Xiao Fei got up and slowly paced behind Han Han, he had just stood still, but Han Han had already put down the pen, picked up the written manuscript paper, stood up, twisted his face and said respectfully: "Teacher Xiao, I'm done writing." ”

"Oh, it was written so quickly."

In more than an hour, Han Han finished writing a thousand-word essay.

This speed can't be considered particularly fast, but in the semi-final of such an important new concept essay contest, it is very powerful to have such agile ideas.

"It was Mr. Xiao Fei's good topic that made me feel a lot of things." Han Han said.

This is not a slap in the face, when he says it, his face is full of sincerity.

"Well, then I'll take a look at your work now." Xiao Fei took the three-page manuscript paper handed over by Han Han and stood next to Han Han and looked at it.

Seeing the title, Xiao Fei's heart jumped.

"Peep in the Cup"? The name turned out to be "Peeping People in the Cup"! It's the same as in the previous life.

In the separate semi-final in his previous life, according to Han Han himself and the judges at the time, the title of the articles written by Han Han was called "Peeping People in the Cup".

In fact, after the original manuscript was exhibited, everyone found out that Han Han's own memory was biased, and the title on the original manuscript was "Peeping People in the Cup".

In this life, the New Concept Essay Contest was held two years in advance, and Xiao Fei unexpectedly became the person responsible for the exam for Han Han, although he deliberately used the same topic as in his previous life, he never expected that the title of Han Han's article was still "Peeping People in the Cup".

But Xiao Fei thought about it again and thought that this overlap did not seem so strange.

Human nature, human destiny, and thinking about life are an eternal theme that literature focuses on.

From any event or phenomenon, in fact, it can be linked to thinking about life, this is a panacea, as long as you speak reasonably, the angle is new, it is easy to enhance the depth of the article, and then touch the hearts of the judges.

And Han Han is a well-read child, and he has read a lot of miscellaneous books. The reading range is still very extensive, and his literary accomplishment is also quite excellent, his compositions are very particular about scrutiny and tempering words, and the choice of words and sentences is very concise and powerful.

Xiao Fei thinks. This is the main reason why Han Han did not use titles such as "Looking at Life from a Glass of Water", "Life is Like a Ball of Paper Soaked in Water" and so on.

How concise and meaningful is a title like "Peeping in a Cup"! It's a lot more lofty than those straightforward questions.

Xiao Fei will look at the content of the article again.

"A ball of dry paper thrown into a glass filled with water, which was initially suspended on the surface of the water, only half submerged in water, reminded me of the ...... of human nature"

Han Han wrote at the beginning of the article.

This beginning is different from the article in the previous life.

The "Peep in the Cup" in the previous life. Han Han mainly uses a critical eye to write about some of the inferior roots of human nature. For example: the extreme hypocrisy and modesty of the Chinese people, and the immodest people are often regarded as jokes; Chinese people look down on those who say big things, even if those big words are actually normal, but because they are not modest enough, they will be despised by society; The Chinese people advocate the modest-minded way of doing things, and the best way to do things for people is to follow the crowd and not come out of the blue.

And so on.

They are all criticisms of the inferior nature of society and some Chinese people.

However, this article mainly focuses on how people can avoid being excessively influenced by society and contaminating too many vices.

The article argues that people are social beings. It is inevitable that people will enter society and be soaked in the water of society. Parents don't have to worry too much about this. Ugliness and kindness are two sides of human nature, life is not a fairy tale, it is necessary to recognize the suffering of the evil life of society as early as possible, and prepare children to bear the suffering as soon as possible.

This article is exquisitely worded, concise in sentences, prominent in the center, and still has a certain degree of originality in its ideology and opinions.

A 15-year-old. To be able to write an article like this is already extraordinary.

"Not bad!" Xiao Fei read it and gave a comment.

Han Han kept staring at Xiao Fei when he was reading his article. Nervousness was written all over his face, and he was afraid of being denied by Xiao Fei.

Hearing Xiao Fei say the word "good", Han Han breathed a sigh of relief.

"Thank you, Mr. Xiao Fei." Han Han bowed and thanked him.

"I asked the other judges and teachers to come in and pass it around, and I think it's enough for your essay to win the first prize." Xiao Fei said.

Han Han thanked him again. He then walked out of the conference room.

Xiao Fei called several other judges in.

Everyone sat together and read Han Han's manuscript.

"It's very rare to write decently, to use the dictionary accurately, to quote from the side, and to write the old man!" Editor-in-chief Zhao said.

