"I think it's good, it doesn't seem like a big deal. Pen %Fun %Pavilion www.biquge.info"

When he said this, Bao Shuai looked constipated, and his voice was very low, not to check Xu Yi's expression, as if a child who had made a mistake was handed over to the office by the teacher.

Xu Yi nodded.

He understands Bao Shuai's mentality very well.

I was like this when I was a newcomer, and I always felt that what I wrote was the best, so many newcomers always felt that no one was looking at it.

After a few seconds of silence, Xu Yi said, "You can take a good look at it again." Don't put yourself in the reader's position, try to put yourself in the reader's position, if you were a reader, would you choose to read such a book? ”

As he spoke, Xu Yi opened the works on the same list, "Look at this book again, if the two books are put together, which one will you choose to read?" ”

"But, I don't want to write such a small thing, things like this are rotten on the street, what's the point of writing?"

Although Bao Shuai is a little convinced of Xu Yi now, it is only the door to him that he has just been able to say so many online articles, but in his heart, he doesn't care about what others write at all.

"So what are you writing for? For the reader, or for yourself? Xu Yi asked, "Say something unpleasant, when the table = don't set up the archway, if you show yourself, don't care about the data, if you are for others to see, hope to get the recognition of others, you have to be humble." ”

He can understand Bao Shuai because he knows that Bao Shuai is at the bottleneck of the rookie period.

However, understanding is understanding, this does not mean that he will want Bao Shuai to be empty-eyed.

Let go of your posture and you can get something.

In his previous life, it took Xu Yi seven years to understand this truth, and he didn't want Bao Shuai to spend seven years to understand it, in fact, all newcomers who walked long in the bottleneck period rarely really because they couldn't imitate.

On the contrary, they disdain imitation.

Just like Bao Shuai is now, on the one hand, he is entangled in his miserable data, and on the other hand, he feels that those who are better than his own data write garbage.

Bao Shuai stared at the web page in pain.

It is very simple, but it is very difficult to develop self-appreciation.

Especially for a newcomer who is in a bottleneck like Bao Shuai, the more he talks about it, the more confused he will become.

The time has not yet come.

He won't force it either.

Thinking about it, Xu Yi stood up, "I'll go get some drinks, what are you drinking?" ”

"Whatever."

Bao Shuai smiled bitterly at Xu Yi.

In the living room, mahjong has ended, and a group of people are sitting on the carpet discussing children's education.

"Son, come here."

Xu Zhanming beckoned to Xu Yi.

"What are you playing with Shuai Shuai in the study?"

As soon as Xu Yi sat down, Xu Zhanming asked.

"Nothing, read novels."

"Look at this bastard boy, you have to hold your phone to read a novel at any time," Guo Xiaomei was like a cat whose tail had been stepped on, and her eyebrows suddenly stood up in anger.

"Second sister, don't be angry, the child at this time is like this, rebellious." Xu Zhanming touched Xu Yi's head, his eyes full of pride.

Looking at his father's expression, Xu Yi felt bitter in his heart.

His rebellious period did come a little later.

In his previous life, until he graduated from junior high school, rebellion was a noun in his dictionary, but after he went to college, everyone else began to obey his parents, but he began to rebel.

Thinking of the years when he used to always work against his parents, Xu Yi was a little unbearable.

"It would be nice if Shuai Shuai could be like Jiajia," Guo Xiaomei said enviously, "Even if Jiajia is rebellious, it is impossible to spend hundreds of yuan a month to read novels." ”

"A few hundred? Shuai Shuai's expenses are so big now? Guo Dong interjected.

"What do you think, but this kid is honest, he wants money if he asks for money, he has never lied, there is a child in our unit, and Shuai Shuai is half the age, and every time he asks for money, he has to lie."

Speaking of other people's lying children, Guo Xiaomei's eyes were full of smiles.

"Jiajia doesn't spend as much as handsome in high school now." Xu Zhanming's face was also full of pride, but he still looked at Xu Yi, "Son, you are an elder brother, but you have to persuade Shuai Shuai more." ”

"Jiajia, you are the most qualified person in this group of people to persuade the handsome."

"Why?" Xu Yi didn't understand Guo Dong's words.

"Didn't you say you wanted to be a writer before? Do you know what kind of speech is the most convincing? You are. ”

Afraid that Xu Yi would not understand, Guo Dong gave examples and listed celebrity deeds, and talked endlessly for a few minutes.

Xu Yi smiled but did not speak.

Among all the elders, Guo Dong is the most talented, and he is also one of the few elders who can get along with their juniors, but at the same time, Guo Dong is also a timid and extreme person.

Because of his earlier experience, Guo Dong did not believe in dreams.

Not only did he not believe it, but in his mind, those who said their dreams were stupid, and now Guo Dong was a civil servant, so he very much hoped that the juniors around him could also become civil servants.

And the one that can get closest to Guo Dong's training goal is Xu Yi.

Even if he is reincarnated, Xu Yi still remembers that when he was still in his first year of junior high school, he once used Guo Dong's computer to write the beginning of a martial arts novel.

At that time, he was no different from Bao Shuai, with poor writing and no ideas.

But what he is worse than Bao Shuai is that at that time, he didn't know what a USB flash drive was, nor did he know what a mailbox was, so he just put the manuscript on Guo Dong's computer.

