Chapter 204: Su Wen's Second Poem
"Mr. Liang, I think before voting on the works, we should comment on everyone's works, or let the author express the theme of the creation!" Liang Zixu interrupted Liang Ling with a stiff face, and asked everyone to vote on the merits of the work.
His words startled everyone.
Soon, they reacted that Liang Zixu was unconvinced by the rhythm, or rather, he thought that his works were much more profound than Su Wen's poems.
In a word, he is just not convinced!
Liang Ling was stunned for a moment when she heard this, and soon she was greatly displeased, she was a little annoyed that Liang Zixu hindered her move to carry out the class meeting three times and twice!
"Classmate Liang, what kind of review do you want!" Liang Ling said very unceremoniously, "Although your works are of a good level and the things you want to express are also profound, your lack of ability to grasp words is obvious." In your writing, you use some places quite bluntly, with the meaning of 'worrying about new words', which is not natural enough! I don't see the beauty of poetry. Compared with Su Wen's "Treasured", your work is indeed a level lower! If I had voted for it, I would have chosen Su Wen's work to win, not yours. Of course, I've just promised to let everyone decide who wins and who loses, so I won't interject and let everyone choose! ”
In the end, Liang Ling's tone became more and more serious, she was really angry with Liang Zixu, and there was no euphemism in her comments.
Liang Zixu was not convinced when he heard this, and said stubbornly: "Teacher Liang, poetry is either beautiful or good poetry. Poetry is a good poem if it also expresses the depth of thought. Isn't this the pursuit of our Chinese literature for thousands of years? If the words are beautiful and good poetry, then aren't the euphemistic words of the Flower School or the Euphemism School invincible? I admit that Su Wen's "Cherish" is beautifully written, but I don't see any depth that he can express except for the gesture of a beauty! At least. I don't think his "Precious" is as good as my "Chance Encounter". If everyone lets Su Wen win just because of his fame, I am very unconvinced, at least, I can't convince me! ”
Obviously, Liang Zixu is also out of the way, and he makes the last effort for himself!
Like he said. He couldn't convince Su Wenxin, and he couldn't even reach the oral level, so he let him admit defeat, this is not his personality!
Young people are like this, they are competitive, and their stubborn temper flars up, and no one can do anything about it.
Liang Ling was stunned for a moment, she didn't expect Liang Zixu to be so difficult, and she couldn't think of anything for a while.
The students at the bottom had mixed reactions. Some think that Liang Zixu is reasonable, but some think that he can't afford to lose:
"Liang Zixu is too stubborn, it's all at this level, and the duck has a hard mouth! His poems are obviously not as good as Su Wen! ”
"Liang Zixu deserves to be a man in the Northeast, dare to speak out, say that he is not convinced, he is not convinced!"
"I think there's a good show to watch now......"
The students just have to watch it, and they are not involved anyway. Therefore, they are happy to see Liang Zixu's "resistance".
Ma Junwu almost jumped up and scolded: "This surnamed Liang is really hateful." It's just shameless! is obviously inferior to others, but he doesn't admit it, and what do you say that the text carries the Tao and the poem is the will, isn't this a quibble! If he wasn't in the classroom right now, I'd have to beat him up! ”
"Old Ma, I mentally support you to beat him!" Liu Hua seems to be afraid that the world will not be chaotic. Coaxed said.
Li Ge also said: "It's best to beat him so that you can't even recognize him!" ”
Ma Junwu ignored these two sluts, and turned to Su Wen and said, "Boss Su, what is your opinion?" ”
Su Wen smiled: "What can I say?" ”
He really doesn't have any opinions, he doesn't want to be the class leader, and this class will be reduced to a poetry competition. He was also forced to deal with it.
Regarding Liang Zixu's defense, he was noncommittal, thinking that this was a manifestation of a young man's refusal to admit defeat, and he was not an ordinary person, so he did not need to be familiar with such a person.
The students have no right to decide, as the head teacher, Liang Ling has a headache, Liang Zi is unconvinced, and she is not easy to suppress directly, so she has to ask: "Classmate Liang, now that the classmates have not voted, you say that you are not convinced, does that mean that you subconsciously think that your poems are not as good as Su Wen's poems, and you are going to lose this competition?" Otherwise, why don't you wait for the results to come out, and maybe you win in the end? ”
"Ha ......"
The students below laughed.
