat ridiculous answer, Kato nodded, walked out of the door of Ryonya's room, and prepared to prepare dinner, "By the way, Yasui-san, where is your kitchen?" ”

And Kato, who slowly focused his mind on the preparation of dinner, shook his head and exuded the doubt in his heart: Don't worry, it's definitely just an illusion after your own weak heart, after all, how could a gentle girl like Ayase think so much?

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Of course, what Kato didn't expect was that on the other end of the phone, Ayase, who had already put down the phone, was stunned for a long time with a somewhat pale face:

That's right, Senior Sister Hui lied to me again, last time it was like this, this time it was also a lie, if you just want to stay and take care of the two boys, this is normal, but why did Senior Sister Hui lie to me again? Why, on the issue of her brother, Senior Sister Hui became so dishonest?

Why lie? It shows that Senior Sister Hui is nervous about me, but why should she be nervous about me? Even if the two of them become a couple, there's no need to be nervous about me, isn't it? Unless, Senior Sister Hui thinks that I like my brother, not the kind of love of brothers and sisters, but the kind of love of men and women?

Is this a joke? How could I possibly have that kind of thought?

But, is there really none?

Ayase looked at her hands in a bit of a daze, and for the first time hesitated a little on this question.

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Jun Tat, the author who has been making a death ambush, has finally taken the title seriously for a long time.