Mitsui Shuangye secretly glanced at Koyanagi, at this time, Koyanagi, was looking down at Mitsui Shuangye's manuscript, and did not find that Mitsui Shuangye had noticed the bad things in the wording of those words just now, and I didn't know her shyness and embarrassment at this time, her whole face turned into a red apple, which looked particularly cute, fortunately, there is still a chance to have time to see it in the future, otherwise it will really be a big loss.

Mitsui Futaba found that Xiaoyanagi didn't find out what was wrong with him, he breathed a sigh of relief, thinking in his heart, it's really bad, I've been thinking about this novel about myself, and I didn't think at all that at this point in time, with that kind of words that are easy to misunderstand, what a bad thing, fortunately, Koyanagi-kun didn't continue to misunderstand, and when I thought of Koyanagi's slight embarrassment, I don't know why, Futaba's mood was inexplicably a little better.

Mitsui Futaba knew that Koyanagi was reading a novel, and secretly watched, but also turned into an open gaze, looking at Koyanagi's face, and waiting anxiously, Koyanagi's comments on his novel. This is my first novel, and I don't know, what kind of comments will I get from this Koyanagi teacher?

Mitsui Futaba likes Koyanagi's novels very much, since I was a child, I have read a lot of novels, but I have never seen such a special novel, it is so wonderful, it is the first time that I think the author is such a powerful person. I have created a world, a world made of words, without the slightest false feeling, making people feel as if it is real, it is a story that has happened before, and when I watch it, I am often brought into it all at once, enter that world, and feel the scenery and excitement of another world.

It is because of this shock. And the other day, I suddenly found that I didn't have a dream yet. I quietly had the idea of writing a novel, and I kept writing these days. It's hard to find it hard to create.

The use of words, the structure of the story, the beginning of the idea, the composition of the worldview, the distinctive characters, the words spoken by these distinct characters, and whether the psychological activities compound the essence of the character.

Is it first person, or second person, or third person? It's a realistic real-world story. Or is it an imaginary world? What kind of subject matter is it?

There are many, many more, things that the author of the novel needs to consider, and in these days, Mitsui Futaba has encountered them, and it is the first time that she feels that it turns out that creation is such a difficult thing. I have also seen some hard-working new authors, and it is extremely difficult to publish. And Koyanagi is also right when he says that the prospects of the publishing industry are not as good as they are every year, and even if the market is still there, it will gradually decline in the future. And yet that's it. Koyanagi still rises like a comet, almost a genius who has not been born for a decade, shaking the publishing world. became a super popular newcomer.

The difficulty can be imagined. Originally, I thought it was very powerful, and when Mitsui Futaba started. When I was about to write a novel, I found that what I thought was too simple, and this difficulty was comparable to climbing to the sky.

At this time, Koyanagi, of course, didn't know Mitsui Futaba's careful thoughts, he was looking at the novel she wrote.

This is a very delicate story, at the beginning of the story, there is a large description of the scenery, the use of very complex adjectives, which makes people feel that the writing is extraordinarily good.

But it also creates a very difficult feeling of reading.

For fiction, this is very unacceptable, and can even be said to be a taboo.

Seeing this, Xiao Yanagi frowned slightly, of course, he would not immediately make a judgment on this novel because of this situation, a good novel, you must read the whole story to be able to make a correct judgment, of course, many people simply can't stick to the end, because if the story is not exciting, 100% will give up halfway, but even so, I will continue to read a lot of words.

Koyanagi continued to watch, Koyanagi watched quite quickly, but he was all in mind about the progress of the story.

Soon, Koyanagi finished reading the novel.

I have to say that this is indeed a very bad novel, this novel has a lot of common problems for newcomers, and there are countless faults on it.

After thinking about it carefully, looking at Mitsui Futaba's expectant eyes, Koyanagi still said directly: "There is a big problem with this novel. ”

"Big question?" Mitsui Futaba couldn't help but be shocked in his heart, inexplicably a little lost, is this a denial of his own novel? She nodded, inexplicably a little flustered, and subconsciously said, "Please continue." ”

For a fiction author, the work is his soul, if he is completely denied, if he is an old man, even if he is very conceited, he thinks that his work is good, he will look at this problem objectively.

But if it's a rookie author, there isn't so much objectivity. Newcomers can't see the shortcomings in the novel, and in their opinion, their own novels are very good. This is a subtle psychology, their eyes are covered, which is the main reason why it is difficult for them to grow and succeed, there is no way to find their flaws, and they will not admit their flaws.

If, after a few years, they re-read their novels, they will find that they are rubbish, rubbish made up of words, and they want to forget them all - they are really useless, and there is no need to even remember.

However, now, not a few years later, Mitsui Futaba, as a rookie author, is likely to have the common mentality of other rookie authors, and he is very confident in his novels, and he can't see the naivety of his novels. And Koyanagi's comments, to a large extent, will also make her unhappy, and I have to say that this is really a thankless task.

However, it was asked, and Koyanagi had to complete it.

Xiao Yanagi did not hide or show any mercy, and said directly: "It can be said that it is a very bad problem. ”

"First, in terms of text, I don't know if you have read Hemingway's novels?"

Mitsui Futaba nodded and said: "I know that a well-known American writer, one of the most famous writers of the twentieth century, has written works such as "The Old Man and the Sea" and "The Sun Also Rises". ”

After Mitsui Futaba finished speaking, he asked, "What's wrong?" Does my question have anything to do with him? ”

Koyanagi nodded and said, "There is still something to do with it, Futaba, your novel, the most serious point, is the inexplicable redundancy." ”

"Repeat?"

Listening to Koyanagi's words, Mitsui Futaba was a little incomprehensible, and asked a little strangely, "What does that mean?" ”

"It's your novel, there are too many unnecessary, inaccurate, inexplicable adjectives, which gives people a very sad feeling to read, maybe you don't think so, but I think the problem in this area is too big." (To be continued......)