I happened to meet the right person in a dream, but I found that I didn't have a manuscript in my hand, and there is nothing more unpleasant than this. However, Wen Xun is not the kind of person who passively doesn't know how to fight, I saw him walk straight towards Lan Yang in the ramen restaurant, "Yo, Editor Lan, what a coincidence." ”

After greeting the enthusiastic Lan Yang for a while, Wen Xun took Lan Yang to the teahouse, and then began to write his novel silently on the spot! This is not because Wen Xun's memory has reached the point of being unforgettable, but really because he is too familiar with his novels. He had already pinched it back and forth, then broke it up, pinched it again, and so on several times, and he could already remember every word in his novel......

It didn't take much time, Wen Xun wrote the manuscript improvised in a dream. Fortunately, this is in a dream, and there is basically no time passing. After handing the manuscript to Lan Yang, Wen Xun began to wait silently for Lan Yang's evaluation. He felt that he had basically exhausted his best efforts in this draft, and even used the narratology knowledge he had just learned to revise it. It is no exaggeration to say that when Wen Xun was writing just now, he was already surprised how he could write such a good manuscript.

After waiting quietly for a few minutes, I only heard Lan Yang say: "Well, it's barely okay, it's basically smooth, although there are still some small details that are not handled too well, but as a middle school student, it's OK." ”

Although this was a compliment to Wen Xun, Wen Xun was still not too happy. He asked, "Are there any small details that haven't been taken care of?" He already felt that he had handled the details too well, and he had already exceeded his expectations, so how could he still be a little unhandled?

"I mean, in terms of description, you've handled it pretty well. But from the perspective of the plot, it's still almost, because your plots, to be honest, are all reasonable and expected, and the twists and turns are not very impressive, and there is no way to make people scream. But because the basic details have been changed poorly, even if the main trunk is not to the point of being outstanding, it can still attract others to look down......" Lan Yang commented.

Hearing Lan Yang's words, Wen Xun looked at Lan Yang in surprise, he never realized that the original publishing house's editorial requirements were so high, no wonder the novel he wrote when he was a child couldn't be published. "Then I will be able to pass the preliminary round if I take this manuscript to submit the New Language Thinking Competition?" Wen Xun lowered his head and thought about it, and then asked Lan Yangdao.

"What? This draft? New thoughts? Are you kidding me! Lan Yang was anxious when he heard Xun's words, "Isn't Xinyusi just a competition for a group of middle school students?" If this manuscript can't be passed, brother, I will directly take your surname! Brother xx is asking you to publish physical books as adults, you know? By okay, I mean you're barely getting to the point where adults can publish books, you know? Don't say it's a preliminary round, it's no problem even in the finals! What you should worry about is that the reviewer thinks that your middle school student is not so good at writing and talent! ”

Lan Yang's words directly stunned Wen Xun, he relied on Lan Yang's comments in his dream to constantly revise the article for a few days, he didn't expect Lan Yang to use the standards of adult publishing to demand himself! He also thought that Lan Yang was demanding himself by passing the standard of the preliminary competition of Xinyusi!

Lan Yang looked at Wen Xun a little unconvinced, so he sighed and continued to persuade Wen Xun: "You must know that the Chinese professors of those universities, their major is not to read novels, or even Chinese. The name of their discipline is Chinese language and literature, and they study pre-Qin and Han literature, comparative literature, foreign literary history, and contemporary literary history, not to see whether novels can be published, not to see how novels are written! What the hell is going on with these novels, it's my major! That's what I eat! ”

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When Wen Xun woke up from the dream, he still didn't believe what he heard in the dream. Did you just meet the criteria for passing the preliminary round? It's that easy? Although the previous few days of revision, Wen Xun was almost depressed. Although it did take a lot of effort to change the manuscript before, when all this passed, Wen Xun suddenly felt a little unreal again, as if he hadn't made a big effort......

"Xiaorou, come, how about helping my brother read this novel." After breakfast, Wen Xun, who felt unsure, called his sister back to the room and handed the manuscript to his sister.

Wen Rou got the manuscript and suddenly her eyes lit up, when her brother had just finished writing it a few days ago, she wanted to read the manuscript, but her brother didn't show it to her. Now that she can suddenly show her, can she not be happy? But when Wen Rou read a few lines, she suddenly felt that something was wrong.

Wen Rou, who was different, looked at the first few lines repeatedly, and then asked her brother suspiciously, "Have you modified it?" The beginning is different. Wen Rou only felt that her brother's beginning was written very plainly, although there were no gorgeous words, but it seemed to be very smooth to read.

Although if you look closely, it seems that every line of text is not too well expressed, and every action of the character is not pointed out like movies and television. But I don't know why, it's this kind of slightly missing text, but it allows Wen Rou to supplement the scenes in the imaginary story in her mind while watching!

And although the text details are slightly missing, it looks so smooth that people can't help but continue to look down at it. It's as if after watching it for the first time, a TV series will appear in my head, and an attractive story will automatically play.

Although the plot written by her brother seems to be very reminiscent, she just feels like she wants to read the story in one go......

"Brother, this is what you wrote? You write so well! Oh my God! Brother, you really have a talent for writing, hey! When Wen Rou finished reading the whole story, she said to her brother with little stars in her eyes.

"What do you know about this little girl, don't make me happy, it's useless!" Who knew that Wen Xun was not happy at all at this time, and he hadn't even given his sister a good look.

I saw that he got back his manuscript and went straight out - it turned out that Wen Xun didn't think that he would be so good after two days of such revision. After thinking about it, he could only decide that it was because his sister's appreciation level was too low, and if he showed her a novel, she would say that it was good. Moreover, there must be a plus point for the lover to see what his brother writes in his eyes, and for his sister to see what his brother writes!

So Wen Xun directly threw his sister's judgment out of the clouds, and he felt that he had to let the most educated person in the village read his manuscript.

After a while, Wen Xun came to Lilac's bedroom. He finds Lilac's door open, and Lilac is in the house looking at the lesson plan. "Teacher Ding, can you do me a favor?" Wen Xun smiled and handed his manuscript to Lilac.

"Yo, this is your draft? Is it used to make a name for yourself? Lilac immediately became excited at this time, and she looked at Wen Xun's draft without saying a word.

When Lilac looked at the manuscript, Wen Xun stared at Lilac's expression tightly. After a short time, when Lilac finished reading all the manuscripts, she sighed and said, "Now I know why you insist on going your own way, I didn't expect you to really have talent in this area......"

Lilac didn't know how Wen Xun had revised this draft, and she thought this was Wen Xun's first draft! As far as Lilac's aesthetics are concerned, she thinks that if Wen Xun, a middle school student, can write such a level in the first draft, then her Lilac is really in vain! She Lilac, the former literary beautiful girl, couldn't write such a good manuscript back then!

At that time, when Wen Xun decided to go her own way and break into her own reputation, she was still very worried about Wen Xun. But now that I think about it, isn't this the ambition of the bird? It's just a fool's errand!

But who knows, just when Lilac felt that her self-confidence was hit by Wen Xun again, she only heard Wen Xun ask suspiciously, "Really?" Teacher Ding, don't coax me. I'm a farmer, I haven't read anything, don't lie to me......"

This Wen Xun actually began to doubt even Lilac!