Chapter 26: I am only responsible for execution, not decision-making
"Done?" Ryanya, who had just recovered from a serious illness, looked at Kazuya with an excited face, Shiyu who was calm and calm, Ying Li Li who was relieved, and, uh, the normal Kato asked suspiciously.
"Yes, it's over, you know the god-level hand speed of Senior Sister Shiyu when she has creative inspiration, right?,But I still didn't expect it to be done in one night.,One night.,Such a thick setting book.,Such a thick plot text.,I have to copy it for three days and three nights even if I copy it.。 looked at Shiyu with admiration, and Kazuya's eyes showed only admiration, this guy, as a writer, is definitely qualified, or rather, has reached the height of more than just a simple creator.
"And Ye-kun, you don't have to praise me so much, the inspiration is still thanks to you, if this script passes, should we find a bar or something to indulge in, and then do something we love to do?" staring at Kazuya for a long time, Shiyu routinely said some ** words.
"Don't," bored and white like the other party, and also chose to refuse, recently, he has figured out the bottom line of Shi Yu's **, and the words can be said very much**, but in the end, it must be rounded out in a serious way, therefore, and also decisively chose to ignore Shi Yu's**, "In addition, you are too confident, although everyone thinks your script is very well written, but Lun hasn't read it yet, he is the one who makes the decision!" ”
"Hey, let's delay the announcement of my liberation for another half hour!" Shiyu replied confidently, and it could be seen that she was very confident in her script, after all, when she showed it to the rest of the club before, everyone recognized how touching the story was.
"Sure enough, only then can you remember that I am the person in charge!" With tears streaming down his face, Len also looked speechlessly at the guys in the club who regarded him as the second Akarin after Kato.
Kasumigaoka Shiha's Doujin Game Plan (1st Edition)
Roles: Three main characters, with two or three more heroines scheduled to be added.
Protagonist (this life): Seiji Nitta (16 years old)
Transfer Students. His parents divorced and lived with his father, but because his father went abroad, he temporarily moved to his mother's house to live with his sister, and because of family reasons, he had a calm but lazy personality. In fact, it is just the adopted son of Mr. and Mrs. Nitta.
Protagonist (previous life): Bingshuangzhen (18 years old)
Seiji's previous life (de facto great-grandfather) had a rigorous personality and a strong sense of responsibility
Actress No. 1 (this life): Ye Xunli (16 years old)
High school sophomore. It's a quiet and inconspicuous type.,It's a beautiful girl when you look closely.。
Heroine No. 1 (previous life): Bing Liuli (12 years old)
Patrol Glass's past life (great-grandmother). Shuangzhen's own sister. Frail and sickly, fair-skinned, and truly in love with his brother Shuangzhen.
Actress No. 2 (this life): Miyo Nitta (14 years old)
Seiji's younger sister.,It's not a real sister.,It's just a righteous sister.。 The personable Yamato Nadeshiko has a strong obsession with her brother and is prone to falling into hysteria under special circumstances.
Heroine No. 2 (previous life): Yi Zhenfan (14 years old)
Weiyang's previous life (great-grandmother), Shuangzhen's former lover, loved Shuangzhen deeply, but was finally forced to assassinate Shuangzhen due to family reasons, and gave up at the last moment when the assassination was about to succeed.
Synopsis:
The main character, Seiji, moves to the home of his mother and sister who have been separated for a long time because his father has been transferred overseas. He was very happy to see his mother and sister again, and his sister was happy to see her brother again after a long absence.
When he gets lost near the cherry blossom tree ramp near his home, Seiji meets a local girl and is impressed by the girl.
Seiji, who transferred to another school, reunites with the girl in the class. Her name is Ye Xunli.
One day, Seiji and Patrol happened to walk together on their way home. They passed the cherry blossom tree ramp.
Seiji talks about when the two met, but Hirori says it's a "reunion".
