Su Wen read a poem, and everyone was stunned, they thought they had heard it wrong, but the facts told them that Su Wen's first poem was indeed like this:

"I am a cloud in the sky......"

They feel familiar!

Some people reacted, isn't this the first poem in Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter"!

They thought that Su Wen wanted to use Liang Zixu's poetry, or what kind of commentary did he want to make, but looking at Su Wen's intoxicated and indulged expression, he was completely "creating" like that, indulging in his own poetry.

I only heard Su Wen continue to recite in an affectionate tone:

"Occasionally projected in the heart of your waves-/You don't have to be surprised/And you don't need to rejoice-/In an instant, the trace is gone."

Reading this, Su Wen paused, this is the rhythm of the end of the first quarter.

Most people looked at each other, this is the poem in "Chance Encounter" created by Liang Zixu just now, right?

Like Ma Junwu, who thought he knew Su Wen, he was also surprised, and his mind was full of fog: "What is Boss Su doing, how can you memorize Liang Zixu's poems?" Is it a comment on Liang Zixu's poetry? No, looking at Boss Su's appearance, he is completely intoxicated by the expression of creation! ”

"Hey......" Only a small number of people seem to hear something different.

The head teacher Liang Ling's face was first surprised, and then thoughtful, she had a good memory, and vaguely remembered that Liang Zixu's poems were not like this - Su Wen seemed to be reading Liang Zixu's poems, but there were some changes!

"Could it be ......" Liang Ling was extremely shocked, and thought of an answer in her heart.

"This guy is going to ......" Liang Zixu seemed to have guessed what Su Wen was going to do, and his face was stunned, and there was a look of horror and anger mixed with it.

He thought of a bad result!

For the verses of "Chance Encounter", no one knows better than Liang Zixu. As soon as he listened to it, he could hear that the verses that Su Wen read were not the same as those he wrote, although they had not changed much, but they were really different.

Just when Liang Zixu's face was full of horror, Su Wen after the pause brewed a different emotion again. Continue the recitation of the second verse of the poem in an ethereal tone:

"You and I meet on the sea at night......"

This is still the same poem as the first sentence of the second section of Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter"!

"You have yours, I have mine, direction / You don't have to be surprised / You don't need to rejoice / The light that shines on each other at this rendezvous!"

Then a word was pronounced, and Su Wen took a long breath and chanted in an exclamatory tone, as if he was enjoying it.

The audience also looked like they were enjoying it, and they felt that listening to the poems recited by Su Wen had different feelings and tastes from those recited by Liang Zixu.

What's the difference?

This time. Even if you are a dull person, you can hear that the poems recited by Su Wen are generally the same as Liang Zixu's, but in the details, there are earth-shaking changes!

People with bad memories immediately took out the mobile phone video recording of their classmates' poetry recitation just now, and tuned to the scene of Liang Zixu. Play it out, and it's loud. Many people clearly hear Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" written like this:

"I am a cloud in the sky / Occasionally projected on your heart - / You don't have to rejoice / Don't be surprised - Wiped out in an instant // You and I meet on the sea of night / You have your pursuit / I have my direction / It's better if you forget / Better remember / The light that shines on each other when we meet!"

This is also a good poem, but compared to the version recited by Su Wen, what is the difference?

I am a cloud in the sky,

Occasionally projected in the heart of your wave-

You don't have to be surprised,

There is no need to rejoice.

In an instant, all traces were wiped out.

You and I meet on the sea of night,

Yours you have. I have mine, direction;

You remember,

It's better that you forget,

The light that shines on each other at this rendezvous!

……

Even people who have poor poetry appreciation skills can tell which version is better!

And. They finally knew what Su Wen was doing - changing the poem!

It's still Liang Zixu's poem!

The most important thing is that he changed Liang Zixu's poetry on the spot!

The people present are all literary talents, and they can see that Su Wen has changed it very successfully, and Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" has become better in Su Wen's hands.

What's so good?

For those who have not studied poetry, they can't say why, they only know that the Susu version of poetry sounds very natural and appropriate, like ironed cloth, comfortable and supple, without a trace of stiffness, and the meaning expressed is a little more dusty.

If you think about Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" carefully, it is good, but it is a bit blunt, and the idea seems to be a bit artificial—of course, if you compare it with the Suese version of the poem, there is indeed a gap between the two.

Liang Zixu is the bad side!

The shocked crowd looked at Su Wen incredulously, and couldn't figure out why this guy's head was so demonic!

Su Wen was very satisfied with the unexpected effect of everyone, especially when he saw Liang Zixu as disgusting as eating a fly, he couldn't help but laugh out loud.

