For the improvement of her novel writing level,Black Cat has been working hard to seek progress,Especially after Kirino showed off to herself the creative process of her mobile phone novel,But,She also knows,Although there is a lot of room for improvement,But it seems that the speed of improvement is not very fast,This also makes her feel very distressed。

And Kazuya, the so-called "master", although it seems that he is trying very hard to help himself, but the results are indeed a little too weak, although Kazuya told her some of the problems in his novel, but except for simple modifications, he did not find an obvious way to improve himself.

Therefore, when revising the novel and writing the novel, the black cat can only pay extra attention not to let himself use too many words with unclear meaning when fighting, and at the same time, constantly delete his own set draft, so that a huge world view is slowly revealed.

However, for the black cat, these practices are very painful, because, whenever she thinks of the battle scene, she thinks that the most handsome thing is the noun of those skills that make people feel a little unclear, although Kazuya scoffs at this, thinking that this is an obvious manifestation of the middle two, but the black cat has never seen it this way, so for this modification proposed by Kazuya, she often has a feeling that she can't use it if she deletes these things, and Kazuya didn't tell her how to deal with this situation, which made her really a little depressed，

Another example is the long setting draft, although she is also aware that the setting is too complicated and will discourage other people's enthusiasm to read, but in the specific deletion process, the black cat will always feel that every setting is necessary, and if you don't explain it clearly, there is no way for people to read her own articles, which will make her feel guilty about strangling her own children. Similarly, for this state, Kazuya's method is still a bit simple and crude, and no plan is proposed to satisfy the black cat.

However, the black cat didn't blame Kazuya for all these problems, she knew that although Kazuya's approach was a bit oversimplified, the problems he pointed out were all right, not only Kazuya, but Kirino also often laughed at her about these problems. Therefore, in the eyes of Black Cat, only hard work, only self-improvement that spends a lot of time, is the best way to solve the problem.

So, that's why Black Cat was so excited when she learned that Kazuya had chosen a weekend time to train her, which meant extra time for guided practice!

Although, when she followed Kazuya to Lunye's house for the first time, she was obviously a little apprehensive when she saw Lunya's house all over the floor and the not-so-tidy room, as well as the game script in front of her.

It's not that the black cat doesn't trust and also, but any girl, when she wants to go to a strange place alone, especially when this strange place is still the home of someone she doesn't know, she will definitely have some unease. Although at the first glance of Lunye's room, she basically decided that this guy should be just a harmless consumer dolphin, but even so, she didn't take it too lightly.

Of course, when she saw Kato Megumi who nodded at her with a smile in Ryonya's room, her nervousness was still a lot more relaxed, although her relationship with Kato was limited to that summer comi, but in the limited conversation, the black cat could still feel the trusting aura on Kato's body, so seeing Kato Megumi was equivalent to solving more than half of the problem for her.

However, although Lun is also relieved, Black Cat is still not so relieved about the script in front of him.

"Are you going to ask me to write the script for the galgame?" Although it's just a general glance at the script, of course, the sensitive black cat can find out what the task of the so-called "special training" is, "But this is basically a love story, right?,Although there are some battle scenes in it.,But the emotional line is still the main line.,It's not appropriate for me to write it, right?" ”

"Ahem," Kazuya coughed and said, "I thought about it for a while, and I think that although it is better for you to use things in your own field when writing the novels you want to submit for publication, in other aspects, you can still try the so-called emotional plot, after all, in the end, if you want to write down and write famous, it is impossible to create a pure combat plot, or you have to add a certain degree of emotional drama, so it is not a big deal for you to start exercising from now on, Especially with something like this script, it's certainly great for you to practice. ”

Of course, Kazuya won't say that the main purpose of pulling the black cat over is to let her solve the problem of lack of manpower, but the reason he barely thought of should be passable, although the black cat obviously showed an expression that didn't trust him so much, but in the end he nodded and looked at the script.

"I roughly understand what you're asking for, but these scripts should be complete scripts, right? The plots before and after are relatively complete, do you mean for me to expand them a little bit more? ”

"That's right, that's right, you have to know that although these side scripts are simple, the amount of text is not small, and it is from the pen of the current light novel writer Xia Shizi, so it must be much easier for you to create rich creations based on the above things!"

"Kasumiko's work? I've never heard of Kasumi Shiko writing game scripts for people before," the black cat frowned, "Well, forget it, it's not strange to think that you guys still know someone like Kashiwagi-sensei, and it's not very strange to know a real person like Kasumiko." It's just that Teacher Xia Shizi's better script, will it be too wasteful for me to use it as a practice work? ”

"It's okay, it's okay!" Kazuya shook his head and said, "In the end, Teacher Xia Shizi and I will definitely review it together, and besides, we have an archive of the original manuscript, so you can write something now and see, maybe you accidentally have a talent for script creation in galgame!" After all, galgame wants to write a complete story, and you have to think about the creation of the subsequent plot of the novel. ”

“OK！ I understood," of course, the black cat's character is still quite bold in this regard, although it was true that she was a little apprehensive because of Kasumiko's name and the various pressures of writing a script for the first time, but after getting Kazuya's affirmation of "It's okay, you can destroy the original work to your heart's content, it's okay", she still started work with great interest.

And her kind of nature is in stark contrast to the sweaty and painful Lun on the side.