When parting, Xunli muttered, "Good night, brother." ”
After a few weeks, the two confirmed each other's hearts and became a couple.
However, this move was fiercely opposed by Seiji's sister Weiyang, who did everything to prevent Seiji from dating with Xunli, and for this reason, she made a series of radical actions, such as tying Seiji to the bed and preventing him from getting up to go to school, or following Seiji to prevent him from coming into contact with Senri when Seiji was in school, and she monitored Seiji's every move to prevent him from going off the rails.
Puzzled by this, Xunli decided to talk directly to Weiyang to solve the conflict, but after the conversation, the two sides did not solve the problem, and at the same time, Xunli himself also had a series of changes.
The degree of attachment to Seiji deepened, and the inexplicable sense of familiarity and jealousy of Weiyang, as well as the sense of fear, and most importantly, the memory of the era before he was born.
It seems that in Xunli's heart, there is another self.
The change in Weiyang is also obvious, the obsession with Seiji, the psychology of trying to give up everything and be with Seiji, is often hindered by an inexplicable shadow, that shadow brings Weiyang further love for Seiji, but also further apologies. Whenever Weiyang tries to solve the problem in a radical way, and is most with Seiji, the shadow in her heart will have a feeling of remorse and a rational veto.
And with the retrospective memory, the two heroines finally remembered the past affection and the grievances and hatreds between the clansmen.
Seiji and the exterminators of the Patrol Clan still exist in this city. And the existence and restraint of Xunli is to prevent the truth from being leaked out. And Weiyang, the descendants of the enemies who exterminated them, the existence of Weiyang, is aimed at solving the remnants of the last Seiji and the Xunli clan.
Whenever Xunli or Weiyang reminisced about the past, incredible things would appear around the three of them.
Repeatedly encountering life crises, Seiji decided to protect his lover and his loved ones, and in the process of constantly recalling the past, Weiyang finally chose to give up his mission, chose to betray his family, and fought with Seiji and Xunli, and the three decided to fight together against the heavy historical burden that had oppressed them and forced them.
Xunli and Weiyang completely awakened their memories and found out the truth of the incident.
Seiji interferes with the actions of the past and "creates" new memories in the past.
After a battle, the crisis is gone, but Weiyang dies because of the curse on his back due to betraying his family, Seiji and Xunli...... No, it was Shuangzhen and Liuli who finally became Lian Li after seventy years in front of the tombs of Weiyang and Zhenfan.
"We'll have to be together in the future, brother! We want to live, and we will live happily together for the sake of the real sail. ”
Although it's not the first time I've seen this fanfic project book of Kasumigaoka Shiyu,But Kazuya still left tears for Shiyu's superb storytelling skills.,Although it's a triangular relationship on the surface.,But it's actually a complex hexagonal relationship plot.,But under Shiyu's well-organized narration,And also didn't feel any complications in the plot.,I have to let Kazuya sigh at Shiyu's outstanding creative ability.,And the strong ideation ability in that beautiful head.。
"If I have to say, this proposal is, indeed, very good. At least I have a basic grasp of the personalities of several female characters, and it shouldn't be difficult for me to make a character design based on this project. This is the first time to read this manuscript of Ying Lili's evaluation, you know, for Ying Lili, who regards Shi Yu as a strong competitor and the first object of each other's mouths, this evaluation basically means that she is convinced by Shi Yu.
Of course, there is another person in the club who has also seen it, but he also can't remember her evaluation clearly, and can only sigh that the other party is so inconspicuous even when he evaluates.
Therefore, this project has basically been recognized by everyone, and the rest is the decision of Ahn Yelun, who is the president, director and general manager.
However, after listening to Kazuya's reading, Lunya lowered his head and didn't speak for a long time.
"That, Lunya, according to your request, isn't the plan written? Do you give an opinion or something? Nod yes shake head? What do you think? Kazuya thought that Ryū would be thrilled to see the project, but in the face of this project, which moved the self-proclaimed sanity of a fellow creator, Ryū did not show the fanatical attitude of seeing his destiny in the past, as Kazuya expected, which made Kazuya really feel a little surprised.
