Everyone said that the topic that Su Wen wanted to write about was in line with the previous regulations.

Because the subject matter stipulated by Liang Ling is too broad, as long as it can be related to going to college, this is almost the same as no regulation, which is also where Liang Zixu is dissatisfied.

Su Wen said that he wanted to describe the scene of being separated from his classmates before coming to Kyoto, and that he was going to university, which of course fits the theme of going to university.

And he said that if he wanted to depict the posture of a beautiful woman, it would make more people interested, especially boys.

Regardless of men and women, when the love first opens in their teens, there is always a her or him in their hearts. The bold ones confessed, or walked together. If you are a little more introverted, you can only put this her or him in your heart, and slowly ferment, saying that it is your first love, but in fact it is just a secret love.

Crush is an indescribable feeling, unspeakable, unclear, but never forgotten, the one in my heart she or him, always emerges from time to time.

It was a wonderful feeling.

Although the young people here can't understand the feeling that this feeling is more unforgettable because of the passage of time, it is inevitable that some of them will feel emotion in their hearts. In the past, I was in the same classroom or school with her or him, and I could see each other every day, but I couldn't understand the sadness of parting.

However, today, after entering the university, they can aim high, but there is a voice in their hearts telling them that the former she or him has slowly moved away from them, and there is no entanglement from them, and they feel as if they have lost something.

Now, when Su Wen talked about the school girl beauty, all the boys were throbbing, and they were looking forward to seeing how Su Wen portrayed her in their hearts!

After the classmates shouted a few times, they gradually quieted down and listened to Su Wen's poems with bated breath.

Su Wen adjusted his mood. Said slowly: "Because of parting, we cherish each other, so next, my poem is called "Cherish", which is a new poem. ”

"Precious"!

The students nodded heavily. didn't speak, and was bent on listening to Su Wen's recitation.

Everyone saw Su Wen look up at the ceiling slightly, and then, he coughed lightly, cleared his throat, brewed his emotions, and read out a sentence in a very deep and affectionate voice:

"The most gentle ...... that bows his head"

Su Wen's tone was very slow, and this sentence was the most ordinary text, and everyone could hear it clearly.

It's just such an understatement of poetry. Immediately, everyone was shocked, and a mirror image rose out of thin air in their minds: a beautiful woman, bowing her head slightly, is so gentle......

Expressing artistic conception through imagery has always been a matter of poetry, and whether or not the reader can give birth to imagery depends on the poet's skill. The most brilliant poetry is to "go out of all realms" as Wang Guowei said.

Students just find this verse very engaging. I couldn't help but want to read the following, after listening to Liang Ling, the head teacher of the book, listened to it. Immediately, her body tensed, and she realized that Su Wen had written out a realm with just a simple sentence - at least, the scene of a beautiful woman had come out.

"This poem ......" Liang Ling wanted to say that it was not simple, but the feeling of excitement in her heart told her. If the rest of the text is not badly written, it will be a classic new poem!

"Could it be that the rumors are true, Su Wen's production must be a high-quality product?" Between the lightning and flint, Liang Ling's mind was a little messy. However, she was extremely looking forward to Su Wen's later verses, and soon regained her senses, her ears pricked up, and she listened carefully.

"Like a water lotus flower, it is not a shy ...... the cool breeze" This is the second line of the poem read by Su Wen, and the voice is subdued and frustrated, full of emotion.

The emotion was very ethereal, but it was like a real thing suddenly inserted from the void, and a more tangible scene emerged in everyone's minds-a gentle beauty as shy as a water lotus!

Rumble!

Everyone appreciated the charm of this text, they were stunned for a moment, and then everyone was breathing, extremely quiet, and they didn't even dare to breathe loudly, for fear of disturbing Su Wen's creation.

Just two short lines of poetry shocked everyone.

"Wonderful......" Liang Ling couldn't help but flush with excitement, she could already predict that a classic poem that could be circulated in the poetry world was being born!

"The most is the gentleness of the bowed head / like a water lotus flower, the shyness of the cool breeze." Liang Ling formed a wonderful artistic conception in her mind, and she felt that it was a great pleasure to listen to such poems and appreciate the charm of such words.

She is immersed in the artistic conception of the poetry created by Su Wen, and she can be sure that only the latter sentence can be said to be a classic sentence in the poetry world.

