Chapter 206: A Confidant-like Poetic Review
Huaxia Academy of Literature and Literature placed the military training program in its own school, and did not go to the barracks like other schools.
The military training began in mid-September and lasted for two weeks, which can be regarded as a day of suffering for the students.
The day before the military training, the campus network forum of Huaxia Academy of Literature broke out a post called "Facts prove to you how murderous Su Wen is the first genius!" post.
The post claims to have pictures and truths, and it is about what happened at the class meeting of Su Wen's class.
The author is obviously a student in their class, and posted everything before and after the class meeting, from the bland class meeting to the twists and turns of the class president candidate.
The post spends more time on the competition for their squad president -- running for the post with a literary fight. When everyone else was playing soy sauce, Su Wen came to the stage, and the song "Cherish" made people feel the beauty of poetry. After that, the biggest villain, Liang Zixu, was unconvinced, thinking that his "Chance Encounter" and Su Wen should be written with connotation. Immediately afterwards, under the shock of everyone, Su Wen changed "Chance Encounter" again, and "Accidental" came out.
The student who posted the post obviously knew how to arouse the reader's interest, and wrote about it in a way that was full of twists and turns and climaxes, and it was addictive.
The most important thing is that he boldly posted three poems from others!
Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter", Su Wen's "Treasure" and "Accident".
In particular, "Chance Encounter" and "Accidental" were side by side by him, and the comparison between the two makes people see the difference at a glance.
Finally, the poster had this to say: "This is what happened to the first class meeting of our new Novel Creation Class 1!" I forgot what the others said. I only remember that there was such a person as Su Wen, and I only remember that he wrote two poems that resonated with me - of course, you could also say that there was only one, but after the correction of "Accidental". Even the original author doesn't dare to say that he wrote it, right? Su Wen, worthy of Su Wen! Please take my knees, I'll be a big fan of yours from now on! ”
This guy's post is very eye-catching, and it immediately attracted all the students who browsed the campus network, causing a lot of exclamations:
"I'm rubbing! Could it be that my brother is lagging behind and can't keep up with the thinking of children now? It's just a class meeting. There are so many features! Your Novel Writing Class 1 is going against the rhythm of the sky! ”
"No matter what, I finally saw the new poems of the talented Su Wen again. Love "Precious"! Like a water lotus, it is not too shy to cool the breeze...... portrays the goddess in my mind vividly, too vivid, too specific! I've never seen a woman write like this! ”
"What else is there to say, apart from his knees, he can't dedicate anything to the talented Su Wen!"
"Brother Su Wen, do you have a girlfriend, think about your sister......"
"Sister, we don't ...... appointment"
“……”
Among hundreds of followers. Except for a few who joined in the fun, most of them were people who praised Su Wen, to be exact, they praised Su Wen's new poems for their beauty!
Huaxia Academy of Literature is a professional liberal arts college, with the purpose of cultivating writers and literary critics, not to mention their teachers, but also the students inside, and their literary attainments are judged as a whole. There is no university in the country that can compare with them.
From this, we can also understand how high the vision of their students is, ordinary literati. Ordinary articles are difficult to get into their eyes, let alone praise.
However, Su Wen did it, and his two classic poems adapted from Xu Da Handsome Guy are endlessly charming. In this world, it can still exude an irresistible charm, which is touching and admirable.
Most of the people who talked about the post paid attention to Su Wen and ignored Liang Zixu. Even if Liang Zixu is mentioned. is also laughing at his inferior skills, and writing a "Chance Encounter" also made Su Wen change it to a better "Accidental"!
In short, Liang Zixu has become a negative teaching material.
It is said that after seeing these comments on the campus network, Liang Zixu's face became darker and greener, and he almost smashed his computer.
On the other side, Su Wen's roommate said with a smile that Su Wen once again became famous on campus, which was enviable.
Ma Junwu behaved even more hotly, and shouted: "Boss Su, it's too easy for you to become famous, teach me!" You see me, I'm also a person who has published books, except for someone who paid attention to it in middle school, when I came here, no one knew which onion I was! ”
Liu Hua and Li Ge also looked at Su Wen expectantly, wanting him to give him some advice. After all, as a student of Huaxia Academy of Literature, there are few people who don't want to be great writers and writers, and as a literati, reputation is capital and achievements.