"It's a very good plan." After hesitating for a long time, Lun also spit out such a sentence, but the hesitant feeling in the words made everyone present feel very clearly.
"Are you worried that this project is too fanciful? It's okay.,We're a fan game.,Not a commercial game.,This kind of whimsical plot development will surprise buyers! Kazuya tried to explain.
Looking at Lunye, who was still unconscious, Yingli Li also joined the ranks of persuasion: "That, Lunya, from the perspective of my illustration, this project is very clear, and it can make me clearly grasp the character and character image of the project, but it's rare!" And from the perspective of a senior otaku who has participated in many fandom exhibitions,The poisonous points in this,It's just the poisonous points of commercial games.,It's a highlight for the same people! ”
"Yes, yes," looking at the addition of Ying Lili, Kazuya also echoed, "What are you worried about, in the end Weiyang died, it doesn't matter, even if it's a commercial game, the heroine dies or something, and in the end you can earn enough tears to earn word of mouth, not to mention our kind of fangame.,Death is also a kind of shocking beauty.,It's also a healing spirit.,The world needs this kind of thing to heal!" As he spoke, Kazuya suddenly felt that he was persuading while remembering the teachings of his former master, and felt that what he said made sense.
"You're right, Senior Sister's project, it will be very attractive to make, it will definitely be very attractive, this is my conclusion as a consumer dolphin and fanatical house, I must be okay if I say so, it must be no problem!" Rather than denying Kazuya and Eiriri's inferences, Lun further strengthened their views.
"So, you mean passed?" Kazuya breathed a sigh of relief.
"Sorry, it's going to take me a while to draw conclusions." But Lun still vaguely did not give a definite answer.
"So, why?" After handing over the manuscript, Shi Yu, who was full of confidence, finally couldn't help but interject at this time.
"Uh, this ......" Lun also showed a hesitant expression, intuitively, he saw the attraction of this work, but also intuitively, he felt the flaws of this work, but he couldn't find that sense of disobedience for a while.
"Anyway, Kazuya, you can watch it a few more times! I think from your point of view, from the perspective of our fellow male gamers, you can definitely see the problem with this project, or even if you can't see the problem, you will find that it makes people applaud and feel a little regretful! Slightly helpless, he handed the plan to Kazuya to print the manuscript neatly, and Len reluctantly said this.
"Even if you say so, I'm just in charge of execution, and you say that I want to interfere in the decision-making process!" Kazuya helped his head a little helplessly, not knowing what to do.
"That's good, you read this project three times, and if you think it's okay after you've finished reading it, I'll agree to make it!" Lun also seemed to be a little shaken, but he still insisted that Kazuya reread the plan.
"Kazuya-kun, so be it, Taki-kun also said, the decision is in your hands, make it or not, it's all up to you! I trust your vision! Shiyu's eyes focused on Kazuya, staring at Kazuya tightly and said.
"Kazuya, Lun also said so, you should decide quickly, look at it, don't grind and chirp, don't think of yourself as a thorough production execution, think of yourself as a producer!" Ying Lili's urging words also came over.
"Okay, then I'll decide!" Looking at the other three who completely handed over the decision to themselves, Kazuya suddenly felt that the pressure on his body had increased.
After reading it for the first time
"This, sure enough, this is a good script, I won't get tired of reading it a few times, I can't wait for Senior Sister Shiyu to perfect it." Kazuya's attitude has not changed, and he is still full of enthusiasm for the script.
After reading it for the second time
"The script is good, it's good, and if it is made into a game, it will be attractive, well, if it can be made into a game." This time, there was a bit of hesitation.
