Speaking of his own works, Bao Shuai seemed full of confidence, "I decided to write a different fantasy, and I will never take Tang San's *** Xiaobai plot, if I want to write, I will write "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman". Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ”

Xu Yi smiled but did not speak.

If it were someone else, Bao Shuai's words just now would definitely enter Xu Yi's blacklist.

But Bao Shuai is his cousin.

Don't say anything else, let's just say that Bao Shuai's master, he doesn't know what he is, so because he accepted an apprentice and put up a name, he asked Bao Shuai to dig into his own pocket.

Or a few hundred a month?

In a family like Kong Chen, Xu Yi wouldn't say anything, but Bao Shuai's family background was obviously not like that.

In his previous life, he heard his grandmother say that his second brother-in-law had sheep epilepsy in 03 and couldn't work, and the whole family was supported by his second aunt, and for a while, even his grandmother would give money to his second aunt.

It is conceivable that the second aunt's family is not wealthy.

Bao Shuai is not small, even if the second aunt and the second aunt are reluctant to restrict him from spending money, but the money for brushing books alone is only a few hundred per month, which is really ignorant.

Xu Yi didn't dare to say anything else, but when it came to brushing the list, he definitely had the right to speak.

Seven years in the previous life.

What kind of means has he not tried?

But the answer given to him by reality was two words: useless!

Even if Bao Shuai can't realize that writing an essay requires a certain amount of perseverance, then at least he must recognize that the act of brushing the list itself is meaningless.

"What are you laughing at?"

"It's nothing, but your master brushes it like this, how many books does he have on the shelves?" Xu Yizheng asked.

Bao Shuai scratched his head a little embarrassed, "Not yet, but it's almost there, you go to the starting point public new book list to see, my master is now ranked fifth." ”

"That's useless, it's not garbage."

For Bao Shuai, Xu Yi may not have any cruel words, but for the bastard who cheated on Bao Shuai and said everywhere that he was on the list, he still needs to save face?

"It's not right for you to say that, brother, my master has two or three books that were brushed out like this, and he signed a contract after the book was now on the public new book list."

said so, but Bao Shuai didn't think so.

Anyway, Master has also written online articles for two or three years, but he doesn't know anything about Dian Niang?

He is still an apprentice, as long as he works for the master again, from an apprentice to a messenger, the master can guarantee that his book will be signed with Dian Niang.

When the time comes, he will be able to get the manuscript fee.

I thought so in my heart, but Bao Shuai didn't want to talk to Xu Yi about the rest of the matter.

Now, he just hopes that his cousin will leave soon.

Xu Yi actually wants to tell Bao Shuai that the public new book list is an ordinary list, which can only prove that your book has been liked by readers in the early stage, and it really doesn't matter if you sign a contract or not.

But looking at Bao Shuai's current attitude, he just can't listen to it at all.

Get.

This is the end of this topic.

Xu Yi smiled, "Shuai Shuai, then you can show me your master's book, I also want to see how good this book is." ”

"You want to see it?"

Xu Yi nodded.

When it comes to his own book, Bao Shuai is full of mystery written on his face, but when it comes to being written by others, Bao Shuai is not so stingy.

He quickly turned on the computer and flipped out a book called "Ma San's Happy Life" from the web page, and at the same time, he also let open half of the computer to Xu Yi.

"Judging from the title of the book, it is very straightforward, and it takes the route of urban life, giving people the feeling of farming, which can attract people," Xu Yi said without opening the book, as if talking to himself.

After speaking, he glanced at Bao Shuai with his spare eyes.

Bao Shuai smiled, and there was not much change in his expression.

"However, the introduction is not good," Xu Yi straightened up and pointed to the introduction above with an arrow, "You see, there are a lot of introductions, there is no primary or secondary, and I talked about a lot of them, and in the end even the ending was said, there was no suspense, and the layout was very messy, one sentence in the east and one sentence in the west, and the reader would have a headache when he read it." ”

Bao Shuai came up disapprovingly, "Introduction, don't you just talk about it." ”

"The introduction is not something to be said casually, although it has a small number of words, it serves as the reader's first impression of the book."

Saying that, Xu Yi found a few similar works from the webpage and opened, "You look at the introduction of the book, capable, with a small number of words, and then you look at the introduction of this book, although there are many, but the method of using narrative, the most important thing is that these two articles have foreshadowing, which can make readers curious." ”

"A good introduction must have a good narrative and arouse the reader's curiosity. It's like a spoiler, and it's a must-have. ”

"Isn't it, the introduction is so important?" Bao Shuai's face was full of consternation.

"Nonsense, look at those girls who pick off = clothes dance, who took off all their clothes at once? Can't take it off one by one? The introduction is to seduce people = smash. ”

Xu Yi smiled lewdly.

Bao Shuai's ears were a little red, "Brother, you still have this hobby." ”

"You know."

Xu Yi smiled even more obscenely.

Jokes are jokes, when teasing Bao Shuai, his hand did not stop, clicked on the text, looked at it a few times and directly crossed it.

"Hey, how is my brother?" Bao Shuai hurriedly came up, "What do you think of the text?" ”

Xu Yi put his hands behind his head and held back his mouth, "I can't say it's good, but I can't say it's bad, in my personal opinion, his first three chapters are slow." ”

"Well, my master said the same, his beginning is very slow, but after the last 100,000 words, it will be much better." Bao Shuai agreed.

