The two stumbled into the house, and the sensor light turned on automatically. Then the protagonist turned on the computer with his mobile phone aPP and played music, and the female ghost had never seen anything and was scared half to death.

The female ghost didn't know the principle of "sensor light" and "Internet of Things", and saw that the light was automatically turned on and the music went off automatically, but she didn't see the second living person, thinking that there were other ghosts hidden in the house. It made her startled, and she was all in the woods, looking for another ghost everywhere in the house.

This is a big part of the joke. borrowed the classic scenes of traditional horror films, but the female ghost was scared, and the male protagonist had no intention of doing it.

Halfway through the plot, the male protagonist goes to take a shower. At this time, the classic scene of "The Grudge" appeared, and the female ghost originally planned to sneak in to scare people, but when she saw the naked male protagonist, she was immediately scared away.

So, the female ghost who was supposed to be scary was scared to cry instead. The actor didn't notice anything, so he went to soak instant noodles and planned to eat them. As a result, the female ghost was hungry and ate the instant noodles first.

Coupled with some follow-up plots, the male protagonist and the female ghost met happily in this way. This is the end of the story.

When Xu Fu was almost written, "that voice" appeared again.

"You've created a work that's been simulated in space and rated as terrifying about 1.9. The strength growth potential of the reincarnation is about 1. The number of hidden rewards is 0. After a comprehensive evaluation, your work meets the requirements and can be used as a blueprint for a space with very low difficulty and low income. Please keep the popularity of this work up to the standard within the time limit. ”

Xu Fu still ignored it. It seems that the evaluation has been lowered. But no matter how that thing is evaluated, it can't change the law of real society that "only good looks can attract enough audiences". Xu Fu can only focus on making a good-looking work. Everything else is put aside, only gimmicks, plots, and jokes are important.

The new concept has a selling point, and the implementation part is also considered, which feels quite reliable.

At this moment, Xu Fu received a phone call. It was Qu Jingmo who called.

But it was Qu Jingmo's roommate Li Faka who spoke, and she asked, "Hey, have you found someone from the film club?" What did she say? ”

"Looked. She is much more experienced than me, and she has seen a lot of problems in one spot......" Xu Fu gave a general overview of what he had seen and heard in the morning, and added: "So I followed her prompts to reimagine a new story." Would you like to take a look? ”

"See you on the third floor of the library after dinner! I'll call Momo too. Li Faka didn't know where he got the interest, and said loudly.

……

At night, when Xu Fu went to the third floor of the library, he immediately saw the quiet back of a girl. Xu Fu immediately recognized her as Qu Jingmo.

She was reading a book. Xu Fu walked over lightly, stood behind her and asked, "Sister Quzi, what are you looking at?" ”

Qu Jingmo was taken aback, and when he turned his eyes to see that it was Xu Fu, he said angrily: "You scared me to death!" ”

After speaking, she closed the book and showed Xu Fu the cover of the book, "Film Art". Looking at the name, it should be a movie-related book.

It seems that Qu Jingmo really intends to help Xu Fu with his heart. Xu Fu's heart felt a warm feeling.

After Xu Fu sat down, Qu Jingmo asked, "Have you written that story?" What about the evaluation? ”

"There are a lot of questions. Fortunately, I asked someone before I did it, otherwise when it was really operated, so much trouble would have to kill people. Xu Fu told Qu Jingmo what he had seen. He listened to what his senior sister said and benefited a lot.

Then he said: "According to the guidance of my senior sister, I wrote a new story today. ”

Qu Jingmo completely grasped the wrong point, narrowed his eyes, and said bluntly: "The senior sister you are talking about, is she beautiful?" ”

Xu Fu knew that he couldn't say that he was beautiful, and he was looking for death. But it can't be said that it's not pretty, it's too hypocritical and not pleasing. He pretended to look up with his eyes, revealing a very confused and confused expression: "She has a long ...... Wait, what does she look like? It looks like I'm wearing glasses...... I don't seem to be wearing it...... Strange, how I can't remember people, let me think. ”

"Liar." Qu Jingmo smiled very satisfied, and the question ended here, she changed the subject and said, "Have you thought of a new story?" Tell me. ”

"I spent the daylight writing the synopsis. That's it, you see. Xu Fudao came up with the story of the new design.

This time, Qu Jingmo was Xu Fu's first reader. Her demeanor was extremely focused, as if she were looking at a masterpiece.

Xu Fu's heart was warm. It is true that he likes Qu Jingmo, but if it is just his unilateral liking, it will not last so long. Although Qu Jingmo never responds directly, every time she makes a small gesture, she will reveal her true thoughts. It becomes the driving power.

Xu Fu believes that as long as he grows to a high enough height, he can really win Qu Jingmo.

At this moment, Qu Jingmo saw the end. "That voice" suddenly reminded Xu Fu that there was a "potential elite reincarnation" who had seen his work.

The progress of the second task completion method has also reached a fifth of the way.

Xu Fu was stunned. There was no fluke this time, only Qu Jingmo saw his new work. So, after the two went to the movies together yesterday, the mysterious voice that Xu Fu began to hear was because of Qu Jingmo.

It was she who unconsciously brought great challenges and great opportunities to Xu Fu......