After reading it for the third time
Kazuya was silent and silent, he suddenly understood the mood of Lun Ye just now, the kind of longing to see the script written successfully, but there was a voice in his head that was always vetoing, and Kazuya realized that awkward feeling.
"Kazuya-kun, what is your conclusion?" Looking at the last time after reading the plan, the silent Kazuya, Shiyu's tone brought a sense of impatience for the first time, and at the same time, different from the confident ** tone in the past, this time, there was a slightly uncertain hesitation, and the seriousness of cheering up.
"This, my conclusion is," looking into Shiyu's eyes, Kazuya wanted to dodge for a while, but in the end, he still looked straight at the other party and replied, "My conclusion is, shelving, this project, can't start production directly!" ”
"Kazuya,I knew you would understand my feelings.,I know.,That kind of disobedience that is also a male galgame player.,You must be able to feel it.,There's definitely a problem.,I just don't know about this problem for the time being.,Right!" Lunye's words of finding a confidant reached Kazuya's ears, but Lun also immediately stopped talking, even Lunya, a person who didn't care about Sanyuan, realized the bleak aura between Shiyu and Kazuya at this moment.
"So, I've been dumped again?" Shiyu stared at Kazuya's eyes and asked in a tone that seemed to be ** but serious.
"Well, they're two different things! Sister, there must be something wrong with your project, I will definitely be able to tell you! He also understood a little what Shi Yu was talking about, but he still chose to avoid the important and light.
"Is it?,Last time it was for my sister.,This time it's for Taki-kun.,So,And also-kun still like the childhood sweetheart type instead of the heavenly descending system, right?" Shi Yu's sentence is more direct, piercing Kazuya's heart.
"This, Senior Sister, Senior Sister Shiyu, are you joking!" Shi Yu's straight ball, so that and a little unable to find the north, if according to the normal understanding, Xia no Qiu Shi Yu's words are enough to make him reverie, but Shi Yu's previous performance made him a little unable to grasp the truth.
"yes, I'm kidding!" Staring at Kazuya for a moment with an elusive and complex expression, Shiyu raised his head and chuckled.
"Well, well, I believe it anyway." Kazuya thought about it carefully, and didn't feel that what he did when he offended Shi Yu was as serious as "getting rid of her", on the one hand, it was also to paralyze himself, so he finally chose to believe Shi Yu's words.
"Well, I'll wait for your revisions, Kazuya-kun, Taki-kun, don't let me down!" Shi Yu stood up and left the audio-visual classroom, leaving behind a gust of incense.
"You two unconscious guys, the work of the character has to be stopped again!" Ying Lili also stared at Kazuya dissatisfiedly, and stood up, "I'm annoyed, I'll go back first, if I can't be a person, I'll go back and draw a book first!" ”
In the end, Kazuya and Lunya, who were left behind, could only look at each other helplessly.
"Kazuya, although I am very grateful for your support, but this situation is not very good for you," Lun also glanced at Kazuya carefully, if it was usual, in this case, he would definitely not give up taking this opportunity to let Kazuya escape into the empty door of the second dimension, but this time, he wisely chose not to mention it.
"What can I do? I don't know if I said this based on my feelings, which made them so dissatisfied. Kazuya spread his hands and sighed helplessly, "Let's take a step and see a step!" ”
"Arnold, can today's club activities be over?" A soft voice suddenly came from the corner of the classroom.
"Kato, you've been there!" Kazuya and Ryū also realized that there seems to be another person in this five-person club in the audio-visual classroom, who has not been affected by this dull environment, Megumi Kato, or the guy who is ignored by everyone, but makes everyone feel at ease.
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Today's update is sent.,Personally, I think the core of this chapter lies in this script.,Actually, it's to add a heroine to the original script.,Of course, the follow-up plot will definitely have to be changed after it's written.,After the visual inspection is changed, it's definitely not as neat as Marudo himself.,But copying is definitely not good.。 In addition, it's time to start rounding the emotional line of the senior sister.,That's it.,Meow.。