Restraining the smile on his face, Su Wen said Kankan: "Everyone, this is a poem I processed on the basis of Liang's poem "Chance Encounter", I call it "Accidental". Didn't Liang say that I don't have depth? I think "Accidental" still has depth and connotation. Of course, I would like to ask Mr. Liang to forgive me for tampering with his poems without permission. Don't worry, I changed this poem for free, the copyright belongs to you, and if you want to publish it, I have no opinion! ”

After speaking, Su Wen glanced at Liang Zixu and sat down slowly.

On the other side, Liang Zixu's face was extremely pale, his whole body was weak, and he also collapsed on the seat.

Su Wen said it nicely, and clearly said that he was helping him Liang Zixu change the poem, not copyright, and let him Liang Zixu dispose of the poem.

However, does Liang Zixu dare to use the Su version?

If he dares to declare that this is his poetry, all the people present today will despise him incomparably, and if someone says it, he Liang Zixu will not have to be a man.

Even if he wasn't afraid of accusations, he still couldn't use the Soviet version of the poem. Otherwise, everything you did today is meaningless, and admitting that he is inferior to Su Wen in disguise means surrendering and admitting defeat!

"No!" Liang Zixu's cheeks were not so thick, and he was not willing to bear the shadow of being suppressed by Su Wen from now on, he was unwilling to admit defeat.

However, do not throw in the towel. What can we do?

Look at the expressions of the surrounding students, their excitement is almost off the charts:

"It's too bullish to break Su Wen! This is my idol! If you don't convince me, I'll just change your work, and after changing it, it's better than you'll write, and see if you have anything else to say! ”

"This Su Wen is too brutal, this is the rhythm of crushing other people's Liang Zixu!"

"It's brutal! It's a beast! He really deserves to be the first talent! ”

The students' arguments are very direct, and they may not be able to say anything about poetry, but. They just think that Su Wen's "Accidental" is much better than Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter"!

What's so good?

They can't say it, they just think it's good.

Excited as Ma Junwu and the others, they didn't want to pay attention to what's good, and they didn't think about it, they were just happy for Su Wen.

"Boss Su is Boss Su, I'm completely convinced!" Ma Junwu's face was flushed, and he looked at Su Wen with a look of admiration, as if he wanted to bow his head on the spot and beg for a cover**!

"Yes, I did!" Liu Hua and Li Ge sighed with emotion. They were even happier to see Liang Zixu's face discouraged.

In the front row, Liang Ling, the head teacher who didn't speak for a long time, also recovered from the shock. She first glanced at Liang Zixu, who was pale and speechless, and couldn't help but shake her head, sighing with emotion, Liang Zixu is talented, and it is understandable that young people are competitive, but. He happened to meet Su Wen, and he suffered a heavy setback in his life with great ambition!

Sympathize with him? Of course sympathize, but I'm even happier to see the presence of Su Wen in the class!

Liang Ling turned her gaze to Su Wen and nodded with satisfaction.

Unlike ordinary people, she carefully pondered and compared the poems of Su Wen and Liang Zixu. One "Chance Encounter", one "Accidental".

Liang Zixu used the verb "chance encounter" as the theme, and he wrote it very horizontally.

However, Su Wen's "accidental" is an adverb, a very abstract adverb of time, but it makes Su Wen write so vividly and concretely.

Don't talk about anything else, just say that if you change the topic, you will be a grade higher than Liang Zixu's cleverness!

Speaking of content, Su Wen's words are basically the original text of Liang Zixu, but some words have been changed, and some have changed the order, and that's it, which has raised the thought and connotation of the whole poem to a higher level.

Also, Su Wen's "Accidental" is stronger in rhyme, which makes this poem full of beautiful tones, and its beauty is almost as good as Su Wen's "Treasure" just now!

In other words, in this poetry competition, Su Wen came up with two poems that can be called classics.

Yes, in Liang Ling's heart, "Accidental" is a poem that belongs to Su Wen, even if he only changed Liang Zixu's poetry, let alone that most of the words were used by Liang Zixu.

Liang Zixu's "Chance Encounter" is much worse than Su Wen's changed "Accidental" in terms of concept and format, so that people can't say that this is Liang Zixu's poetry!

"Scrutiny, poetry really can't stand scrutiny, and it needs scrutiny!" Liang Ling sighed in her heart, and finally understood why the ancients were entangled in scrutiny.