"Almost, although I don't expect the black cat to write a wonderful script, but no matter what the result is, it is enough to stimulate Lun Ye, if her script is relatively poor, then let Lun also know that even people who write bad scripts are so confident, why are you so unconfident; If her script is unexpectedly good, then she can use the radical method, how can a guy who can't even compare to a fifteen-year-old girl still call himself a senior otaku! Kazuya wiped the sweat from his forehead, looked at the results of his fooling of the black cat, and said secretly.

"Aragaki-san, your own script, no problem, right?" Just when Kazuya was proud of his foresight, Kato's voice came.

"It's over! My workload is the biggest one! And thinking of this, Kazuya realized that this is the most annoying thing!

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In fact, the writing speed of the black cat is not slow at all, probably because there is no experience in game script creation before, which makes the black cat let go of his hands and feet, although the typing speed is obviously not as good as the other two, but the progress of her script writing can be described as a feeling that a newborn calf is not afraid of tigers, and it is progressing rapidly, so that the people on the side who are revising the plot of the patrol and the plot of the glass are also a little sighing.

"Well, Master," sure enough, after a while, the black cat pointed to his computer screen and said to He Ye with some invitation, "Let's take a look at my current achievements first?" The first time I'm writing about these things, it's better for you to read them first. ”

"So, then, let me make a move!" Kazuya secretly thought, although he felt a little sorry for using the black cat as a person who stimulated Lunye, but so far, Lun may still be a more reliable combat power than the black cat, so Kazuya continued, "Lunye, I don't have enough time now, why don't you come and help the black cat?" ”

"Eh, me?" Lun also raised his head a little anxiously, glanced at Kazuya's unquestionable gaze, and finally sighed, stood up, and came to the black cat's computer.

Although he did work in his house, looking at this person who had been completely immersed in his own script writing since he entered the house, except for the initial self-introduction and relief of the gestures, the black cat obviously showed a trace of uneasiness, and at the same time that Lun also leaned over, her body also leaned behind her.

Lunya's room is small, only a bed and a small table, and the rest of the place is occupied by his various comics, novels, and game disc boxes, and there are four people gathered in such a small room, and some physical contact will inevitably occur, and the black cat's retreat almost sticks his back to Kazuya's body.

Although this kind of physical contact is not abnormal, she still blushes a little the moment she touches Kazuya's back, after all, for a black cat, it is rare to come into contact with other men of the same age, and to be so close to them, it is definitely an experience that overwhelms her.

But even Kazuya, who has already entered his own state, obviously doesn't take this kind of thing seriously, and Len is just very carefully looking at the script of this person who is helping his game and also recommends, and doesn't care that he has been close to the black cat a little too close.

So the black cat just shrunk up a little embarrassed, and while trying to lean towards Kazuya, the person she felt more familiar with, she stretched her neck a little to see how Lunya, who looked like a senior otaku, on the other side, commented on her.

And the expression on Lun Ye's face obviously became a little weird, at first he was in a state of careful reading, then his face became red, and finally he looked away helplessly.

Just when the black cat was worried about the expression on Lun Ye's face, Lun Ye finally spit out a few words heavily: "How can you be so bad!" ”

didn't care about the black cat's face, which immediately became a little crying, Lun also jumped up, grabbed Kazuya's neckline, and shouted out Kazuya who was writing with some excitement, and shouted out angrily: "Please, Kazuya, after you said that you found someone who has been writing fan fiction for a long time, I still think you found a great god?" That's the guy you're looking for now? Do you take our game seriously? ”

didn't wait for him to refute.,Lun Ye's crazy complaint continued: "The words are basically smooth.,But the content of the feelings is obviously too blunt.,Although it's still necessary to learn from the necessary bridges.,But all of this guy's things don't have their own things in them.,It's completely just a copy of the content of other galgames!" Of course, it's good that she can do this, but if she is such a person, she can do it by finding someone with a good memory! What kind of writer do you want? ”

"Is that so, I think you're inferior to her!" Looking at Lunya, who was a little crazy, Kazuya said casually.

"What did you say?"

"That's right, then, An Yilun, do you think you write better than her? At least people dare to write, dare to write her kind of less mature things, and then revise and improve, you can only be timid, do you think you do better than her? The black cat has at least written the finished product, but you can only live by commenting on others! "This is the purpose of Kazuya looking for the black cat, so in the face of Lunye's somewhat excited reaction, he also has a strategy to deal with it.

"Really? Then let's take a look! What is the real strength of An Yilun, if you can't even compare to such a guy's things, then my game review blog for so many years has been done in vain! As Kazuya expected, after hearing his words, Lun Ye immediately ignited his fighting spirit, waved his fists with some excitement, and shouted.

"Well, we're going to have to talk to the other guy!"

Looking at Lunye, who had already ignited his fighting spirit because of his simple exclamation, Kazuya turned his head to the black cat next to him who still had a dull gaze: "How is it?" What do you think of this evaluation of him? ”

And the black cat looked at Kazuya in a daze for a long time, and suddenly cried out with a "wow".

"Emma, although I'm really going to stimulate her with Lunye's evaluation, I won't cry!" Looking at the appearance of the black cat, Kazuya was also obviously stunned, and he didn't know what to do at all.

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All in all,In the next few chapters,,You may see a variety of scenes of character collapse.,Especially the black cat.,After all, I haven't seen my sister for a long time.,I don't have an impression of the black cat except for the attributes of the middle two and the little tsundere.,And then I'm not so good at writing the second lines.,In short, Ayase's image collapse can still be explained by being affected by and also.,If the image of the black cat collapses,Well, it's all the fault of the world!

And, after 500 recommendations, there will be more changes, and there will be two changes tomorrow.