"This is my continuation of "Missing", and it also incorporates the ancient poem I wrote. Personally, I think it's still appropriate, but I don't know what everyone thinks. I don't think it's appropriate to call it "Missing", it's an exhortation poem. Since there are so many ten, you can call it "The Ten Commandments". ”

In the surprised eyes of everyone, Xu Huan slowly said this summary sentence.

Obviously, Xu Huan has a very big ambition - he not only wants to change Su Wen's poem, but also completely subvert this work, and turn it into his content, not only to re-establish the theme and title.

Xu Huan is going to turn this poem into his poem!

To be honest, Su Wen didn't expect to see the advent of "Ten Commandments Poems" in this world, saying that this "Ten Commandments Poems", which was adapted by many netizens, once formed a fixed impression in the hearts of readers, making people think that it was really written by Cangyang Gyatso. It's not just ordinary readers who think so, but even those rigorous magazines and publications are published in the name of Cangyang Gyatso.

This shows the influence of this poem.

It first uses the first two sentences of Cangyang Gyatso, and does not say what the content is added later, so that it can take the lead in the concept and make people impressive. Moreover, it is written around the word "love", which has pierced the hearts of many people, and it is normal for it to become a poem that they know by heart.

Xu Huan was obviously satisfied with his own "adaptation" work, and was proud.

The students at the scene did not live up to his efforts, and cheers came one after another:

"What a "Ten Commandments", so well written, I ...... I was so impressed! ”

"It's better not to ...... In short, everything is caused by love, and everything can be reshaped as long as there is no love. However, love comes naturally. No one can resist. So, can you not love? One love, a lifetime mistake! ”

This "Ten Commandments" seems to be an admonition to the world not to love, saying that it is a precept, but in fact, it is also love! With love, there will be regrets in life. But there is indescribable beauty. It's also a beautiful poem! ”

"......" said what he liked, and most of the people who felt moved were girls, who were the most emotional, and they were the least resistant to such a love poem that sang and sighed back and forth.

There are also boys who praise it, but when they talk about love, someone suddenly comes to the emotion of "life is only as first seen"!

After sighing, I was shocked, isn't this going back to Su Wen's way!

Hear the cheers and cheers of the audience. Haizhi's face was a little unsightly, his face was gloomy, and he hummed: "What is there to rejoice in such a poem!" I don't know what to do! ”

"What, you have another opinion?" The island asked with a smile.

Haizhi said coldly: "What kind of "Ten Commandments Poem" Xu Huan is tinkering with, why does it look very bluffing, but if you chew it carefully, it is nothing more than repeating that thing." It's not that it's love, it's love! It may be possible to fool ignorant little girls, but for those of us. Do you think his poems are good? Will it be better than Su Wen's "Missing"? Island, if you dare to say yes. All I can say is that you are depraved, be careful that I break off my friendship with you! ”

The island stopped talking.

It is true that, as Hai Zhi said, Xu Huan's "Ten Commandments Poems" can only fool ignorant juniors, and for them poetry professionals, this can almost only be said to be a comparison.

Too straightforward. It's too bland, it's too flat, and it doesn't have the beauty of poetry at all. Even if it can attract people, it is still Su Wen's song "Missing" that attracts attention. In general, it is still the credit of Su Wen, who is the first and second missing.

Compared with Su Wen's original poem, there are only two sentences. Xu Huan's poems are really not beautiful, to be precise, there is only form and no god. Compared with Su Wen's "Missing", it has less infinite charm, like chewing wax.

However, they are professional, which does not mean that all readers and listeners can be more sensible.

Looking at the cheering and excited students at the scene, Haidao shook his head slightly, and sighed in his heart: "This is also the helplessness of the development of the times." Nowadays, people don't have the patience to ponder poetry and only pursue superficial work. Some people even regard just a few sentences into paragraphs as modern poetry, alas! ”

Thinking of this, Haidao was quite worried that Su Wen would be hit, and couldn't help but look at him, but was surprised to find that Su Wen's face gradually calmed down, and even the shocked look just now dissipated.