However, Guo Dong deleted his manuscript without authorization after reading it, and added a password to the computer.

This matter is like a thorn, even if the edges and corners have been smoothed out by the baptism of time, but now whenever Xu Yi thinks about it, he feels uncomfortable.

Zizizizi.

The vibration of the cell phone intended the memory of the promise.

It's a piece of information.

In order to prevent parents from checking their text message box, Xu Yi set a password for the small mobile phone, and after entering the password, a message popped up: "You have a valid deposit of 20,000.00 for your xxxx card. ”

……

In the study, Bao Shuai received a penguin message from Master again, "Apprentice, brush Master again, hurry up, Master is about to be exploded-Ju!" ”

……

"Received Master"

"Swiped"

"Come on, Master, I have rewarded ten starting coins."

"It's brushed, come on Master."

In just a few minutes after the news was sent, Jiang Donghao received dozens of replies, and almost the entire group of apprentices began to bubble.

Although he didn't say anything, he still saw the familiar ID from the reward list.

As a reward, he promoted several faithful apprentices.

Looking at the ids that emerged one by one in the group, Jiang Donghao was full of pride.

What does it mean to be responsive?

What do you mean by where to hit where?

This is the proof!

Of course, this is not something that can be done in a short period of time.

In order to maintain the loyalty of his apprentices, he required them to be under the age of sixteen, have more than one year of writing experience, and need to recommend those who need guidance.

Although these children are small, they have a very high loyalty, and a little bit of pretending to be a big god in the group to give a lecture or something, you can make him convinced and obedient.

It was only at this time that he felt that he was a king.

crossed out the bubbling apprentices one by one in the notebook and added the corresponding points to them, Jiang Donghao began to chat privately with those apprentices who did not express anything.

Although he is also constantly improving the system and rules of the apprentice group, there are always some people who are unmoved.

However, he is not afraid.

As long as there are three times when they don't respond to the call, that person will be kicked out of the group.

Sixteen-year-olds are generally well controlled, especially in front of the great temptation of fame, so few will fail to respond to the call more than three times.

After sending messages to a few people who didn't brush the list in time, Jiang Donghao soon received a reply.

But I didn't receive a message from Bao Shuai.

Although Bao Shuai is not the main force in brushing the list, he is a big rewarder, and he can get more than 100 from Bao Shuai every month, but today, why don't you reply to the message?

Jiang Donghao didn't believe that Bao Shuai didn't receive it.

Ten minutes ago, Bao Shuai replied to his message, and Bao Shuai's avatar was also lit up.

Is something wrong?

Thinking about it, Jiang Donghao sent a message to Bao Shuai again.

A few minutes passed, and Bao Shuai still didn't reply to the message.

"Bao Shuai, did you see my message? Reply quickly when you see it, otherwise you will be deducted points. ”

"Don't post it anymore, I don't want to brush the list."

As soon as the message was sent, Bao Shuai was bubbling in the group.

"I'd love to ask you, do you think it's useful for us to brush like this?"

No one in the group responded, and Bao Shuai didn't bother to pay attention to it, and continued to write, "We've been with Master for a while, but what have we done? In addition to brushing the list, he is waiting for others to brush the list, and he has never examined his own problems. ”

"I really want to be famous, but I prefer that the way to become famous is not by means of swiping the list, I hope that what I see on my reward list is not a friendship reward, but a sincere reward from book friends."

"I'm sorry guys, I'm a little excited right now, that's all I have to say, if you think it's useful, then continue to brush, if you also want to really change, please think about it, I'll withdraw first."

"Finally, I would like to ask, is there any evidence for the writer to admit that he has swiped the list?"

[Group News: Bao Shuai quits Jiang Jiajun]

Kang Dong-ho was stupid.

Since he established the Jiang family's army, almost no one dared to really withdraw from the group.

But Bao Shuai dared to be the first to withdraw from the group.

And most importantly, what did he mean by those words? Questioning his strategy of brushing the list? Which god is not brushed out now? Do you really think that you can write it without brushing?

Although Bao Shuai withdrew from the group, Jiang Donghao still publicly stated in the group, and consolidated the idea that the gods were all brushed out again.

……

"I'll go, can you stop being so funny?"

The badass book friend group, [Confused Little Rascal] popped up, and at the same time put a screenshot in the group, which said "The list of writers is brushed" and a dialogue similar to "If you don't brush, you can't become a god".

"What's the situation?" [Laughing at the wind and clouds] also emerged.

"Baddies need to be brushed too?"

[Brother of the Eternal Night] is a newcomer who has not long joined the group.

didn't expect to see such explosive news as soon as he entered the group, he just asked casually, but he didn't expect that this sentence would become a disdainful mockery in the eyes of others in the group.

"Did he have a head on his ass? Confused little rascals, what kind of group is this? "[I'm the boss] came up.

"Jiang Jiajun." The confused little hooligan sent the group's business card, "At the beginning, I saw that the group owner advertised everywhere, and wrote hundreds of thousands of words, and then I joined the group." ”

"But who knows, this group of masters accepts apprentices everywhere to pull people into the group, and what do they say about the great gods to give lectures, and then encourage the apprentices to brush the list for him every day, saying what kind of list can become a god, I laughed and peed."

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