May 3, 2014

On the question of the plot verbosity

Some book friends think that I am a bit wordy in describing the storyline. I think the descriptions of NN City, Imperial International, and the buffet part of the original prom in the first chapter are too long-winded, and the reason for the book friends is that they have nothing to do with the main plot and don't need to be too detailed. I changed the description of the buffet section on April 17th, but I'm still considering whether to change the other sections.

I'll admit that writing a book for the first time may have been a bit of a miscalculation in terms of detail. However, I feel that a work is like a big tree, with a trunk, branches, and branches, and countless leaves. Each leaf may not be directly related to the trunk of the tree, or even to the branches, but only to the branches that grow the leaves. Maybe you look at it from the perspective of the trunk or the branches, and you can't see the leaves. But whether you see the leaf or not, it grows there quietly. Every leaf has its own role. Countless leaves, photosynthesizing, provide nutrients for the tree.

So, dear reader, there are some places where you feel verbose, please read on patiently. On the big tree of "Light Source Holy Messenger", the verbose place may be a leaf.