The black cat's appearance made Kazuya obviously a little surprised, although the primary purpose of calling the black cat over was to stimulate Lun Ye, so that Lun also had the motivation and confidence to start writing, but the problem was that while stimulating Lun Ye, he didn't want to fight the black cat at the same time.

After all, in Kazuya's opinion, the black cat should not be the kind of girl who is easily frustrated, because whether it is himself, Kirino, or even Ayase, they have all criticized her novels mercilessly, so this time, although he expected that the black cat's script would basically be severely criticized by Lunya, but considering the black cat's psychological endurance and the psychological expectation of writing the script for the first time, he still felt that the black cat should be fine.

Therefore, when the black cat cried out loud, Kazuya was obviously a little stunned.

Of course, Kazuya was not the only one who was stunned, the real "culprit" that made the black cat sad, An Yilun, showed a bitter gourd face, and obviously felt a trace of incredulity and incomprehension. As for him, he didn't mean to blame the girl in front of him at all, he just talked about things, and felt very dissatisfied with the script of the black cat, which is not uncommon when he comments on other games or novels while updating his blog online.

But what he didn't expect at all was that pointing out other people's problems in person would look completely different from when he was in the virtual space. Therefore, looking at his own words, although he looked like the second class was full of breath, but he was still relatively gentle, the girl he just met made him cry, and Lun was also confused, and he didn't know what to do at all.

Of course, fortunately, in addition to the two men in the room who were surprised by the black cat's state, there was also a woman who was more good at adjusting the atmosphere and emotions, and at the moment when the black cat cried, Kato stood up, like a hen guarding a calf, and pulled the black cat who was sitting between the two boys and bearing the stinging gaze of the two boys, and was crying, behind him, and said with some dissatisfaction: "Hey, you two, how can you talk so heavily to the fifth student?" She's younger than you, after all! ”

"Well, the accusatory words are not what I said - okay forget it, I was wrong!" Kazuya habitually wanted to refute it, but looking at Kato's frowning brow and the somewhat penetrating look cast at him, he wisely closed his mouth.

And Lun on the other side, although he didn't understand the specific situation, he was obviously much smarter than Heye, raised his hands high, and made an apologetic appearance, at least having an attitude, which is much better than not admitting his mistakes, isn't it?

"Okay, let's calm down the fifth more senior sister, Aragaki san, you should have thought of this when you asked her to come over to help! Why don't you think about the mood of the girl? After a slight glance at the script in front of the black cat's computer screen, Kato roughly understood the problem, and glanced at Kazuya with a little dissatisfaction, and said.

"I really didn't expect her to do this!" Kazuya lowered his head in some frustration.

"You guy, sometimes you overestimate the reaction of others, and sometimes you underestimate the reaction of others." Looking at Kazuya with an apologetic face, Kato also shook his head helplessly and stopped talking.

"But ah, although you must be very upset when you say this," it was at this moment that Lun also raised his hand a little cautiously and said, "But this girl's script will definitely not pass, and it will take a lot of time to revise it when the time comes, and the workload will be no less than rewriting it, right?" ”

"I also know that she can't get by, but she can at least write a lot of lines, which will reduce the workload a little bit!" Kazuya shook his head and said, "I called her over at the beginning to let her experience how big a gap there is between her current level and her actual real problem, so I don't expect her to be able to successfully write the script." ”

"So Aragaki san, you're still taking it for granted!" Kato looked at Kazuya and shook his head gently.

"Huh? What's wrong? Kazuya didn't understand Kato's words, and turned his head to look at Kato, but at this time, he noticed another face with long straight black hair appearing in front of him.