Qu Jingmo couldn't hear "that voice", glanced at Xu Fu a little strangely, and then smiled: "This story is simpler, but it's also very good." ”

"I'm not done with this story yet. Songzi, do you have any suggestions for reading? Xu Fu asked.

"I didn't finish it." Qu Jingmo said: "The female ghost was bullied so badly, I felt sorry for her." When I watched it, I thought the story would take a turn. ”

"Twist?" Xu Fu hurriedly asked, "What kind of turn?" ”

"For example, the female ghost is actually kind and wants to help the male protagonist? Or is it that the male protagonist is actually a ghost, and the female ghost who is scared the whole time is human? Qu Jingmo said. When she looked at Xu Fu's story, she felt that the story was a intestine to the end, and if she added a reversal, the taste would be even more sufficient.

"The female ghost is kind...... The male protagonist is a ghost ......" Xu Fu muttered to himself, going through these two suggestions in his heart, and was pleasantly surprised: "Tune! Sister Quzi! You're so smart! Yes, this story should be reversed at the end! ”

has a "reversed ending" movie, Xu Fu has seen a lot. When Koreans were starting out in the film industry, they were particularly fond of using the gimmick of "reversal". Constantly foreshadowing hints in the front, leading the audience astray, and at the end, dragging the audience back to the truth, there is immediately a sense of surprise on a roller coaster.

Xu Fu can do the same. Add a reversed ending to the story. In the story, the male protagonist who has always been comfortable is actually a ghost, but he doesn't know that he is dead. And the "female ghost" who was scared a lot was the real person.

It seems that the "female ghost" was frightened by the voice-activated light, but in fact, it was because she saw the male protagonist taking off his shoes at the door. Any girl who comes home and sees a man at the door who she has never seen before, is probably scared enough.

In the plot of the bath, in fact, the "female ghost" didn't see the male protagonist, but she heard that the water in the bathroom was inexplicably open, and she saw a ghost when she went to turn off the faucet in fear, so she cried in fright.

As for that instant noodle...... It turned out that after crying for a while, the heroine, who was actually very timid, found that the ghost in the house actually made noodles for her to eat. So the heroine took this as a sign that the ghost was showing her goodwill. After eating, he cautiously tried to contact the male protagonist.

As a result, 90% of the plot in the first part of the story is making the audience think that they are watching another amusing story of "the male protagonist encounters a female ghost". But in the last 10 percent, it turns into a normal "woman meets a male ghost" story. I believe that it will not make the audience feel like a waste of time.

Xu Fu laughed happily: "Quzi, I want to write your name on the list of screenwriters!" ”

"Gee, I just had an idea. I'm going to put my name after yours. Qu Jingmo grinned.

"I'll change it now, and I'll show it to you!" Xu Fu said. Around this reversal, many of the previous details have to be changed.

For example, the scene of kuso's "Ghost" at the beginning has to be changed. It's better to change it to the heroine after opening the door with the key, the male protagonist walks in first and closes the door casually. The heroine saw the door that had just been unlocked, suddenly opened wide, and then closed with a "bang". In order to mislead the audience, only the part where the male protagonist enters the house, closes the door and almost hits the "female ghost".

Qu Jingmo also opened her "Film Art": "I continued to read. I used to watch movies only to watch a lively movie, but I didn't expect that there were so many doorways in it. ”

Not long after, Li Faka and Huang Tingting also came. Compared with Huang Tingting, who is quiet and quiet, Li Hairka's face is flushed, there are beads of sweat on his forehead, and the fragrance is overflowing. Along the way, countless have attracted the attention of countless boys.

Probably afraid that Xu Fu would be blind, she explained as soon as she came: "I just ran!" ”

Qu Jingmo didn't know if he was worried about Xu Fuxin's ape, or if the girl really couldn't smell the sweat of other girls, so he frowned and said, "You stink to death!" Sit across the table! ”

Huang Tingting also wanted to avoid Li Faka, so she silently sat next to Qu Jingmo. Li Faka dragged her down: "What kind of light bulb are you doing, come and accompany me." ”

Huang Tingting was suddenly disgusted: "You are full of sweat!" ”

Li Fake's heart was very relaxed, dragged Huang Tingting to sit across the table, and reached out to grab Xu Fu's story: "Have you written a new story?" It's very efficient! ”

Huang Tingting was a little curious, and also looked at it from the side.

Li Faka did run just now. It's fine when I walk, but as soon as I sit down, my breath is very short. She sat next to Huang Tingting, her voice was very heavy and sounded very strange.

Huang Tingting listened to people panting and panting next to her ears and temples, her face gradually turned red, and she couldn't concentrate at all. She suddenly soared: "Why are you panting like this!" Disgusting to death! ”

Li Faka's eyes widened, and he fought back with action, falling directly on Huang Tingting's body, wiping half of his body with sweat.

"Yikes!" Huang Tingting exclaimed in a low voice and hurriedly hid to the side.

Xu Fu was stunned by the side, and almost raised his fist and shouted, "Lily big. The law is good".

Qu Jingmo turned a blind eye, it is estimated that he has long been used to it, and let them make trouble.

The two girls soon realized that there was a boy watching next to them. They were all a little embarrassed, Huang Tingting pursed her mouth aggrievedly and glared at Li Fake. Li Faka looked left and right, looking like it was none of my business.

At this time, they remembered the matter and took a serious look at Xu Fu's concept. Looking at them, their expressions became attentive.