Xu Huan said that he wanted to change Su Wen's poem, and the atmosphere at the scene was very excited.

Everyone is interested in which one he wants to change.

It is said that although Su Wen has published a poetry collection, the number of poems is too cheating, and there are only more than 30 poems in total, and this number is out of a poetry collection.

But to be honest, although the quantity is small, the quality is fine. Now everyone is shouting the slogan "Su Wen products, must be high-quality".

For this, anyone who has read Su Wen's poetry has to admit that it is not an exaggeration to say that he is the conscience of the industry.

His poems are all high-quality poems, not to mention the difficulty of a thousand gold, it must be difficult to change it. Before Su Wen changed Liang Zixu's poems, although it was better after the change, most of the content was still rewritten on the basis of Liang Zixu's poems.

So, how will Xu Huan change his fine poems?

Xu Huan wanted to change the poem, and the biggest opinion was Hai Zhi, his brows were furrowed, and he said to the island: "What is Xu Huan thinking, how can such a thankless thing as changing a poem be done?" If you change it, people will say at most that you have a good grasp of the text; If you change it for the worse, people will laugh at you for not being able to do it. ”

"He probably wants to imitate Su Wenjiao." Haidao said with a smile.

"Imitation?" Hai Zhi didn't quite understand, "What do you mean?" ”

Haidao suddenly said, "Yes, yes, I forgot that you have left the Faculty of Letters, and it is impossible to understand every move here. There was an incident in the school forum about Su Wen before, and I thought you knew about it. Haha, that's your loss, you still said that you are Su Wen's number one fan, and you even missed his new poems! ”

Haizhi's brow furrowed even more.

Haidao hurriedly told Su Wen about fighting poems with others in class, and said that he had come up with two new poems, one of which he wrote. One is to change people's homes.

"How's it going?" Hai Zhi's heart was itching, as soon as he heard that Su Wen had a new poem coming out, he couldn't wait to see it, if it weren't for Xu Huan above to start taking out his poems, he would have found a place to read them on the Internet.

"Not bad, not bad." The island nodded repeatedly. glanced at the absent-minded Su Wen next to him, and praised it twice, "Produced by Su Wen, can it be worse?" ”

The sea finger is even more itchy.

Haidao ignored him, and turned to teasing and said: "Su Wen, people Xu Huan wants to change your poems, what do you think?" ”

"Can I say thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river?" Su Wen shrugged.

Haidao laughed and said, "That's the reason! But he's doing Hedong now, and you can do Hexi later. ”

"What do you mean?" Su Wen was stunned for a moment.

Haidao smiled: "He changes yours now." Wait a minute, you can change him. You're changing it, ha, it's more fun! ”

Su Wen was dumbfounded.

Hai Zhi glared at the island and said, "Island, don't teach bad children." This kind of slap in the face will ruin the atmosphere of the salon tonight. ”

Haidao shrugged: "Xu Huan did the first year of junior high school, and you still don't allow Su Wen to be fifteen?" ”

Haizhi was speechless for a while, and only asked after a while: "I'm strange, didn't Xu Huan just say that he hadn't read Su Wen's poetry collection?" So which poem is he going to change? Just the two songs that Su Wen was put on the school forum two days ago? ”

Haidao rolled his eyes and couldn't help but say, "Sea finger." I don't even know what to say about you! He said he hadn't read it, and you believed it? He is the president of the school's poetry association, and now it is time for the club to recruit new students, Su Wen is such a freshman in the limelight, do you think he has never heard of Su Wen's name? Everyone writes poetry, facing such a strong newcomer. I don't believe he didn't find Su Wen's poetry collection and read it! ”

"Then why did he lie?" The sea finger is puzzled.

Haidao laughed and said, "Maybe you can't wipe your face." In short, he must be very familiar with Su Wen's poetry, otherwise he would dare to change it. The two poems on the forum have no room for change, they can only be other poems. ”

The two poems of the Haizhi Island Evaluation Forum cannot be changed, and it is even more unbearable. Rubbing his hands anxiously, he wished that the salon would end immediately.

Haidao then wanted Su Wen to jokingly say, "Su Wen, what about my suggestion just now, let's take a look at your ability to change poetry?" ”

Su Wen smiled and smiled silently when he heard this, but his heart was about to move, he was moved by the island's proposal, he slowly raised his head and looked at the high-spirited Xu Rao on the stage.

On stage, Xu Huan quickly said the object of his adaptation: "I remember that Su Wen has a little poem "Missing" that is written like this: First, it is best not to meet, so that you can not fall in love. Second, it is best not to know each other, so that you will not fall along. Everyone said that this poem was written and meant to be timeless. But I think it's still too straightforward, and I think it could be more concise. ”

Only then did everyone know that Xu Huan was going to change Su Wen's "Missing".