"One hundred thousand?" Xu Yi sneered, "Shuai Shuai, let's not say anything, just from the reader's point of view, if it were you, a book would enter the high = tide after 100,000 words, and the protagonist would rise, would you read it?" ”

Bao Shuai shook his head.

"Isn't this the end, you don't want to read it, do you think the readers will? People are not your parents, and, what do you think, what are you reading books for? ”

Seeing that Bao Shuai was on the road, Xu Yi was in a good mood, and he didn't speak as impulsively as he did just now.

"Studying?"

"That's a textbook, let's put it this way, do you usually read novels?"

Bao Shuai nodded.

"Then what do you read novels for? Is it just for the sake of learning? And when you read a novel, do you feel the same way you read a text in class? ”

Bao Shuai didn't expect Xu Yi to ask like this, and he didn't know how to answer for a while.

To be exact, he was scared silly.

He originally thought that it would be easy for Dianniang to sign a contract, but in the past few months, he found out that signing a contract is a big threshold.

Moreover, the group also continues to break out the list of great gods.

Even the villains he likes are also brushed up.

So he was desperate and wanted to make the list.

But now, he suddenly found that although he had written online articles for several months, it was the same as if he hadn't written it.

It's not that he hasn't read the novels of the great gods, but at that time he always felt that the novels written by these people were old-fashioned, the writing was small, and the themes were rotten.

Therefore, he always felt that everyone could write it down.

However, he never seemed to think about why he was attracted.

He had never thought of it that way until his cousin asked himself.

The answer is very simple, but at that moment, Bao Shuai felt as if he was being dragged to a high place, from here, he was not in the pursuit of data in confusion, but more in the overlook of the entire online literature industry.

After being stunned for a moment, Bao Shuai was far away.

"You see, you all know that the most important thing in writing a novel is to make people cool and happy" paused, and Xu Yi said, "I also know that there are many people who say that they write feelings, but who says that love words can't be combined with cool writing?" ”

"Don't say anything else, let's talk about your master's novel, let's not talk about the verbosity in the early stage, I feel that I can't write it in the first person, so I changed it to the third person, which gives the reader the feeling of forcibly changing his head, which is very uncomfortable."

"But this novel is signed." Bao Shuai is a little unrelenting.

Xu Yi smiled, "There are many possibilities for Dianniang to sign a contract, some are because this book has great potential, and the editor will sign a contract if he sees it, and another is because he sees that the author is very persistent, so he will also encourage him to sign a contract, and your master should be the second one." ”

"Although he didn't handle it well in the early stage, he didn't sign the contract until four or five hundred thousand yuan, which means that the editor actually likes him as a person."

"And this?"

"Of course," Xu Yi smiled meaningfully, "do you really think editors only look at data?" Although, you think that the threshold for online articles is low, but in fact, persistence is king, not to mention anything else, if you write a novel with millions of dollars, even if it is rotten, the next one will inevitably have readers to follow. ”

Xu Yi said it easily, but Bao Shuai's face changed from initial surprise to heaviness.

"Actually, Shuai Shuai, I don't think you need to apprentice at all, writing a novel is the same as eating, it's difficult to reconcile, if you want to write well, you can only watch and practice more."

Bao Shuai didn't speak.

"Even if it's useful for you to brush the data, what will you do when it's time to put it on the shelves? Isn't online literature just going through channels and platforms to make money? You don't write well, and no one subscribes to it on the shelves, so is it useless? Xu Yi persuaded bitterly, "Although there are many talented people who write online articles, most of the great gods are boiled out, and how many of them are gods in one book?" Even if someone is a god with a book, do you know how much they have paid behind this novel? ”

Bao Shuai sighed heavily.

"You said that you don't make any money now, and you keep a trumpet of a few hundred yuan a month, and you can raise it if you keep it, or raise it for others and help others brush up the list, it's stupid."

Bao Shuai bit his lip, Xu Yi didn't know what he was thinking, but depending on the situation, Bao Shuai listened to his words.

Although he doesn't plan to help Bao Shuai explicitly, at least, he hopes that this younger brother can be a little rational when he is a rookie, and not think about going crooked because he can't get the approval of readers.

In particular, don't be misled by those elementary school students who post bars and form wrong ideas.

"Brother, you can help me take a look at mine."

After a few minutes of silence, Bao Shuai and Xu Yi said.

"Okay." Xu Yi readily agreed.

This time, Bao Shuai didn't hide it anymore and quickly opened the webpage.

"Fantasy Red Hair?"

"Well, how is it, brother? Is there anything wrong with the title and synopsis? Bao Shuai's face was full of anticipation.

"What do you think? Just now I used your master's novel as a model text to explain to you, now you can see for yourself, not the main text, just the introduction and the title of the book, is there any problem? ”

This time, Xu Yi did not directly point out the problem, but asked Bao Shuai rhetorically.

Although it is the fastest way for new authors to understand their own problems, it is not enough to use others to taste them.

If you want to become a good online writer, you also need to have the ability to self-appreciate.

Therefore, Bao Shuai's novel Xu Yi does not intend to directly say the problem, but to let Bao Shuai learn how to appreciate himself.

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