Su Wen spread his hands and said, "What can I do!" Everyone is a bright-eyed person, and the appreciation ability is not bad, as long as you have good works, are you afraid that you will not be able to become famous? I heard that there are many literary salons in the school, poetry, prose and so on, as long as your work impresses others in the salon, it is no problem to become a small celebrity in the school. Let's participate more in the future! ”
Ma Junwu snorted: "You are a good man who doesn't know how hungry you are, do you think those salons are so easy to mix?" It is said that they have been controlled by some senior seniors, and it is where they pick up girls. And you can't just break in, you have to get an invitation. With your fame, you must not worry about the lack of invitations, we will be miserable! So...... If you have a chance, I'll ask you to take us in more! ”
"That's fine." Su Wen agreed.
After dealing with his roommates, Su Wen's eyes turned to the post on the campus network forum, it was not his intention to join in the fun, he just found a relatively long comment on the forum, talking about the "Cherished" and "Accidental" that he had drummed up.
This is written by an alumnus named "leisurely", Su Wen checked the other party's information, and the registration information showed that it was a woman!
Looking at the age again, she is twenty-three years old!
Chinese people generally start elementary school at the age of six, go to university at the age of eighteen, and if they have four years of undergraduate, they will only be about twenty-two years old when they graduate, and of course, there will be one or two years of error.
However, in Huaxia Academy of Literature, at the age of twenty-three, if you are a student, you are at least a fresh graduate, and there is another situation that you are a graduate student.
"Is this a graduate student?" Su Wen guessed, and what interested him was the comment made by this "leisurely", which looked very professional. There is also pertinence.
There is no nonsense in her post, just on poetry:
"The poem "Cherished" is simple and beautiful; Its beauty may be due to its simplicity. The poet only used Liao Liao's words to build an aesthetic stage, and staged the commonplace drama of life, so that people could taste the eternal world and human feelings! This is the ability to control poetry and words. It is rare even among modern poets. And the attitude hidden behind the poem is undoubtedly: since the years go by and time is like an arrow, we should treat every inch of life with an aesthetic attitude!
"At the beginning of the poem, a delicately conceived metaphor depicts the shyness of a young girl. The gentleness of bowing the head' and 'the shyness of the water lotus flower is not better than the cool breeze', the two juxtaposed images overlap appropriately, people? Flower yes? Or are flowers also people, and people are also flowers? We can't tell anymore. But I felt a hazy beauty in my heart, like inhaling the fragrance of daffodils. Next, it is the Yangguan three-fold mutual Tao cherishing, the love penetrates the back of the paper, and it is so thick that it can't be dissolved. 'Sweet sorrow' is the poetic eye of the whole poem, and the use of contradictory rhetoric not only widens the tension between emotions, but also makes it more full. It's just a 'cherish'. It is not only Yang Liuyi's waving goodbye, but also as if calling the girl's gentle name. Leisurely and sorrowful. Thousands of styles, all in self-evident! ”
There is a woman's delicacy in the comments, but Su Wen can see that this "leisurely" is a poetry review, and he just likes "Cherish" in general, saying that it is very beautiful. And beauty is what everyone loves.
Obviously, Youran prefers "Accidental" a little more, and writes more:
"Accidental" is bland, without a trace of fire, with neat, soft and refreshing words. Come and write the secret of the wonderful soul. The abstract things are written into concrete images, reflecting the author's skill and ingenuity. The whole poem is only two stanzas, but the upper and lower stanzas are symmetrical. The first, second, and fifth sentences of each stanza are all composed of three steps. For example, 'occasionally projected in the heart of your wave', 'the light that shines on each other at this rendezvous'. The third and fourth phrases of each stanza are made up of two-tone steps, such as 'You don't have to be surprised', 'It's better if you remember/It's better if you forget.' In the arrangement and processing of the sound steps, there is obviously no lack of rigor and carelessness, and the longer steps are alternated with the shorter steps, which reads calmly, tactfully, and catchily.
"It should be emphasized that there are various kinds of 'tension' structures within this poem, which are not easy to perceive, and this 'tension' structure exists in all aspects between the texture and the structure, between the image, between the image, and between the 'intention' and the 'intention'. The unique 'tension' structure should be said to be one of the mysteries of the poem's artistic charm.
