Chapter 169: It is the teacher's practice to casually arrest disciples as laborers

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Although Kazuya and Kato have reluctantly started work with their efforts, Lunya's state has obviously not changed much, and in the process of writing together, Kazuya can often see Lunya's somewhat startled posture and somewhat exaggerated expression.

Although I don't know what the normal state of Lunya was when he wrote, although I also knew that similar Kasumigaoka Shiyu would go crazy like Lunya after putting into the creative state, but no matter how you look at it, Lunya's state is not like Shiyu's state.

Because, some of Shi Yu's crazy actions are aimed at specific characters in the script or novel, and she burst out of this trait after substituting herself into the feelings of the characters in the novel, and Lun is obviously different, for a day, the most nagging words in his mouth should be "No, it's not enough to write like this", or "It could be better, no, it could be better".

Although excellence is a good thing, it obviously needs to be built on the basis that excellence is helpful to creation, and this kind of "excellence" of Lunya has not played any positive role at all, according to Kato, who has somewhat casually swept through Lunya's "discarded" articles, the content of the script affirmed by Lunya and the content of the script that was denied by Lunya are not much different from her point of view.

Although Kato is not an overly professional gamer, her views should at least represent the views of a considerable number of ordinary people, so Kazuya is sure that Ryūya is not getting out of his dead horns now, but should be getting deeper and deeper.

"If this state continues, it is basically impossible to complete the creation of the script on time!" Looking at Lunya's not-so-pleasing state, Kazuya lamented, and in this way, he had to try to think of an alternative.

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The so-called alternative,Naturally, increase the number of people who write the script,Although everyone comes to write the script, it will inevitably cause the uneven level of the script,But in Kazuya's view,It's like painting during animation creation.,If the level of the painting director is high enough,Then as long as all the original paintings are not too bad.,Can't be modified.,Then in the end, you can still give a decent good painting.。

The same is true for current game scripts, if the person in charge of reviewing the script can determine the general direction of the script and then revise the script, then it doesn't matter if the person in charge of writing the script at the beginning is not so high.

Of course, this definitely refers not to the script of the three female lines, but to the lines of all the secondary heroines that Lun is responsible for, and it can be seen from Lunya's own words that he seems to have expressed a deep fear that one person is responsible for four branch lines, thinking that he can only accept the modification of two lines at most, so it's very simple, as long as you find another person to be in charge of the other two lines, that's fine.

And the content of the side heroine is actually not much.,Even if there are some flaws.,I won't care too much about the player.,And part of the plot of this branch line can be constantly revised and improved.,Finally,The side part of the plot is related to the main line.,The part that supplements the main line.,You can also decide by yourself.,And then give it to the other party to write.。 So, in fact, the modification of the side heroine is much simpler than the content of the main story.

And Lun is so difficult about this task purely because he himself has fallen into that situation of being too self-demanding, and in his current state, he cannot get out of this situation unless he is asked to give up on his own.

So for Kazuya, it is inevitable to quickly find someone else to help Lunya write the side plot.

Of course, it is impossible to pull a random person to write the script, otherwise, Megumi Kato, who has been working half soy sauce and half logistics next to the two of them, is the best choice.

First of all, this person must have sufficient experience in galgame games, and be familiar with various plots and the more common content in galgames; Secondly, it is better for this person to have good writing experience, after all, it is difficult to get started with the dialogue and psychological description of script writing without writing experience.

Actually, at this time, the conclusion has already come out, that is Kirino Takasaka! As the guide of Kazuya on the sister galgame,Although and I'm not sure if Kirino has played other types of galgame,But at least the younger sister,Or someone like my sister's best friend,It should be Kirino involved.,For the lines and behaviors of these two types of characters,She shouldn't be too unfamiliar.。

What's more, the rare Kirino has a background in writing novels, and, although I haven't read Kirino novels, but even if the plot is nonsense, Kirino writes novels, and the novel will definitely have dialogues and psychological descriptions, with this foundation, the content of other scripts can be completely supplemented by Kazuya himself.

However, when Kazuya called Kirino with great interest, he got Kirino refusing in exchange.

"I'm sorry, Kazuya, it's not like I don't want to help! But you know, I'm very busy right now! By the way, did Ayase tell you that I've been writing a mobile phone novel recently, and I'll tell you, the number of hits on my novel is already very high, for the sake of novel creation-"

"I'm sorry, Ayase didn't tell me this, you probably didn't tell her, right? If it's really for the sake of your friendship, I think it's better for you to tell her! She's been sad lately that you've snubbed her by thinking you've made other new friends online! ”

"Eh, is that so?" Kirino's voice was obviously a little excited, but she didn't care about Kazuya's somewhat dry dissatisfaction and complaints, "Anyway, thank you for telling me this, I'll explain it to Ayase, but you also know, my current mobile phone novel has become more and more popular, and it took me a lot of time to update the novel every day, so I'm very interested in the script or something!" But we'll have to see if I'm free in the future! Sorry! ”

"Ahh Kazuya hung up the phone with some indignation, and said dissatisfiedly, although he did expect that Kirino might refuse his help for the sake of the mobile novel, but he didn't expect to be rejected so simply, "How much of your reconciliation with Ayase is also my effort, okay?" Why don't you have the slightest desire to repay your kindness? ”

Of course, I think that unconsciously, I don't seem to have one-on-one contact with Kirino for a while, on the one hand, because I promised Ayase that I would no longer have private relationships with Kirino in private, and on the other hand, because it seems that Kirino himself has been busy writing this mobile phone novel recently. And in the case of no contact for so long, as soon as I opened my mouth, I asked the other party to help, and it was this kind of work that was not so easy, and this kind of invitation did seem to be a bit excessive, thinking of this, Kazuya's heart relaxed a little.