The article makes a good reflection on some extreme practices of the current society and parents to educate their children, and the flowers in the greenhouse will not be able to experience wind and rain in the future, so it is better to let them go through the wind and rain as soon as possible. For all children, the fairy tale world will sooner or later burst like a soap bubble. Ye Zhaoyan also said.

"I think that with the level of this "Peeping People in the Cup", Han Han is enough to win the first prize." Dai Houying said with a smile.

As a result, several judges unanimously agreed to maintain the results of the preliminary round and continue to award Han Han the first prize of the first New Concept Essay Competition.

While the judges were discussing in the conference room, Han Han, father and son, who were waiting in a room, waited anxiously for the final result.

Han Han had already retold the article he had written to his father.

After listening to it, his father thought that his son's article was written in a stable manner, and the angle was quite novel, from the paper ball in the cup to the human nature, and in combination with the social reality, he put forward his own views on the issue of children's education.

It's so rare.

Father Han said with relief: "Han Han, improvisational composition, it's already good to be able to write an article to this extent, I think you write very well." ”

"I don't know what the judges think." Han Han said with some anxiety.

"Although it is said that it is up to man to achieve things, but gold will not be buried, child, write well, I think you can kill a way in writing." Han's father said.

The reason why Han's father said this is because he understands his son.

My son has a very rebellious personality and doesn't like to study very much, and according to his current academic performance, it is very unlikely that he wants to be admitted to a prestigious university and then get ahead.

Fortunately, Han Han's writing is not bad, and he has shown his literary talent very early.

Xiao Fei can become popular with writing, why can't his son?

Han's father still has great expectations for his son.

"I will, Daddy! I'll try! Han Han said.

In the conference room, the discussion of the judges had come to an end, and at this moment, Fei Limeng, the editor of "Sprout", suddenly interjected, and his words were said to Xiao Fei: "Mr. Xiao, the essay title you gave Han Han is very meaningful, I don't know, does the essay written by Han Han meet the standards in your heart?" ”

Xiao Fei smiled: "There is no standard in my heart, good articles can always move people's hearts, Han Han's article can make my heart pound, I think the proposition essay he wrote is very successful." ”

Xiao Fei didn't know what Felimont meant.

However, he could see the excitement in Felimon's eyes and knew that he might have something in mind.

Xiao Fei guessed well, Fei Limeng did have some ideas, and he told his thoughts in the next sentence: "Teacher Xiao, I also admit that Han Han's article was successfully written, but since you came up with this essay topic, you must also have relevant thoughts in your heart, right?" Can you also write an article on this topic? I think that publishing Han Han's article in our magazine together with your article can be regarded as a good story in the literary world. ”

It turned out that he was playing with this idea.

Xiao Fei can completely refuse this request.

But he thought about it instead, isn't that the opportunity for Han Han's original version of the cup to be released will be completely lost?

I have to interject, Han Han's previous life "Peeping in the Cup" actually has a lot of flaws, these flaws include: the beginning seems too restrained, the arguments are a little biased, and some words and sentences are purely waved for the sake of forking.

If you correct those flaws, it will be a classic essay.

When Felimon spoke to Xiao Fei, none of the other judges spoke.

Felimont's request was not excessive.

However, this requirement is a double-edged sword for Xiao Fei. If Xiao Fei agreed, and the essay on the same topic he wrote did not show any cleverness compared to Han Han, he would probably be despised.

This is the bad side.

Of course, if Xiao Fei writes a good work, of course, everyone is happy, and the happiest thing is Sprout Magazine, they get an article by Xiao Fei, and they can also use Xiao Fei and the new concept winners to write essays on the same topic, competing with each other to attract the attention of readers.

Will Xiao Fei agree?

Everyone is waiting and watching.

Xiao Fei smiled, nodded and said, "Okay, Mr. Fei, then I might as well be respectful and write a "Peep in the Cup" to come out." ”

Felimont was overjoyed.

Editor-in-chief Zhao is also very happy.

There was already manuscript paper on the table, and Felimon immediately took the paper and pen to Xiao Fei and said, "Then trouble Mr. Xiao, when will you finish writing?" ”

Dai Houying on the side frowned, is this the trend of letting Xiao Fei write in public? That's not very polite. After all, Xiao Fei is already a well-known writer, not an unknown contestant.

Xiao Fei was a little unimpressed, and said with a smile: "Then I'll write it out now, give me half an hour." ”

As he spoke, he reached out and took the manuscript paper from Felimon's hand.

"Thank you so much Mr. Xiao, I knew that Mr. Xiao would not let me down." Felimont rubbed his hands together and said with a happy smile.

Xiao Fei waved his hand and didn't say anything more, but began to write the manuscript paper. (To be continued.) )