"Want to revise 'Missing'?" The sea finger below was slightly startled, and his eyes widened and he said to the island, "Xu Huan is crazy." Can "Missing" still be changed? At first, I also thought this poem was a little more straightforward and long-winded, and it was rather weird, all of which were eight words. Later, after careful consideration, I found that the eight words are also eight words good, and the word "is" and "to" are used wonderfully! Indispensable. With these two words, the whole poem has the flavor of Buddha nature and Zen! ”

When he discussed this poem with Haidao in the past, he found out the author's intentions - it seems to be a love poem, but it has the flavor of Buddhism to persuade the world.

Hai Zhi said that Su Wen has read a hundred schools of thought and has a huge amount of reading, if it is not for the Buddhism, if there is no in-depth study of the classics of Buddhism, how can this kind of short poem that has won the essence of Buddhism!

These 32-character poems, every word is used cleverly, even a great god like Haizhi can't find a place that can be modified.

Why did Xu Huan say that he could change it?

After criticizing the straightforwardness of Su Wen's "Missing", Xu Huan continued: "Straightforward things are missing some of the beauty of poetry, so I want to condense this poem next." What kind of poetry is the most concise? Ancient poems, of course! I'm going to change this little poem by Su Wen into a seven-character quatrain. Su Wen, I know that you are also very good at writing ancient poems, so listen to it and point out my ancient poems. ”

Everyone turned their heads to look at Su Wen.

Xu Huan's trick is really amazing, not only to change Su Wen's poems. It is also necessary to use Su Wen's ability to revise ancient poetry.

It seems that Xu Huan came prepared this time.

"Su Wen's face is black now, right?" Quite a few people speculate like this.

Xu Huan didn't give Su Wen a chance to react, and after brewing his emotions, he muttered: "But if you have seen each other, you will know each other, and when you see each other, you will not see each other." Ander and Jun are resolute, and they are exempt from teaching life and death to be lovesick. ”

"Huh......" After listening to Xu Huan's chant, everyone was surprised.

"This poem ......"

"This is my translation of the ancient poem "Missing" in Su Wen." Xu Huan saw everyone's shocked expressions, and said in a loud voice with some pride.

The crowd burst into laughter.

In the literary world, everyone has always translated ancient poems into vernacular poems. It is really rare for them to translate modern poems into ancient poems. Xu Huan's way of making them feel novel.

Chew it carefully, and I think this poem is not bad!

"Ande...... Exempt from teaching life and death as lovesickness...... Tsk, this is the most subtle ancient translation of the best not seen! It seems that Xu Huan has eaten Su Wen's poem very thoroughly! ”

"Xu Huan, this is deliberate, deliberately trying to slap Su Wen in the face!"

"This translation is really good, Su Wen's face hurts, right?"

I don't know if my face hurts, but Su Wen's heart is like a stormy wave.

Of course, he remembered that there was a translation of an ancient poem by Cangyang Gyatso, which he discarded when he screened it before, and finally used Cangyang Gyatso's version.

And the ancient poems in his memory are exactly the same as the ancient poems that Xu Huan read!

Fortunately, a few days ago, I was frightened by Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter". Su Wen has a lot of nerves, and he deeply understands that some parts of this world are still very coincidental.

Now, coincidentally, Xu Huan also ran out of this ancient poem with great skill!

Although this poem is a translation of Cangyang Gyatso's small poems, but the ancient poetry is profound, and it is very well written.

Look at the amazing situation at the scene. knows that everyone is satisfied with Xu Huan's adaptation of his "Missing".

Bang Bang Bang!

This is the applause given to Xu Huan on the spot, loud and warm. In addition to cheers, there were some commotions, and it was lively for a while.

The most surprising thing is Yi Youran, she knows that Xu Huan is good at writing modern poems, works on formatting, and the paragraph layout is very exquisite. And the rhythm is also very beautiful and beautiful. But I have never heard that he can write ancient poems, and now it seems that Xu Huan usually hides some of them.

Or, for today, Xu Huan has been preparing for a long time. Carefully made, just to give Su Wen a dismount!

No matter which one it is, Yi Youran will only welcome it, and she is happy to see Su Wen deflated.

"Let you win the appreciation of the sea finger, let you be in the limelight......" Yi Youran's anger just now has not dissipated, and now seeing Su Wen's poem changed like this by Xu Huan, his heart is a little happy, so he even glanced at Su Wen several times, wanting to see his gloomy and embarrassed face.