"Oh, by the way, Kazuya, do you have any good material for writing a novel or something, if you can provide it to me? What's going on around you? I don't know much about this situation of you boys, and I said-" On the other end of the phone, Kirino was still a little excited, although this was much better than her usual somewhat arrogant appearance, but Kirino in this state had to sigh: It's very fatal for girls to be in trouble!

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In the end, after dealing with Kirino in turn wanting to ask Kazuya, Kazuya's Takasaka Kirino abduction and help plan was also put on hold.

"So, who else is next?"

It was at this time that Kazuya received an email: "Master, when is the next novel writing instruction?" Hinata and Juki are going to an event this weekend, and I don't have to take care of them on the weekend, is it okay this weekend? ”

"Well, it's up to you! Black Catmon! Kazuya's eyes suddenly lit up, who said there was no one left, isn't this a coincidence, is there a person in front of him who has come to the door?

It's normal for black cats not to be in Kazuya's consideration at first, after all, the "toxic" novels of black cats have left a deep impression on Kazuya, so subconsciously, Kazuya has already put black cats into the list of people who can't write novels.

However, if you think about it carefully, this evaluation is quite unfair to Black Cat, and he is more or less a person who has written a lot of novels and submitted countless manuscripts to magazines, so at least from the perspective of daring to write, Black Cat's self-confidence is not lacking, and from this point of view, Black Cat has surpassed An Yilun, who is now very worried about his script.

Secondly, the black cat is a very stubborn character who will never admit defeat easily, and she will still put in a lot of effort for what she wants to do, so even if her script is not well written, she will not give up because of Kazuya's blow or two, but will keep revising and strengthening.

Finally,This is also a little bit of the situation that can be revealed from the black cat's previous novel.,In terms of the emotional content that he's not good at,Black cat is particularly good at imitation.,Although this kind of imitation will seem very clumsy in the novel.,But in galgame's script creation,Some necessary similar bridges are indispensable.,And black cat's familiarity and imitation of these contents in this regard,It's quite a self-taught taste.。

Therefore, to sum up, such a black cat, which may still be a blank sheet of paper and has quite strong plasticity, can be as close as possible to the existing style of Kazuya and Shiyu in creation, and work together to create unexpected value for the writing of the script.

In a sense, the black cat is actually more suitable than Kirino, because Kirino has formed his own habitual style in the process of writing, and it is a little difficult for Kazuya to adapt to Shiyu's delicate literary style, and it is even more difficult for Kirino's Mary Sue style to adapt to Kazuya's script with Shiyu. But the black cat is different, the black cat is now in the stage of self-correction, which also means that she can imitate it.

"Come to my side now, there is a great opportunity for you to exercise you, seize the opportunity!" Thinking so, Kazuya quickly replied to the black cat with an email.

And soon, the black cat's reply came, and it could be seen that although she was a little hesitant at the beginning, the pie that Motsufila Kazuya drew for her was really tempting, so she quickly stepped on it: "Okay, wait a minute, I'll make dinner for my sisters and come over!" ”

"OK, I'm waiting for you in front of the game store you often go to!" Kazuya replied to an email with some excitement. Some secretly shouted softly happily: "There is a helper!" ”

"Got a helper?" Although the voice was very soft, Kazuya's somewhat excited appearance made Kato catch it squarely, "Could it be that Kasumigaoka-senpai is back?" ”

"Of course not, if Senior Sister Shiyu comes back, it won't be a simple problem with helpers, but a problem of not worrying about it at all, right?" Kazuya made a joke and said with some excitement, "It's okay, although this guy's strength is not so good, but it's convenient because she really wants to improve, so it doesn't matter if you can try your best to squeeze her potential!" ”

"She? Is it a girl? Lun also asked with some surprise, "Is it going to sea, no, the painting of going to sea is really good, but writing scripts is completely two fields, and going to sea is not as reliable as Yingli pear!" ”

"Then only guys like you have a relatively small circle of otaku, so I only know so many people, but I still know other people!" Kazuya showed off a little unexpectedly, "You shouldn't have seen this person, but Kato should have an impression, right?" ”

"Is it Ayase's best friend, the object of the falling out, a girl named Kirino?"

"Actually, it's close, in her circle, you'll understand when the time comes! Don't worry, that guy is learning fiction writing from me right now, so don't worry! ”

Kato nodded slightly, obviously, mentioning this, she also remembered the existence of the black cat, after all, the black cat's gothic loli costume left a deep impression.

"Anyway, I hope to have a reliable person, right?" Lun also said a little exhausted, "I may really not be the material for writing the script!" ”

"No problem! She's also been writing fan fiction for a long time! Kazuya said with a sly smile.

Of course, there are other things he thinks in his heart that he didn't let Lun know, which is also another role that the black cat can play, that is, let Lun also realize that even a girl in the third grade of junior high school can create without fear, and the things created may not be as good as Lun Ye, so, as a self-proclaimed home, Lun himself who often comments on the blog, why can't he do better than that person?

Sometimes, only after comparison can you gain fighting spirit and self-confidence! Kazuya thought secretly.