Some coaxed and said: "That's it, Liang Zixu, you are too unconfident, we haven't voted yet!" Originally, I was going to vote for you, but since you don't have confidence, then I have to vote for someone else! ”
Some sarcastically said: "What if you are not convinced, we just want to vote for Su Wen, we just feel that his poetry has moved us!" The surname is Liang, you think you are a talented person, so don't take all of us for fools! If you really want to study and cultivate, we won't lose to you! Which poem is better, who is more level, do you think we are blind and can't see it? ”
Some even said: "Whether you accept it or not, at least we are convinced!" "Precious" is indeed better than your "Chance Encounter"! Even if I vote ten times, I will choose "Cherish" to win! ”
The students who talked casually all ignored other people who had read poetry on stage, and anyone with a discerning eye could see that this competition was a decisive victory between Su Wen and Liang Zixu.
If there was no Su Wen, Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" was indeed a high-level poem, but unfortunately, he met Su Wen!
Regardless of anything else, just the sentence "like a water lotus flower is not better than the shyness of the cool breeze", that metaphor, that image, that artistic conception, almost no one can stand out!
Such poems are not popular, so are there any good poems in the world?
"Liang Zixu, don't make trouble, okay!" One student shouted out the words.
Liang Zixu's face darkened when he heard this, he didn't want to make trouble, he just didn't accept it!
"Classmate Liang, don't do anything about it, you sit down quickly, I'm going to let everyone start voting." The head teacher Liang Ling also gave Liang Zixu a final notice.
"Teacher Liang, what else to vote for, we just think Su Wen's poems are the best! Just choose him! ”
"Yes, yes, yes, just choose Su Wen!"
"Except for Su Wen. No one else! ”
"We'll serve Su Wen!"
“……”
The students coaxed one after another, and the number of people was almost more than eighty percent, and the remaining two percent were either introverts who didn't talk much, or they were people who were familiar with Liang Zixu.
Liang Zixu, who was still standing, turned red and white for a while. Suddenly yelled: "Can you people have a little bit of your own opinions, can you have a little higher pursuit!" You are studying at the Huaxia Academy of Literature, and you are studying at the highest level of literary knowledge. Literature is still about connotation and depth, not flowery rhetoric! I am very disappointed in your consciousness and very dissatisfied with your aesthetics! We are all proud of the future, we should have our own literary propositions, we can't follow the crowd, and we can't be shallow without pursuit! I stick to my literary point of view. What's wrong with me wanting only literary depth and not flowery rhetoric! You say, 'Am I wrong?' ”
In the end, Liang Zixu was almost hoarse, as if he shouted out his last persistence and dignity!
yes, was he wrong?
Many people were stunned and carefully pondered Liang Zixu's words. I'm a little ashamed.
Yes, there are many literary claims. Perhaps the various schools of thought can attack each other, but it is precisely because of their respective persistence that a flourishing situation of literature can be formed.
For those who insist on their pursuits, they should be respected.
I have to say that Liang Zixu's mouth is very deep. Not to mention the students, even Liang Ling listened to his arguments and subconsciously reviewed herself, was she wrong?
Is this Liang Zixu the real literati?
Su Wen is like Uncle Lu Xun. He has never been afraid to speculate on others with the worst malice, others may be shaken by Liang Zixu's words, but he feels that this guy is quite scheming, such a small class meeting, Liang Zixu has used words several times to reverse the unfavorable situation.
said before that he wanted a good story in the literary world, which made everyone agree to hold a poetry competition; Now, he is fooling people with the pursuit of literary ideas, and wants everyone to support him.
According to him, he Liang Zixu is a representative of literary depth, while Su Wen, who was criticized by him, is a shallow and ignorant category.
According to this theory, the people who support him Liang Zixu have pursuits and ideals; And those who support Su Wen are ignorant and shallow!
So, the next voting situation may be about to reverse, right?
Su Wen doesn't want to be classified as a shallow and ignorant literati!
Thinking of this, Su Wen couldn't help but sneer loudly: "Classmate Liang, according to what you said, the rhetoric is gorgeous and has no literary value?" Then Li Qingzhao's words and phrases such as 'people are thinner than yellow flowers', wouldn't they all have to be swept into the garbage heap? Literary poetry, I don't think there is a need to be confined to a limitation, whether it is profound or beautiful, it should exist, it should be beautiful, it should be profound, as long as it is written appropriately. I write my heart by hand, how can the ancients be restrained! Su Dongpo wrote heroic words wisely, but he also wrote many excellent euphemisms. Li Bai is known as a poet immortal, and has written a lot of poems full of aura, and he also has the blandness of 'bright moonlight in front of the bed'. However, can you say that "Silent Night Thoughts" is not a good poem, and do you dare to say that it does not express depth? ”
This was what Su Wen said the most today, and he could not have imagined that a class meeting would end up being a debate on literary ideas.
