After a while, they didn't react, but the number in Xu Fu's head first became "2/130000". Clearly, they have embraced the story.

"The final reversal of this story is so powerful, and it raises the previous plot a lot at once!" Li Faker looked at Xu Fu in surprise.

"The last reversal is what Sister Quzi thought." Xu Fu didn't take credit, and asked again: "What do you think of Senior Sister Huang Tingting?" ”

"It's a lot more prosaic than what you said yesterday." Huang Tingting said bluntly.

Xu Fu smiled bitterly: "If you can't do it, it's useless." Yesterday's thoughts are a bit out of touch. Today's story is more suitable for making a micro-movie, because the whole process is a chamber scene with two leading actors. ”

Huang Tingting asked again with a leap of thought: "So there is a man and a woman in this story, who of us will play the man and who will play the woman?" ”

This reminded Xu Fu, and he hurriedly begged: "You two come and act!" The male protagonist is Senior Sister Li Fake, and Senior Sister Huang Tingting plays the heroine. ”

It's a coincidence that the temperament of the two of them just matches the characters in the story.

Li Hairka is full of heroism, hiding his long hair, and he is definitely a super handsome blue child.

Huang Tingting's appearance is also high, and she is even more beautiful when she takes off her glasses. Especially her weak character, which is very close to the heroine in the story. "It seems to be a female ghost who is bullied, but it is actually a girl who is bullied by ghosts", it is best to let the real war five scum play such a role.

Moreover, such a combination may produce a gimmick. Xu Fu knew that the completion of this mission was too difficult, and he had to do his best to increase the number of highlights and expand the audience base.

Please ask Huang Tingting and Li Faker to be the starring actors, and then you can do some word games on the video introduction, so that people can associate in the direction of lily, and maybe you can add a lot of clicks.

Now the Internet is prevalent, but lily resources are really scarce. When Xu Fu soaked on the Internet, he could realize the existence of this demand from all details. In a series, as long as there are two girls holding hands, they can be watched as a hundred cooperative products. Even if there are two women who are relatively close to each other in the work, then the audience will come up with a lily plot that does not match at all.

Xu Fu can also do this, don't deliberately make it too weird. There are no hints in the plot, only to inform the audience that the two actors are girls, and the rest can be made up by themselves.

Qu Jingmo didn't know Xu Fu's weird thoughts, and opened his mouth to help: "Hair card, you just try it?" Maybe if it's popular, you can still be a star. ”

"How can I be a star." Li Fata is modest in his mouth, but he is quite looking forward to it in his heart. She had thought about agreeing before, so she said, "Then I'll try." ”

Xu Fu was overjoyed, and asked Huang Tingting again: "Is Senior Sister Huang Tingting willing to join?" ”

Before Huang Tingting could answer, Li Faka preemptively said: "The two of us have long been indistinguishable from each other." I agreed, and so did my Tingting. ”

Huang Tingting was sold before she could open her mouth, and she squinted at Li Faka unhappily.

Li Fakea turned a blind eye, picked up the story instead, and asked Xu Fu: "How long do you plan to make your movie?" ”

"It's only about fifteen minutes." Xu Fu replied.

"Just fifteen minutes?" Li Faka was a little disappointed.

Huang Tingting suddenly interjected: "Can you combine yesterday's story with your design today?" Extended Growth? ”

Xu Fuda was interested. After all, yesterday's idea was thrown away like that, how can it not be a pity? He asked, "What do you think should be done?" ”

Huang Tingting said: "I think you can make an episode-by-episode web series. In the first episode, with the story you wrote today, the hero and heroine meet. The second episode is about the hero and heroine cooperating and fighting other ghosts. The way you fought was the way you envisioned it yesterday. The enemies in each episode are classic horror characters. In the second episode, Sadako and Mimiko call each other, and in the third episode, Flandi and the Rip Girl slash each other. ”

"That's right! That's it! Xu Fu was pleasantly surprised, and in this way, the two ideas of yesterday and today were used.

Looking at Xu Fu's expression, Huang Tingting suddenly felt a little complacent. It's quite rewarding that the idea can be accepted.

Li Fakes pushed the boat to expose the black history next to him: "My Tingting is not simple, right? She was bored when she was a freshman, and she wanted to be a cartoonist. She had been studying Japanese manga for a long time. I typed a lot of words just by analyzing the plot structure! It was also posted online. ”

Huang Tingting was ashamed, and repeatedly punched Li Faka.

Qu Jingmo also came up with an idea: "Then the framework of the big story should also be thought of." You see if this will work, the heroine of the story has a physique that attracts evil spirits, and is about to be killed by more evil spirits, and the male protagonist wants to protect her, so it appears. ”

Honestly, a bit of a Mary Sue...... But Xu Fu felt that it could be used, so he wrote down these points.

