Notice of text change, please guide! In order to put it on the shelf, I fought it!

I got up early this morning and vomited.,I don't know if you've seen it? Hehe, I don't mind if you see it or not, but don't forget to keep the tickets.

After some complaining, the mood is indeed much better, if it pollutes your audio-visual, take care of it.

When I complained, I finally asked: Do I still sleep?

Sure enough, I didn't sleep, I couldn't fall asleep lying on the bed tossing and turning. The computer was turned on again, and I was not interested in writing, and I didn't know what to do, so I stared at the screen until I saw the east whitening.

Can you live without a girlfriend? Brothers and sisters, all right, give me a sister. It's also good to warm up the bed.

I finally stayed up until half past seven and went out for breakfast, the most famous breakfast in Tianjin, pot dishes. When you want to come to Tianjin, I please, Dafu comes, true sincerity, as you like, to ensure the most authentic Tianjin flavor.

Pot dishes in the morning, ears and eyes at noon, ignore the dog at night, and bring you two boxes of 18th Street marijuana flowers before leaving. A dragon, eat all over the streets and alleys of Jincheng!

Eh, what am I doing here? Didn't you come to write a notification? Look at my memory, and then turn to eating. Without further ado, I'm officially informing you that I'm going to change the text.

It's been nearly two months since I wrote the book, and I'm glad to see that my keyboard is no longer only worn out with those keys, hehe, which means that the keyboard I bought for 30 yuan has only been fully developed in these two months. Well, I'm relieved.

During this time, many people gave me some guidance, including editors, authors, and a few sporadic readers. It's not a little bit of a name here. (I'm afraid that I will miss a point and offend people, forgive me.) Bow to all those who have followed, supported, helped, and criticized me.

I have listed all the suggestions you have given and recorded them in the outline of my work, which will guide my future writing at all times. The previous texts are all random and unsystematic, and I will partially revise them in the next few days.

This revision will be based on the original, guided by your opinions, and based on my experience in writing for more than a month, I will definitely present a more perfect novel to all my brothers and sisters.

Of course, the good article is changed to a certain extent, and if it is really wireless in the future, it will not be so easy to change. Hehe, I admire myself for being able to think so far. However, there is absolutely no problem in planning ahead and being prepared.

My novels are being revised all the time, but before that they have been done piecemeal, without looking at the big picture. I really wanted to make this book a little better. It doesn't matter if it takes a little longer.

Today, I visited the authors who left footprints in my work more than a month ago, and I found that many of them have stopped changing. I know that some people have shifted their combat positions, and some have changed their combat missions, but it makes me sad to see them lying in my favorites and not moving.

I don't want to see someone leave a sentence under my work chapter one day: "Why don't you have it underneath?" It's a very cruel thing to give up, and if someone says you're a eunuch, how do you feel?! I am a dignified man, not a eunuch!

So, before this happens, I'm going to do something, and that's to revise the article. To make him alive, to make him alive, to be able to attract and retain more readers. Only in this way will there be the motivation to persevere.

Of course, those who have changed the text know that every revision is a condensation. The so-called condensation, of course, is to delete more and add less. His works are all accumulated after searching his intestines and racking his brains, and every word deleted is no different from cutting off the author's flesh.

But in order for him to live longer, I had to make up my mind and swing my sword............ Remnant.

If the rotten meat is not removed, the new meat is not fresh, everyone understands this truth. But try it on yourself with a knife! Woo, woo, don't stop me, make me cry for a while. Where is the female ticket? Come out and comfort me. Woohoo, woo......

If someone gives a monthly pass, it's good immediately, hehe.

I'm thinking about a question, are people who write really prone to schizophrenia? If you want to write about dozens or hundreds of good people in a work, you have to invest in it when you write about everyone, think about what he thinks, say what he says, and then quickly change roles, and often overdo it on both sides...... No...... Right? I'm so young! (Don't complain about this sentence, the real age is kept secret.) )

Writing and writing, it digresses, is this related to not saying good sleep? After sending this notice, I have to get a good night's sleep if I say anything. Wife, turn on the air conditioner. Oh, forget it, where did the bachelor get his wife? Let's use the right hand, the right hand is used to it. (Don't think about it, take the remote control.) )

Well, the air conditioner has been adjusted to the most suitable temperature, and after these few hundred words, the house will be comfortable. Hehe, you must sleep well, the skin is saggy, the eye bags are heavy, how can you do it without maintenance?

Luo Yuchen, does your "Ultimate Beauty Protection" work? Is there a men's article, secret me, privately pass it on. Don't make women happy, but also take care of us men.

It's over, this off-topic has become a habit. Hurry up and help me find a girlfriend, let her supervise me in the back, kiss me when I go off-topic, kiss me when I go off-topic. Hehe, it is estimated that ten horses will not be able to pull back.

What do I want to say? Oh, by the way, please help me check again, see what needs to be fixed, where there is no need to waste pen and ink, you're welcome, raise your broadsword, and shoot at me! Isn't that a bit of a contradiction? Oops, I haven't figured out the right words for the time being, no matter what, you know what I mean.

Please give some comments to my brother's work in your spare time. What are the good ideas, hehe, brother, I'm not welcome, as long as you are generous, I dare to take it for myself, and I am not afraid of what others say.

At the same time, typos, improper use of punctuation, inconsistencies, inconsistencies, words that do not match the character's personality, and confusion are the focus of this revision. If you find something in your reading, please indicate it as well.

There is also the theme I chose is not too in line with the requirements, basically taking the edge ball route, if you think what content may touch um, hehe, ask for advice, I would appreciate it. My books have been banned, and what I fear most is that I will do it again, my little heart can't stand it. The last ban, I still have lingering palpitations, and the blow was too damn big.

Finally, I would like to rephrase the text, please guide. Thank you.

Yu Qingshan

June 19, 2015 at noon