I don't know when it started, the black cat had wiped the tears from his face and stood in front of him with a determined expression: "Who said I can't do it?" ”

Looking at the black cat's determined look, Kazuya scratched his head and said: "Although your confidence and determination are very good, but you have also seen that your first draft was approved by Lun Ye just now, which is no longer a simple level that needs to be revised, but a degree that needs to be completely rewritten!" As I said before, this time I asked you to write the script so that you could see the gap. ”

After a pause, Kazuya continued: "Look, if it's my or Kirino's comment, maybe it's a comment from someone you know, and it will take care of your mood to some extent, but Lun is this guy, and he won't save face for anyone for his own game, so his evaluation just now should be said to be the best evaluation of your current writing ability, of course, writing game scripts is different from writing novels, and the scenes that make you write this kind of emotion are also different from those battle scenes that you are used to writing, but after all, they are all creations in this aspect." There are still some things to figure out, and you have a lot of problems at the beginning, so these problems need to be revised slowly. ”

"But this kind of slow revision takes time and a lot of practice, right?" The black cat retorted unceremoniously.

"That's right—"

"Then this time the script writing is almost as good as an exercise for me to write a proposition essay," the black cat said firmly, "Now you and the bespectacled senior—"

"Well, I remember that I have already introduced myself, my name is An Yilunye."

"Well, it seems that neither you nor Senior An Yi have time to be responsible for the content of this part now, so the content of this part is equivalent to stagnation, so I'll just rewrite the script for this part, right? Write until you're satisfied, and if you're not satisfied, when you're done with the work at hand, you can write it yourself, and if you're satisfied, doesn't that save you time? ”

"But," Kazuya showed a surprised expression, "but you know, although you say that it's okay to do this, you have to be mentally prepared for your script to be rejected again and again?" Just now, Lun also had such a low evaluation of you, you are so frustrated, if the next time your revision is still rejected by us, don't you have to be even more sad? ”

"I was sad just now because I felt that I had given so much and was evaluated as worthless by Senior An Yi, but now I understand that I can't write something valuable right away, and if I don't have that talent, I have to rely on constant practice. It's impossible to rewrite a novel for the same novel, but you can do it by writing a shorter screenplay, so this is a rare opportunity for me to practice the same subject matter repeatedly! ”

Obviously, although she was a little dissatisfied with Kazuya's behavior of pulling her to make up the numbers at first, the black cat had also realized Kazuya's approach this time, and a little crookedly sent her an opportunity to improve herself better.

"Aragaki-san, you can actually let her give it a try!" Kato interjected.

"Actually, I don't think there's a problem, right?" Kazuya looked at Lun Ye with a little headache and said, "Lun Ye, what do you think, the girl who was criticized by you is ready to challenge again!" ”

Before Lun Ye could answer, the black cat was a little anxious and preemptively said, obviously she also realized that it was Lun Ye who decided the work of this club so far: "Like I said just now, I'm not wasting manuscript paper, so even if I can't succeed, I won't delay your time!" Just let me give it a try! ”

"Well, although your current level may still need a lot of room for improvement to meet my satisfaction!" Lun also stared at the black cat's pitch-black eyes for a long time, and finally spread his hands and said, "But okay, let's trust you once!" Anyway, it's true that I have nothing to lose. ”

"So, I'll be in charge of the review, right? After all, if Senior Sister Shiyu doesn't come back in the end, all the scripts still need to be unified by my side in the end. ”

"No problem! Hmph, then let you see my true strength, I hid my strength just now! "The black cat has completely lost the frustration of the same mood just now, and has been replaced by a high fighting spirit!

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Of course, only fighting spirit is not enough, and improving opinions is also a very difficult thing, and the black cat is also deeply aware of this under the kind of merciless criticism of Kazuya.

First Draft:

"What are you writing about? You don't have the ability to create this aspect of things on your own right now.,Although Lun was complaining just now that you let you write your own things.,It's not for you to completely copy the bridges of other galgames.,But you're not going to make the things on my plot outline completely your own, right? Do you know that you have to consider the relevance of this branch to other branches, otherwise what's the use of me giving you an outline, you can just make up a story yourself, right? ”

Second draft:

"Although the choice of words and sentences is still too blunt, but this is not an important issue of sin, the most important problem is that, just like I said last time in your novel, you still forcibly add some discordant passages to your plot, but you have to realize that if we can read the sense of disobedience, others will also be able to see it, so you have to think carefully about how these passages are matched, so that they can appear more natural and show better results."