In her opinion, there is nothing comparable to this sentence in the new poems that portray the posture of beauty.

Even if Su Wen can't write good poems later, just these two sentences can be praised if they are made into poems that are out of chapter.

"Su Wen really deserves to be Su Wen, this writing skill ......" Liang Ling can't imagine how pure Su Wen's grasp of words is, his poetic talent is simply jealous!

Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" is also good, but in terms of realm, it is much worse than Su Wen's two poems, with a lot less charm and less charm of words.

Liang Ling didn't think about the victory or defeat of the poetry competition at all, she was intoxicated by the wonderful charm of Su Wen's poems.

Next to him, Liang Zixu just listened to Su Wen's two poems, and his face was ugly.

He himself is a young literati, and his appreciation of poetry is naturally not bad, and he has also pondered and studied poetry, otherwise he would not have written poems like "Chance Encounter".

Liang Zixu is very satisfied with "Chance Encounter", he had a rough outline of the description of this poem before, and it can be regarded as a long time of pondering before writing it.

However, for the first two sentences of Su Wen's "Cherish", Liang Zixu found the gap between himself and Su Wen.

He felt that victory was hopeless, his heart was extremely bitter, his face was gloomy, and he was even desperate, the only extravagant hope in his heart was that Su Wen wrote the latter text much worse and destroyed the first two classic verses, so that he would have a little chance of winning.

But is it possible?

With Su Wen's ability, how could such a situation occur?

Really. I only heard Su recite two more lines of poetry in a more cheerful tone:

"A word of cherishment, a word of cherishment / There is sweet sorrow in that cherishment."

Boom, the audience shook again, everyone's eyes widened, looking incredulous, some holding their heads in their hands. It's like hearing something incredible.

"There is a sweet sorrow in that cherished voice...... this is another classic verse, which corresponds to "like a water lotus flower that is not shy, and the cool breeze is shy".

These two poems can be called classics in the poetry world!

Su Wen stopped, spread his hands, and motioned for his poetry to read.

A small poem "Cherished" was officially displayed in front of everyone.

Sure enough, as Su Wen said, the poem is very short, only four simple sentences, but it gives everyone an unimaginable experience!

The most is the gentleness of the bowed head.

Like a water lotus flower, it is too shy to cool the breeze,

A word of cherishment, a word of cherishment,

There was sweet sorrow in that cherished sound.

……

Four sentences, one poem, this is the charming "Treasure"!

Of course, if anyone knows the origin of Su Wen, they can naturally hear that this is Xu Zhimo's "Shayanara". It is said that this is a poem written by a handsome man Xu describing the shyness of a woman in Dongying. Originally, there were many poems, and later such a small poem was formed.

In the original text. It is five sentences, followed by the words "Shayanara", which means "goodbye" in Japanese.

This is a scene depicting the poet and the beautiful woman saying goodbye to each other, the whole poem is fresh, the rhyme is harmonious, and the metaphor is novel. The imagination is rich and the artistic conception is beautiful. In particular, the two sentences "water lotus" and "sweet sorrow" can be called classics in literary history!

Its charm can make almost anyone who doesn't like poetry fall in love with it at once.

Su Wen was scared to death by Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" just now, but fortunately, he found out later that it was not the full text of "Accidental" by Xu Da Handsome Guy. That's just a little reassuring.

If it is Xu Zhimo's "Accidental", Su Wen does not think that "Shayanara" can win it, after all, the former is more unique in form and more profound in connotation, while the latter is just a beautiful artistic conception, at most it can only be said that the feelings are depicted very delicately and complexly.

Fortunately, Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" is several streets behind "Accidental" in terms of words and thoughts, which is much easier for Su Wen to deal with.

almost thought that the other party was the reincarnation of Xu Zhimo, Su Wen's bad taste came up, and he also chose a poem by a handsome guy Xu and fought with him.

If he wanted to have something to do with what he saw and heard in college, Su Wen suddenly couldn't figure out the theme of Xu Shuaige's other poems, so he had to choose the small poem "Shayanara", change the title, and omit the sentence "Shayanara".