Don't underestimate women, women's hearts are so stingy, don't offend them!

Haidao was also among the applause, clapping his hands and saying, "This Xu Huan really has a hand." This ancient poem is well written, the level is extremely high, and if the opportunity is good, it may be able to be circulated for a long time. ”

Haizhi frowned and said, "What's good, this poem is much worse than Su Wen's "Missing"! ”

Haidao couldn't cry or laugh: "Hai Finger, no matter how much you like Su Wen, you can't open your eyes and talk nonsense." ”

"You're biased against Su Wen because of me?" Haizhi smiled coldly and analyzed, "Then let's talk about it." First of all, I have to admit that Xu Huan's ancient poem is well written, at least it reflects his grasp of words. However, if you have to say that it is an ancient translation of "Missing", I will never agree with it! ”

"Why?" The island was puzzled.

Hai Zhi said: "If you think about it carefully, people Su Wen said 'the first is best no' and 'the second best is not', is it particularly flavorful to read?" What does it taste like? Zen! This poem is very Buddha-like, it is impressive when you read it, and you will feel emotionally when you read it again, and you will never forget it after reading it three times! ”

"You're exaggerating." The island smiled wryly.

Haizhi Zhengse said: "I'm not exaggerating at all, in short, I am willing to read Su Wen's "Missing", I only read it twice, and I wrote it down. In another twenty years, even if I can't memorize it, I can still remember it clearly if I look at it again. Can Xu Huan's poem have such an effect? No! No matter how you read it, it's just a poem of resentment! The Tang and Song people wrote more poems of this kind, and they were much more classic than him! This poem seems novel at first glance, but after a while it will be obscure! That's the difference between the two! ”

Hearing this, the island was thoughtful, and pondered along the line of thought of the sea finger, which is really like this!

"It seems that Xu Huan's writing skills are not bad, but the theme and artistic conception are still a little worse, this is the gap in the realm." The island sighed and sighed for the smug Xu Huan on the stage.

Haizhi nodded and said, "He is still too young, and he still needs to hone his temperament." ”

Hehe, saying young, isn't Su Wen younger than Xu Huan?

On the stage, Xu Huan was even more energetic, and said: "Maybe everyone thinks that the meaning of my poem is a little different from Su Wen's "Missing", and it does not show the charm of "first" and "second" missing. In fact, if it is really to be adapted, this poem can still go deeper. Would you like to hear my second adaptation of "Missing"? ”

"What? Is there a second version? ”

"What is Xu Huan going to do, one poem and two changes, to slap his face to the end?"

"This is also too arrogant, aren't you afraid of offending Su Wen to death? But...... Sister likes! ”

The scene is even more lively now, Xu Huan has given them too many surprises tonight, and there are waves of unevenness, so cool that they don't want it.

I only heard Xu Huankan say: "Su Wen only wrote the first and second missing, and I feel a little unfinished, so after I changed "Missing" a little, it was more refreshing to complete the back. Doesn't Buddhism advocate the four empty and eight commandments or something, the first and second do not see where to go, at least to make up to the eighth! It's okay if you don't see ten, and you can make it into a poem like the Ten Commandments. This is a bit long, so please be patient. ”

After a phone call, Xu Huan didn't give everyone time to buffer, and read out the poem he was drumming up:

First, it's best not to see each other, so that you don't fall in love. Second, it's better not to know each other, so that you don't love each other.

Thirdly, it is better not to be accompanied, so that you do not owe each other. Fourth, it is better not to cherish each other, so that you can not remember each other.

Fifth, it is better not to love each other, so that you can not abandon each other. Sixth, it is better not to be relative, so that we can not meet.

Seventh, it is better not to be wrong, so that there is no loss. Eighth, it is better not to allow each other, so that there can be no continuity.

Ninth, it is better not to depend on each other, so that you can not deceive each other. Tenth, it is better not to meet, so that we can not meet.

But if you have seen each other, you will know each other, and when you have not seen each other. Ander and Jun are resolute, and they are exempt from teaching life and death to be lovesick.

……

After Xu Huan finished reading, the people at the scene were dumbfounded. No one would have imagined that Xu Huan would change Su Wen's "Missing" so thoroughly!

Each eight-character poem was changed to seven characters for him, especially when he integrated the four sentences that he had just translated into the ancient poem to the end, but it didn't sound abrupt.

Although the ancient poem is out of place with the first ten sentences, both in terms of rhythm and plainness, the overall look is so natural.

In nature, there is also an indescribable taste.

"Is it possible...... This Xu Huan is the real traverser, not Liang Zixu? Su Wen was also dumbfounded. (To be continued......)