He just jotted it down, and now he can come up with a rough outline. But we can't focus on the future. He only has the resources and money to make the first episode at his disposal, and only by succeeding through the first episode can Xu Fu think about what follows.

Everyone's ideas are almost finished, and the brainstorming is over. Now, this story is not only the work of Xu Fu, but also the inspiration and ideas of three other people.

Although Li Faka and Huang Tingting did not swear anything. But in fact, all four people agree with the story at the moment. In the case of a start-up team, the team has already begun to develop internal cohesion.

Xu Fu knows how important it is to have a solid team to make a business. So he proposed, "Let's meet here again tomorrow night." I'm trying to make a script for the first act of the story and show it to everyone. ”

Xu Fu doesn't know what he wants the three girls to do yet. He plans to do as much as he can, but every small progress must be communicated to everyone so that they know the progress. After all, it's a team.

They all agreed to come down, and then they went first. Xu Fu didn't move, the story was determined today, and he should plan how to arrange the next nearly thirty days.

According to the advice given by the senior sister, Xu Fu plans to spend two weeks or even more time making preliminary preparations. In the third week, we will start shooting again and try to solve the problem before the 5,000 yuan is spent. The last week has to be reserved, and it takes time to accumulate popularity. It is hoped that within seven days of uploading, it will attract 130,000 viewers who appreciate Xu Fu's works.

Next, Xu Fu picked up a few books on script writing in the library.

He had experience in making film scripts, but he didn't know why it was at the time, and he needed to supplement the basic theory.

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The script looks simple, but it's hard to write. Screenplays and novels are different. Novels can be left blank in large sections and only describe the main points. And the script is a pile of countless details, so detailed that even the actors' every move and even the expressions on their faces must be comprehensive.

The larger structure of the script is relatively simple. At the beginning, it is necessary to establish an emotional link between the audience and the protagonist, which is what is often called "substitution". Let the audience become interested in the protagonist and be willing to experience the next plot from the perspective of the protagonist, and the whole movie can be established.

So you can't come up and make a big deal about right and wrong. Even if the concept is correct, it will not win the approval of the audience. The best way to do this is to show the small details of the protagonist's daily life at the beginning. These details are best related to the general public, and then use the protagonist's solution to guide the audience's emotions.

The means of solving the problem determine the tone of the film. Solving everyday problems with surprising means can win the admiration of the audience. Solving everyday problems in an ordinary way can make the audience empathize.

In Xu Fu's story, although the male protagonist is a ghost, he doesn't know it until the end, thinking that he is still alive. His behavior should be shown in an ordinary way, and the closer he is to an ordinary person, the better.

In the middle of the script, it's time to advance the plot. Under Xu Fu's planning, every ordinary action of the male protagonist will cause a surprising consequence. Written into words, it is "the normal behavior of the male protagonist scares the female ghost". Isn't it surprising that people are scared of ghosts?

The consequences of surprise are progressive. The first time the "female ghost" was a little frightened, the second time was a little frightened, and the third time was more serious. If the order is out of order, the audience will have a sense of dislocation and look awkward.

In the final ending, all the problems in the early stage must be solved, and no buttons can be left. New problems can arise because old problems are solved in order to shoot a sequel. But all the events depicted throughout the movie have to end perfectly. The relationship between the hero and heroine, the clues left in the early stage, these are all to be explained. Even if there is even one less, it will be a downgrade to the movie.

It's all too good to do. Xu Fu felt that the most difficult part was writing lines. Although there are not too many lines in this script, he always feels that the hero and heroine speak in the same tone. I can't feel it just by looking at the words, but if I read it, it will be awkward.

Xu Fu thought about it and planned to show it to Li Faka and Huang Tingting tomorrow. Since the two of them are the leading actors, it is better to let them design their own lines. In this way, when it comes time to shoot, the lines they read are all in the way they usually speak, which should be a little natural.

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After twelve o'clock in the evening, Xu Fu was already dizzy. He decided to change his mind and remembered what his senior sister said about the "storyboard script", which he didn't know much about, and just checked what role this kind of script played in a movie.

It turns out that "script" and "storyboard script" are two equally important things. The script arranges the direction of the story. Storyboard scripts are used to design visual shots, and before shooting, consider the effect of the whole work. Just like a real estate company has to put a lot of effort into making a design before building a building, a storyboard is a must-do preparation before a movie is shot.

Whether the sense of space is formed, whether the narrative is clear, and whether the relationship between the characters is clear, these things will be judged by the audience subconsciously in every film and television work. Any mistake in any link is a catastrophe.