"Why is Su Wen so calm, does he have any other trump card?" Haidao was quite puzzled, but when he thought about it, he suddenly realized, "He won't really wait to change Xu Huan's poem, right?" ”

The competition for the Star of Poetry is never so easy, and Xu Huan would be naïve if he planned to change Su Wen's poetry to win the title - even if he successfully adapted Su Wen's "Missing" twice!

Adaptation is adaptation, no matter how good it is, it is not original, it is really your own, and there will be many issues involved, such as copyright and reputation. It's like Su Wen changed Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" before, even if the changed "Accidental" is successful and excellent, he can't say that he took it for publication, otherwise Liang Zixu wouldn't be able to spare him.

Xu Huan's "Ten Commandments Poems" is the same, the first two sentences are almost Su Wen's original text, and it is really difficult to say that it is his, at least, it is impossible to make a profit from it. If someone takes this as a strange thing in the future, lists it, and makes this poem public, it can be said that it is Xu Huan's writing skills.

Of course, Xu Huan said that the seven-character quatrain translated into ancient poems can be published openly, although there is the meaning and theme of Suwen's "Missing", but there is no same text, and there will be no copyright disputes.

Haidao was sure that Su Wen had a chance to change his poetry, and it was he who knew that the changed poetry could not be regarded as his own to compete for tonight's poetry star.

In other words, Xu Huan will also take out his original poems.

Something original is more powerful, and it is also his greatest reliance. Revising Su Wen's poetry is nothing more than to prove to everyone that he has the ability to change Su Wen's poetry, so that everyone will admire and trust him more.

This is a preemptive tactic to impress and preconceive in everyone's minds, and to create a tall image of him in everyone's minds. In addition, it is also a means of striking the opponent, showing everyone: look! Su Wen's poetry is nothing more than that, hasn't it turned me upside down?

This dealt a blow to Su Wen's prestige, shook his image in everyone's minds, and gave himself a head start in the competition for the star of poetry.

The island thought so. couldn't help but worry about Su Wen, for fear that Su Wen would really be defeated by Xu Huan and lose his sharpness.

But no matter how he looked at Su Wen, he didn't look like he was hit, his face was indifferent, but also indifferent, and sometimes he looked at Xu Huan on the stage and smiled.

All right. Today's young people, the island really can't understand, whether he is pretending to be forced or pretending to be stupid, he can't see it at all.

On stage, Xu Huan was very satisfied with the effect he made, and he felt that his adaptation of Su Wen's poems was very successful, just look at the level of applause for his "Ten Commandments".

It gave him a boost of confidence!

"Su Wen is nothing remarkable, I can also trample him under my feet!" Xu Huan was very proud in his heart, "This year I am the president of the Poetry Association. The star of poetry in each issue is controlled by Yi leisurely, and for three whole years I can only look up to her existence. Now I'm going to turn over, I'm going to be the brightest star! ”

Xu Huan knew that this year was the person he was most likely to become a poetry star, because he had the title halo of the president, and he was born with an advantage.

Now that Yi has stepped down as the president, even if she participates in this competition for the poetry star, she has no aura of the president. Xu Huan is not afraid of her anymore. In his opinion, the gap between him and Yi Youran has gradually narrowed and disappeared because of the exchange of identities. Or even the other way around.

Well, the poetry salon of the Poetry Society twice a year, this time and the next time he is the most likely chance to receive the title of Star of Poetry. By the time Xu Huan is a senior next year, he will have to step down as president of the Poetry Association, and this advantage will disappear again.

So. This time, Xu Huan is determined to win!

Su Wen's appearance made him surpass Yi Youran to become Xu Huan's biggest opponent, of course he had to do everything possible to knock the other party down.

Changing poetry is just an appetizer, and the next thing you need to do is to suppress the other party with the best poetry, so that the other party can't move and can't afford to fight!

Confident, Xu Huan took a deep breath. looked up at everyone, and said affectionately: "The Ten Commandments Poems can make everyone laugh, I am very satisfied and happy, I also know that after all, this is only an adapted poem, and it is a bit reluctant to say that it is mine, so much can only be said that I will add it later." So, I'm not very satisfied with this poem. I want to use my own words and poems to satisfy and praise everyone, and that is my greatest wish. ”

"President Xu, we are your biggest supporters, please read your poems out quickly, let us enjoy it."