"Overall, this is a symbolist poem, showing the wonderful use of less as a metaphor for more, a small metaphor for the large, and a metaphor for the individual. or the world has suffered setbacks, or emotional mistakes, or regrets, pain, or helpless and bitter smiles, as if lost...... In life, there will inevitably be such 'accidental' 'encounters' and 'rendezvous'. And this 'light that shines on each other at the time of rendezvous' will surely become an unforgettable memory and accompany life for a long time. ”
Youran obviously ate both poems thoroughly, and spoke them thoroughly, and her opinions almost made Su Wen unable to refute. He felt that this person was simply Xu Zhimo's confidant, and he understood the situation and artistic conception of the handsome guy Xu very thoroughly.
If the handsome guy Xu is reincarnated, he can't say that he will lead her to a confidant - of course, with the urine nature of the handsome guy Xu, he must be a confidant!
"This person has a deep knowledge of poetry, and we can learn from each other when we meet." Su Wen had such a thought in his heart.
But he didn't know that this campus netizen named "Youran" also became very interested in Su Wen as the author after publishing a comment post.
Girls' apartment.
A two-person dormitory with a rather warm furnishings, and a mature looking girl sat in front of the computer, logging on to the web and searching for something.
The girl was beautiful and dressed more formally, with a well-fitting white shirt on top and a pair of trousers underneath. She just tied her long black hair a little and pulled it back, and there were countless styles.
This is a mature and beautiful woman.
If you look more closely, you will find that her webpage is full of reports and materials about "Su Wen"!
"I didn't expect this guy to have such a big ......reputation when he is not very old," the girl muttered, "He dared to claim to be the first young talent, and he didn't take us seriously...... Well, come to think of it, it's four or five years younger than me, it's still young, indeed. It said that he published a collection of poems "If Life Is Only as First Seen"? Have time to find out and take a look! ”
At this time, a good-looking girl came out of the bathroom of the dormitory, and the mature girl was about the same age.
"Leisurely, what are you looking at, looking so carefully and seriously?" The beautiful girl found her roommate staring at the computer non-stop.
This is a double dormitory for graduate students, and the whole room is just the two of them.
The girl called "Leisurely" just looked back and smiled, but didn't reply.
The beautiful girl walked over to take a look, glanced at the computer screen, and smiled: "So you were reading that Su Wen's report." What, interested in him? ”
The girl named "Youran" snorted lightly: "I'm just interested in his poems, but I'm not like you Lin Yu!" ”
Lin Li, who was called by her name, widened her eyes and retorted: "Yi Youran, you dare to say that I complain? Believe it or not, I'm posting all your indecent photos to the school forum? ”
The mature girl suddenly didn't dare to speak, and rolled her eyes violently, she, a roommate, always threatened her with indecent photos, and she could only compromise every time.
If there are acquaintances present, they will definitely shout that it is unscientific, when will the school's big beauty dress leisurely clothes and the eldest lady also do such a cute action as rolling her eyes?
Lin Li looked at Yi Youran's movements on the computer again, and was surprised: "You actually wrote a comment on his poetry on the forum?" I remember you seem to have said that you can't read the poetry of young people, let alone ask you to write a poetry review! ”
Yi leisurely sighed: "That's a good poem!" When I read good works, I still can't help but itch to write something. ”
Lin Li was silent for a while, and then asked: "Speaking of poetry, leisurely, I have always wanted to ask you, with your talent, why didn't you choose the direction of poetry creation, but instead read a graduate student in poetry research?" ”
Yi was stunned for a moment, and said in a very complicated tone: "Because I found that no matter how I write, I can't surpass my grandfather." In that case, I might as well choose to study their poetry! ”
"Your grandfather...... The Venerable Master of Donglian? Lin Li obviously knew the other party's family background, and she was helpless to hear her, so it was difficult to continue talking about this topic.
The first person in the poetry world, Master Donglian, is a grandfather who is leisurely!
This identity is indeed enough to bluff people. However, for Yi Youran, it is a burden. Even if she has a poetic feeling, she can only change her research direction, and she does not plan to create poetry, but only studies poetry and makes poetry reviews.
Seeing that the atmosphere was a little sluggish, Lin Li quickly opened the topic and said, "Leisurely, do you want to know this Su Wen?" ”
"Acquaintance? How to meet? Yi was stunned for a moment.
"It's not easy!" Lin Li smiled, "Aren't you going to organize a large-scale poetry salon?" I heard you say that this time there are not only students, but also famous poets, and even the professor of poetry in our school, you plan to invite you to the salon. This level of salon, you invited Su Wen over, can he refuse? As long as he's there, you can communicate with him at any time...... Uh-huh, about the exchange of poetry! ”
"What about this......" Yi looked thoughtful. (To be continued......)