Third Draft:

"The previous problem is still there, but it's much better, write slowly, don't be in such a hurry!"

Although every time the black cat's script writing was mercilessly dismissed, the black cat still used her amazing speed and super patience to challenge the challenger again and again, and Kazuya had to be surprised to find that although the overall was still not up to standard, but the black cat's script has become more and more presentable, and in Kazuya's opinion, the content of the last part, if it is a student club's somewhat casual homemade galgame, it can be completely adopted.

But,And also understand,Lunye's blessing-software to do the game,It's not just a slapstick game of a student club.,The so-called "strongest beautiful girl game",It's not just an empty slogan that Lun also shouted.,It's the real idea.,So this thing that can barely be called a script of the black cat is still completely unqualified.。

But Black Cat's performance was good enough, and her speed was as efficient as ever, and although the side script she wrote was a relatively brief rough draft, it was also an amazing achievement that she was able to write three drafts in six hours from 5 p.m. to 11 p.m. in one night.

You know,Even Lun, who has regained his energy,This night only wrote a basic manuscript in a straight line.,Black Cat's writing,Purely in terms of speed,It's already surpassed the peak of Kazuya.,There is the speed when Xiang Kasumigaoka Shiyu's usual writing mode is turned on.,Only this.,Let Lun also have to admire.。

"It's 11 o'clock! It can't go on any longer. Kazuya looked at the time on his phone and shook his head.

"No problem, right? Just stay here like you did yesterday, right? Lun, who was still unsatisfied, also raised his head a little strangely.

"Yesterday was fine, but today is not okay, right?" And the black cat, who had already been a little unable to open his eyes because of the energy spent too much energy on writing, pouted, and said, "There were only a few of us yesterday, and there is this guy today!" Do you think her family would be comfortable with her staying overnight at a strange boy's house? ”

"It's not a stranger, is it?"

"Aragaki means that the family of the fifth watch sister doesn't know you after all, so they definitely won't agree, and now it is estimated that the curfew time of their house should have passed, right?" Kato interjected and added that during the writing of the three of them, Kato had been silently watching the situation as a nutritional supplement, and he didn't know how many times he had eaten the snacks or supper sent by Kato in the past few hours, but it was delicious.

"No problem, I used to sleep less when I used to stay up late to write novels!" Unexpectedly, the black cat raised its hand high, expressing its desire to continue writing.

"No, your family will have to worry about it next!" Kazuya mercilessly smashed a chestnut on the black cat's head and said.

"So, let's go home today! If it continues at this speed, even if the senior sister doesn't come back, it will be too late. I'll send this child home first. Kazuya stood up, then picked up the black cat that was already a little drooping, and finally thought about it and carried the black cat on his body with the help of Kato, and said.

"Alright! Then I will continue to work hard tomorrow! In addition, you can also call this girl tomorrow, her progress is really obvious, maybe it will really be able to help! Obviously, although he scoffed at the level of the black cat at first, this kind of hard work and progress of the black cat was still recognized by Lunye.

"OK, I'll see you tomorrow."

Kazuya leaned the black cat that was already asleep against his back and said, and then, he saw Kato's figure following closely behind him.

"I still don't think it's safe for Aragaki to send the fifth watch back alone, it's better to follow you! Besides, I also promised Ayase to take care of you. ”

"Uh, this, when did I become such an unreassuring person!"

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Recently, the book review area has raised various bugs in the article.,My opinion on this matter is,You just try to talk about the problem.,Most of the problems are things I didn't think of.,So,I may not be able to explain it.。

As for what this plot is talking about, please read a few more chapters patiently, and it should be clearer within five chapters