In fact, Su Wen is not very satisfied with omitting "Shayanara", but in this era, small Japan has no status, and it is too far-fetched to use these four words here. If you don't use it, it's as if the poem is suddenly missing something, which is equivalent to being cut off the tail, and it's a little incomplete.

Maybe it's a formal incompleteness, or maybe it's a preconceived idea that it has to be like this. When Su Wen pondered before, he felt that he should use the words "goodbye" or "cherish", but after a while, he felt that writing like this still lacked a little charm and seemed cumbersome.

On last thought, I don't need anything at all, just four sentences. Anyway, the two "Cherish the Words" have already shown the cause and effect of the matter, that is, the scene of saying goodbye to each other, ending with "sweet sorrow", which also seems to have a longer charm.

As a result, a poem titled "Shayanara" by Su Wen with the title of "Cherished" was displayed in front of everyone.

The effect is still leveraged, just look at the stunned expressions of the teachers and students on the scene!

When Su Wen walked off the stage after saying "My poem is finished, thank you", there was a burst of applause, which lasted for nearly a minute, and did not stop after Su Wen returned to his seat.

The applause was followed by a round of applause:

"Good poetry, really good poetry! is a "cherished", which really writes the posture of a beautiful woman to the fullest! ”

"As soon as "Cherish" comes out, in the new poem written about women, who will compete!"

"Like a water lotus, it is not too shy to cool the breeze...... Oh, I'm going to get drunk, what kind of posture is that a beautiful woman, I really want to see this beauty! ”

"Is this a depiction of the goddess Suwen? This woman is so lucky to be praised by such a poem, and I dare say that if this is really someone, to show it, it is just because of this poem that she can become a symbol of literary history! It's so enviable! It's so jealous! ”

"Does such a woman exist? Is it the school flower of Su Wen School? I think this is his artistically processed image, there can be no such woman! ”

Most of the latter words that were unconvinced and full of vinegar were expressed by girls, who envied the women portrayed by Su Wen in such a tone, and were jealous that she had such luck.

They all know that "Cherish" will be spread because of Su Wen's fame, and it will also become another classic poem in the poetry world!

How they longed to be such women, how they wished that this poem was written about them.

The boys' voices are much more direct, and they also long to have such a woman around them, and it is best to have an ambiguous relationship with them!

As soon as Su Wen returned to his seat, Ma Junwu leaned over and said with great admiration: "Boss Su, you are really bullish, you really deserve the title of the first young person in the literary world, your poetry is simply amazing!" Don't talk about Liang Zixu, I think it's even if the Venerable Donglian is here, he may not be able to compare with you! ”

Su Wen shook his head and smiled when he heard this.

Liu Hua and Li Ge also gave Su Wen a thumbs up and praised his poems for being so well written.

On the other side, Liang Zi sat in his seat blankly, full of disappointment, Su Wen did not write the rest of the poem as he prayed.

On the contrary, the latter sentence "There is sweet sorrow in that cherished sound" simply brought the whole poem to life, corresponding to "the shyness of the water lotus is not better than the cool breeze", forming a whole and pushing the artistic conception of this poem to a peak!

In just four lines of poetry, there are two sentences that can be called classics, is this still written by people, it is not an exaggeration to say that it is a poet immortal!

Unlike Liang Zixu, who was discouraged, Liang Ling smiled with satisfaction, and her decision to follow Liang Zixu's suggestion to let everyone have a poetry competition was not wrong, because Su Wen's "Cherish" is about to become a good story in the literary world!

Yes, in Liang Ling's view, "Cherish" has such value.

Liang Zixu is also good, "Chance Encounter" has the level of a great poet, but unfortunately, he met Su Wen's "Treasure", in comparison, who is superior and who is inferior, at a glance!

Thinking of this, Liang Ling slowly stood up, and after pressing her hands to calm everyone down, she asked with a smile, "Is there anyone else who wants to come up to show the work?" ”

The students shouted that it was gone, and some of them still said what they were going to do, would they be embarrassed in front of Su Wen?

This means that the works of those people before are much worse than Su Wen's "Cherish", and they can't even be compared. Others are just fine, Liang Zixu listened, his face was very dark, and his heart was full of grievances and unwillingness.

Just when Liang Ling asked everyone to raise their hands to vote on whose poem was the best, Liang Zi stood up in vain and said out loud something that shocked everyone! (To be continued......)