"President Xu is too modest, you are the president of our Poetry Association, you are the greatest talent, we don't support who you support!"

"President Xu has been silent for two years, and he is finally about to show his grandeur, which is so good and exciting......

There were many fans and supporters of Xu Huan at the scene, and they shouted words of support at this time. Those shouts were warm and generous, making the scene even more lively.

Xu Huan pressed his hands in the void, and said with a smile: "Okay, good, thanks to everyone's affordability, I will present my new poems to everyone." I just adapted a love poem, and this time I still write love poems. Love is a wonderful emotion and a wonderful inspiration, best expressed in poetry. I hope this poem about love will be enjoyed by everyone, and the next poem of mine is called "The Farthest Distance in the World". ”

"The farthest distance in the world? I get drunk as soon as I hear the name, it must be a good poem! ”

"It must be a good poem, the distance and love are a perfect match!"

"I can't think of anything to say other than applause."

"I'll rub!" In the roaring response of everyone, Su Wen couldn't help but scold his mother, as soon as he heard the name of Xu Huan's next poem, he felt familiar, and there was a faint strange feeling.

"It can't really be that one, right?" Su Wen's forehead began to sweat.

Not because I'm afraid, but because I'm panicked. The feeling that Xu Huan gave him today was so strange that he almost thought that the handsome guy Xu was also a traverser.

Fortunately, after inquiring about it to the sea, he was sure that none of Xu Huan's previous published poems were familiar to him, so he thought that "Ten Commandments Poems" was a coincidence.

Now, what the hell is "The Furthest Distance in the World", or is it a coincidence?

Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter", Xu Huan's "Ten Commandments Poem", and the upcoming "The Farthest Distance in the World", all kinds of coincidences made Su Wen's heart empty, and he faintly found that even if these two people are not traversers, it may be because of the appearance of this traverser, which has had a slight impact on the development trajectory of this world.

This influence is manifested first and foremost in people who intersect with him, and in people who are young and have developmental plasticity!

This feeling gave him the illusion that he was not the only one in this world, which was very uncomfortable and unpleasant.

Xu Huan made up his mind not to make Su Wen comfortable tonight, and after hearing his deep feelings, he chanted in a frustrated voice:

The farthest distance in the world / It's not that I can't say I love you / It's that I want you to be heartbroken, but I can only bury it deep in my heart

The farthest distance in the world / It's not that I can't say I miss you / It's that we love each other, but we can't be together

The farthest distance in the world / It's not that we love each other, but we can't be together / It's that we can't resist this breath, but we still have to pretend that we don't care

The farthest distance in the world / It's not that you can't resist this breath, but you still pretend not to care / It's that you use an indifferent heart to dig an insurmountable ditch between you and the person who loves you

The farthest distance in the world / is not the trajectory of the stars that is within reach / but the intersection of trajectories but nowhere to be found in an instant

The farthest distance in the world / is not to be found in an instant / but not to meet before we meet, and we are destined to not be able to meet

……

A song "The World's Farthest Distance" is amazing!

Everyone was shocked by this sad and beautiful poem, and they were all dumbfounded, this kind of poetry has always been the weakness of literary and artistic youth, and it hit the ground when it was poked, which softened their whole hearts.

In this poem, people who have been in love, or who have a he/him in their hearts, when they hear it, even if they are not as exaggerated as tears, they are also related and unable to control themselves. Not to mention that the sorrow comes from it, but it is also felt in the heart.

At first glance, only silence can represent their state of mind. Be silent for love, be silent for him/him, be silent for yourself. is close at hand, but it is the farthest distance, this is the ruthlessness of sentient men and women!

What does it feel like for someone who has never been in a relationship to listen to it?

It's more complicated, there is yearning, there is apprehension, and there is a fantasy of beautiful love, and there is a little bitterness mixed in the fantasy. I don't know where this bitterness comes from, it's so stalky in my heart, it can't be erased, and it's so complicated that it can't be overstated.

The audience was all silent, silently looking up at Xu Huan on the podium.

At this moment, all the lights shone on him, making him extremely dazzling!

Silently, Su Wen raised his head slightly, watching Xu Huan's gaze shoot a trace of inexplicable light, the corners of his mouth pulled slightly, and a complicated smile floated on it...... (To be continued......)