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Of course, it is impossible for Xiao Fei to directly copy the article written by Han Han in his previous life.

If he did this, he would probably be despised to death by many writers and professors in this room.

Once, when Han Han read his article again in a talk show, he shook his head and laughed at that time, saying that he was "too pretending, desperately trying to drag the article and want to show extraordinary, but in fact, it was written a little messily".

Han Han is very self-aware, this "Peeping in the Cup" is amazing at first glance, but if you look closely, there are really no fewer problems.

Xiao Fei must modify those rough places one by one, and no one can make mistakes.

The most important point is not to smash your own signboard!

For example, at the beginning of this article, Han Han's original text was so stunned: "What I think of is human nature, especially China's national inferiority. Mr. Lu Xun has not exhausted it. I have my opinion. ”

He didn't mention the ball of paper in the cup that had been soaked in water.

Obviously, his article is only intended to be read by the judges, and he does not plan to publish it publicly, even if it is published, it is estimated that the editor will have to add an editor's note to explain it, so that readers can understand the background of the article's writing.

That's not right.

It also seems abrupt.

What Xiao Fei has to do is to try to make this article mellow and natural.

The pen is on the paper, and the words pour out like water:

"A piece of paper is rubbed a few times, turns into a paper ball, and then is thrown into a glass with half a glass of water, and it sways and flutters on the water."

"The water soaked the paper ball so quickly that it became wet and heavy in a short time, and it slowly fell."

"I always feel that this scene is just like a portrayal of this life, and it reminds me of the sadness of human nature and the inferior nature of our nation."

Xiao Fei quickly wrote on the paper.

He wrote that China is a society that wants to be on the top and rise to prominence. The whole society is filled with the idea of moderation, everyone just wants to follow the crowd, and those who refuse to follow the crowd and are bent on getting ahead and are extraordinarily high-profile will always be suppressed and sarcastic in every way.

This society wants to wear out the personality and vigor of those young people who have just stepped into society, and it wants to destroy their fighting spirit. Let them be mediocre.

Then, he began to give examples, citing Qian Zhongshu and Li Ao. Throughout the ages, those who are unwilling to be modest and are determined to soar to the sky have been recorded as jokes in "Tongue Hualu".

And because of this, in the country. Even if a person is very high-level, he can't boast of himself, he must be more modest and cautious, and his merits are not self-expressed, but he will share them on the heads of the people around him, only in this way is normal.

What if you don't?

Then be careful to be recorded as a joke in "Tongue Hualu", and someone will educate his son like this in the future: "My son, when you are old, even if you have a talent, remember not to be proud." You look at the madness of "Tongue Hualu", don't make a joke!" The Chinese are well-behaved, widely blended with society, and are modest.

In the face of such a cruel society, who wants to assimilate all the newcomers in society who are flamboyant and arrogant, and full of fighting spirit, so that they will finally be like the paper ball that is completely soaked in water, and can only be in the same stream with the whole society, and has a deep-rooted tradition of moderation, if you want to fight your way out of the encirclement and fly to the sky here, instead of falling into the abyss, you will never recover. That requires everyone with dreams to do the uncompromising and unremitting struggle.

Unfortunately, it is too difficult to win this fight.

No matter how talented you are, if you learn, you won't compromise with this society. Learning will not protect itself in this malicious society, and the final result will not escape the fate of being assimilated by society.

"As I wrote this, I suddenly realized that the ball of paper had sunk to the bottom of the cup."

In Han Han's original text, some passages seemed a little messy, but Xiao Fei directly removed them, unifying all the words and sentences to criticize the bad roots of Chinese society, such as "moderation, hypocritical humility, and unsightly appearance".

So it goes. The article is more clear in theme and unity of thought.

Of course, although Xiao Fei removed some passages that showed off his extensive knowledge, he also consciously added some classic remarks and well-known aphorisms that were quoted from the sidelines to improve the style of the article.

Xiao Fei finished writing this article in half an hour, put down his pen, and said to Felimon: "Teacher Fei, my article is finished." ”

"Oh, then I'll have to read it carefully." Felimont said happily.

Now, it is not easy to get an appointment with Xiao Fei's manuscript.

Xiao Feiken wrote an article for "Sprout" in public, which made him feel very flattered.

Fei Limeng took the manuscript from Xiao Fei's hand, and he found that this small article was just over a thousand words, and the title was exactly the same as Han Han's.

It begins with a prosaic explanation, and then quickly enters the topic and begins to criticize the inferiority of Chinese society.

The article is short, but it has ups and downs.