He doesn't want to be a squad leader, and he doesn't necessarily care about winning or losing, but he doesn't want to be used as a stepping stone to let others go to a high place. So, he has to defend his work!
Liang Zixu listened to Su Wen's words, but he sneered again and again, and said: "Su Wen, you are simply ashamed!" Do you dare to compare yourself to great poets and writers such as Li Bai, Su Shi, and Li Qingzhao? You're too bold, aren't you, and no one has anyone in your sights to this point? ”
Su Wen's eyes flashed, and he slowly stood up and confronted Liang Zixu.
The two of them are far away from each other, you look at me, I look at you, as if there is no one else, as if there is no one else besides each other.
Smiling slightly, Su Wen stared at Liang Zixu and said, "Of course I don't dare to say that I am Li Bai, Su Shi and the like, but compared to you Liang Zixu, I really don't take you seriously." ”
"Arrogance!" Liang Zixu was angry and snorted coldly.
Su Wen said leisurely: "You say I'm arrogant, then I'll let you know what real arrogance is today!" You said that your "Chance Encounter" is written very profoundly and substantially? I'll go! Next, I will let you know what is profoundness and connotation! ”
Su Wen and Liang Zixu quarreled in front of the whole class, making everyone stunned, listening to their words, they looked at each other, and they couldn't make a sound at all.
Even the head teacher Liang Ling was dumbfounded!
When they heard Su Wen say that Liang Zixu should see what profundity and connotation are, they reacted, and they were all extremely excited - according to Su Wen's meaning, he wanted to make a big show and continue to make better works?
This time, play with profundity and connotation?
"It's worth it! It's worth it! This class will be on duty! ”
"Another good show?"
"Wow wow! I heard that Su Wen used to write in a state of anger, and he wrote several articles at a time, isn't that a feat going to be repeated now? ”
The students were shocked, but Liang Ling was a little happy, thinking: "This class meeting has created a unique situation for me!" If Su Wen has good works, at the same level as "Cherish", then this class meeting will really be famous! ”
Liang Zixu also heard the meaning of Su Wen's words, panicked in his heart, but after calming down, he said hard-headedly: "Su Wen, don't be arrogant, you think you can scare people by being loud?" I'm not going to eat you! ”
Su Wen laughed when he heard this: "Ha! Whether it's scaring or not, you'll find out later. Classmate Liang, I didn't want to meet you in general, but you deceive people too much, so don't blame me for not giving you face! ”
Liang Zixu felt that something was wrong, Su Wen seemed to be going to do something humiliating, but he couldn't show his cowardice, so he had to sneer a few times.
Su Wen glanced at the class, fixed his eyes on Liang Ling, and said, "Teacher Liang, didn't Liang write about the theme of encounters?" I'd like to give you a new poem on this theme. What do you think? ”
"Good! That's how it should be! ”
"Tsk, Su Wen deserves to be Su Wen, writing the same theme, this is Hongguoguo who wants to slap someone Liang Zixu's face!"
Of course, slapping Su in the face has never been shouted in vain. But...... The same theme, you have to write better, otherwise it will become a joke! ”
The students must have been heckling.
As for the head teacher Liang Ling, after being stunned for a moment, he also said it again and again.
"Mr. Liang, do you think I can write poems with the same theme as you?" Su Wen's eyes fell on Liang Zixu, as if he was smiling.
Liang Zixu gave him a strange gaze, and said stiffly: "There are many poems with the same theme, if you want to write them, of course I can't stop you." You don't have to report it to me! ”
Hearing Su Wen say that it was a new poem, Liang Zixu still had some hope, after all, it was not Su Wen's ancient poem "If life is only as first seen", he didn't believe that Su Wen could write a poem that was more classic than "life"!
"It's good if you agree." Su Wen laughed.
Glancing at everyone, and glancing at Liang Zixu again, Su Wen cleared his throat, waited for everyone to calm down, and slowly read out the first sentence of his second poem today-
Just hearing the first sentence, all the teachers and students were stunned and looked at each other, thinking that Su Wen had made a mistake! (To be continued......)