The story of "scrutiny" can be said to have been passed down for a long time, it is said that the poet Jia Dao of the Tang Dynasty once rode a lame donkey to visit a friend, searched for verses along the way, and finally got two sentences: "The bird stays in the tree by the pond, and the monk pushes the moon down the door." After reciting it several times, he wanted to change the word "push" to "knock", but he hesitated, so he made a gesture of pushing on the back of a donkey, which made the people on the road amused and surprised. Just when he was thinking about it, the lame donkey collided with the chariot of Han Yu, who was the supreme governor of Chang'an at the time. After Han Yu knew the reason, not only did he not punish him, but also thought with him, and finally thought that it was better to "knock" the word.

This is the classic sentence of "the bird stays in the tree by the pool, and the monk knocks on the door under the moon", and it also achieves the status of "Li Ning's Secluded Residence" in Jia Island's poems.

Han Yu just helped Jia Dao think of a word, and the story of the two became legendary, so wouldn't it be more dramatic for Su Wen to change Liang Zixu's poem up and down today?

If there is a dramatic story, it can be circulated, and the literary thing can be even more good.

"But this copyright ......" Liang Ling thought more, Liang Zixu may not dare to directly use Su Wen's modified "Accidental", correspondingly, Su Wen may not be able to say that "Accidental" was created by him, otherwise Liang Zixu will argue with him, and this kind of lawsuit will not be easy to handle.

It's really hard to figure it out!

"Forget it, I can't care so much, anyway, this matter is in our class, and this class meeting will have a classicality that will be passed down!" Liang Ling decided not to dwell on this issue.

This is the end of the class meeting.

Liang Ling asked again whose poetry could win the championship, and the students below all shouted Su Wen's name.

At this time, Liang Zi was powerless to refute, everyone didn't even vote, and Liang Ling announced that Su Wen won, and the position of squad leader fell under Su Wen's ass.

Su Wen smiled bitterly, he didn't want to be the squad leader, but looking at the warm atmosphere on the scene, if he dared to continue to refuse, it might be even more troublesome, so he had to take over the task temporarily.

"Find a time, think of a way, properly give up the position of squad leader, whoever likes to do it, I won't serve anyway!" Su Wen quickly made up his mind.

Liang Ling definitely didn't expect that the candidate for squad president that she was very satisfied with had just been elected and planned to take on the burden, if she heard Su Wen's heart, maybe she would take out a knife to give Su Wen a good look!

As soon as the squad leader confirmed, Liang Ling announced the end of the class meeting and left satisfied.

A group of students also stood up one after another, some got up and left, while others gathered around Su Wen and said words of congratulations. On the other side, Liang Zixu's face turned blue and left without saying a word, and behind him, one or two girls with sympathetic bursts followed him to comfort him.

Su Wen sent away his enthusiastic classmates, and then returned to the dormitory with the three roommates.

On the way, Ma Junwu was the most excited, praising Su Wen while cursing Liang Zixu, saying that this guy didn't know what to do, he had no eyes, and he dared to compete with his boss Su, he didn't know how to write dead words, and it turned out that he Boss Su was the best!

Liu Hua envied Su Wen for being the class leader, and finally said that he wanted Su Wen to take care of him.

Looking at Liu Hua's envious face, Su Wen's heart moved, and asked, "Liu Hua, it seems that you think the squad leader can get a lot of benefits." ”

"What do you say?" Liu Hua rolled his eyes, "Don't say anything about scholarships, grants, and various award certificates, just say that if you manage the whole class, you can get in touch with many female classmates." Do you know that the building near the water has the first month? ”

Speaking of sisters-in-law, Ma Junwu and Li Ge also excitedly called Su Wen to take care of them.

Su Wen rolled his eyes, and finally fixed his eyes on Liu Hua and said, "Liu Hua, otherwise, how about you being the squad leader?" ”

Liu Hua was taken aback: "Should I?" How do I be? Everyone chooses you, and Mr. Liang likes you too! ”

"I'm just an agent, and I don't have much interest in that. Therefore, as soon as the military training ended, I went straight to the point with the head teacher and said that I would not do it. When the time comes, I recommend you to go up, and also help you say a few good words in front of your classmates, you go up directly to run, and it will be difficult for everyone to choose you if they want to! Su Wen said in a seductive tone.

Liu Hua's heart was moved, he thought about it, and asked hesitantly: "Su Wen, you really don't want to be the squad leader?" ”

"I'm most afraid of trouble!"

"Then ......" Liu Hua smiled and patted Su Wen on the shoulder, "Then I will reluctantly make it difficult and save you from the dire situation!" ”

"Thank you for your kindness!" Su Wen arched his hand and laughed.

The other three laughed.

Su Wen, who was happy at this time, didn't expect that someone would write a post about what happened before and after their class meeting today and upload it to the school's forum.

The two poems written and changed by Su Wen are also the first time to meet the world! (To be continued......)