Like Han Han's article, it starts from human nature, but Han Han talks about education, and Xiao Fei criticizes the "mean", a chronic disease of Chinese society.

Felimont kept nodding his head.

This essay is very old-fashioned and powerful, and the language is also extremely spicy and satirical, which is the essence of essay writing.

"Mr. Xiao, this article is so well written." Felimon was heartily impressed.

Xiao Fei's article was quickly circulated in the conference room. The article is not long, everyone reads it quickly, and they are all amazed after reading it.

It only took half an hour to write a thousand-word essay, and it can be written so solemnly, which once again shows Xiao Fei's agility and talent.

……

Such an episode wasted a little time, so that Han Han was nearly two hours late to get the news that he had won the first prize in the first New Concept Essay Competition.

At that time, Han Han was already extremely impatient to wait.

He was also a little desperate.

"Dad, let's go." Han Han looked at his watch, it was already more than 11 o'clock in the morning, and it would be 12 o'clock in the afternoon.

The father and son sat in this room, no one cared, no one asked them to go home and wait for the notice, and no one came to tell them any news, Han Han even thought that because he was not favored, he was consciously ignored and forgotten by the judges.

"Kid, wait a little longer, since they let us wait here, they will definitely give us a message in the end, or you wait here, and I'll go and ask?" Father Han said.

Han Han shook his head, he felt that if he had no chance to win the award, it would be a self-inflicted act for his father to ask for the news: "Dad, don't go and see, let's not waste time here anymore." ”

He was a kid with a lot of self-esteem.

At the same time, he is too sensitive and vulnerable.

"You kid, since you're here and you've already participated in the semifinals, you must want to see the result, right? How long has it been since the rematch? You're not the sun, do you think the jury revolves around you? Let's take the initiative to ask what's the matter? "Father Han is a little hot.

Han Han was yelled at by his father, pursed his lips, sat on the sofa with his head down, and stopped talking, but his eyes were full of stubbornness.

Father Han shook his head, stood up and just walked to the door, when there was a knock outside the door.

He hurriedly opened the door.

The editor of "Sprout" surnamed Fei was standing outside the door, and next to Editor Fei was Xiao Fei.

"Hello Teacher Fei, hello Teacher Xiao!" Father Han hurriedly said hello, sideways and out of the way, waiting for the two to come in. He looked at the expressions on their faces.

Fei Limeng smiled and nodded at Father Han.

Xiao Fei and the others walked into the room.

Han Han also stood up, with a nervous look on his face, and greeted Xiao Fei and Fei Limeng.

"Congratulations, Han Han, your semi-final article has been unanimously approved by the judges, and the organizing committee believes that you can be listed as the first place in Group B of the competition." Felimon announced the news to Han Han.

When Han Han heard this, he let out a wild cry of "ah", his body jumped, and he waved his fist at the sky, venting his inner excitement.

For Han Han, this is the best news!

Before that, he was depressed to the extreme, and the news that he had won the first prize for the new concept brought him from the bottom to the peak of ecstasy.

Han Han is a partial student.

His academic performance has never been very good, and in the eyes of many teachers, he is even a problem student.

And he is precocious, and he has thought a lot about his life and his future, and where his future is is the most confusing question for him.

The success of the new concept opened the door to possibilities for him.

Han's father was also very happy, and celebrated with his son for a while, thanking Xiao Fei and Fei Limeng for their kindness.

"Han Han, Mr. Xiao has something to say to you, you can talk to him." Felimont said to Han Han, who had calmed down.

"Okay, Mr. Fei." Han Han said.

Felimon and Father Han came out of the room together.

Only Han Han and Xiao Fei were left in the room. In front of Xiao Fei, Han Han seemed very restrained and a little excited, he wanted to know what Xiao Fei wanted to say to him.

Xiao Fei looked at the big boy in front of him.

He's shy, he's shy, he's a little bit of a bad mouthful, well! Actually, Han Han is a child of Neixiu, when he first debuted, he was very nervous every time he appeared in public.

"Han Han, do you want to break out of the world in writing? In the future, you will rely on a pen in your hand to eat? Xiao Fei smiled and spoke.

Han Han was stunned.

His heart beat violently.

Mr. Xiao, are you going to carry me? He thought nervously.

"Teacher Xiao, I want to write a name call, but I don't know if I can do it." Han Han said honestly.

"Of course you can! I think that after you go back, you can start to try to write a long story, just write about the life you are most familiar with, if you write well, I can recommend Hanmo Culture Company to you and help you publish! Xiao Fei said with a smile. (To be continued.) )