Private only to see, and then private is now revising the previous chapters. Although what science fiction classmates say is also reasonable, sometimes complaining is a feeling, and the feeling can't be stopped.

But it may be that the private writing is not enough, for the grasp of some plots and characters' words and deeds, if you don't complain, you feel that the expression is not clear enough and not comprehensive enough. If you complain, it will make everyone feel like a play. The little sci-fi classmate said that if you put the spit at the end, you may be able to try it.

As for changing the spit to a mental description, some of the spit will not match the image of the protagonist, and I usually put it in the narration or brackets for such complaints.

Ah, I want to explain here that the parentheses like [] in this book are the description of the protagonist's mental activities, and the parentheses like () are generally the complaints of the private himself.

And then about the identity of the protagonist, it seems that he didn't say that Seamus was a traverser, nor did he say that he was indigenous, right? So leave a suspense for everyone, you might as well guess it. I like to dig holes for people.

Then the little sci-fi San, "There are some things that you don't need to know too much, and your illusions will be broken by me." "This is my brother (it feels awkward to use the words of "private brother" here, and the words of "private Ernie sauce" make private feel too disgusting) asked private to relay it to you.

Thank you and everyone for your support!

There is also a good news announcement, the private book has been signed, so the "mood more" mentioned before is invalid, and it will have to be updated every day in the future, at least 600,000 words will not be over before. From today on, he is a writer who contracts with Dian Niang, and is oppressed and exploited by Dian Niang.

Although the elder brother is a dirty guest, although the old brother is a dirty customer, although the old brother is a dirty customer, but I want to compare with him who has better grades. That's right, he's also a writer, but he's always a eunuch, I wish him an early eunuch in the book now, and then come over to "work" for private people, hahahaha.

Minnasan, you're going to help yourself, right?

(My brother and private talked about the correct usage of "work-related", but will anyone read it?) I suspect that →_→, obviously at the time of creation, no one paid attention to my brother's "work-related". ）