(Two more votes!!) If time permits, I will try three more~)

"Robert. Mcgee? How can I know that kind of inconspicuous Westerner name! ”

Even if you don't know how to do it, you make it look like you're actually very powerful.,Want to use momentum to directly fool the past.。

It's too disqualified to be a delusional warrior, timber seat. If it's a real Form 2 patient, they will say with disdain, 'Ah, isn't that who?' It's just a small role, and I don't care about it, and I said, 'That's the standard answer.'

But that's fine, since you don't know the Tao at all, then you don't need to care about the feelings between literati at all. If I had to say who I hated the most, it was obvious that this kind of person who didn't know the way at all and pretended to be very good was the one I hated the most. After all, as long as I look at such a self-proclaimed smart person, I always think of my previous submission process.

Pushing the bangs that were in the way to the top of the slumber, I looked indifferently at the timber seat in front of me with my rotten eyes.

Perhaps in terms of power, my eyes seemed more terrifying than under the snow. After all, every time I made a real move, no one dared to confront me directly. And obviously, this timber seat in front of me is a stinky little ghost that is worth cleaning up.

"Robert. McGee, born on January 30, 1941, this seemingly inconspicuous Westerner is the father of Hollywood screenwriters, the author of the book "Story", the whole world does not know how many writers and screenwriters in the world, reporters have been encouraged by this old man. The story class he opened is known as the starting point of top screenwriters. His students have won 35 Academy Awards, 170 Emmys, 30 Writers Guild of America Awards, 25 Directors Guild Awards, and other awards. He is known as the best storyteller in this world, and he is also a life mentor and facilitator for all screenwriters and writers. ”

"So that Toyo has nothing to do with me at all!"

The red-faced timber seat roared at the ceiling with an impassioned expression.

"That's nothing but authority! He is the existence that suppresses the new generation! It's just a guy who deceives people with rhetoric! ”

"Really? Do you really think so? ”

“…… That's right! ”

"That's good."

I nodded at the stubborn timber seat.

Since the second disease has become like this, it doesn't matter if it is a fierce medicine. Anyway, what they're good at is rolling all over the ground and rolling all over the ground and rolling all over the ground. Spiritually and materially, they will never face it squarely.

"I'll ask you a question first, timber seats. What kind of mentality did you write this novel with? If it's out of a self-satisfied mentality, then whatever you want, I won't say a second word. But if it's the second one, if you want to show it to others, then I'll describe my feelings in the most intuitive language. What kind of mindset are you the author of? ”

"Do you need to ask! Of course, it is to let everyone in this world worship this cosmic masterpiece! ”

"It's nice that we haven't escaped reality yet, so let's start critiquing."

“…… Huh? ”

There was an incredible expression on the chubby face of the timber seat.

"No, this classmate, please wait a moment. I feel like there's something wrong with our conversation......"

"—First of all, I won't talk about your grammar."

Facing the stammering firewood seat, I sneered.

Basically, it's like this every time I'm a judge. I thought that all I could get was praise, and I thought that my strength was outstanding. Then after handing in the work with confidence, it looked like no one looked down on him, thinking that he had become a star author. It's even very sad that I'm secretly practicing signing or something, making myself more of a writer.

You're mistaken, you're a little mistaken, timber seat. Anyone can read and write words. But there are only a few people who can stand out from those people. Except for a few geniuses, the others were originally ordinary people. But everyone only saw the ease of geniuses but ignored that the most base was the original ordinary people, so they began to be proud and complacent, replacing themselves with the experience of geniuses, thinking that they were such geniuses.

If you are a soft-hearted person, you will most likely be relieved and say that you have worked hard, but you are not good enough. Let these people walk this road without a home with more expectations, with that ridiculous dream of being a writer.

Sooner or later, false dreams are meant to burst, and the damage caused by the bursting of bubbles is not a matter of the slightest. If you don't have a good mentality, if you don't have a strong enough mental will, and you can't endure your desires, then it's better not to come to this place. Because unlike the superficial scenery, the process of writing is always cold and desperate.

One person conceives the scene, one person conceives the character, repeatedly speculates on the behavior of a character, deduces the scene and dialogue countless times in the mind, and the fleeting inspiration makes it completely impossible to concentrate. Unlike geniuses, ordinary people can only hone their strength little by little in the shadows. If you want to become a genius, you can't face up to your strength. If you don't have that qualification, you have to endure swearing and confusion. This is the path of ordinary people.

So I'm a very normal person. I would evaluate this work from the perspective of a normal person. Then tell him from a normal person's point of view what exactly a reader really wants to see.

"If your plot is always this messy, then I suggest you better stop writing novels."

“——！！”

It was as if I had pressed the pause button, and I just stared at me blankly.

But that's not enough, more stimulation is needed. More facts are needed for him to see all of this clearly. Whether or not you are suitable for writing novels can only be decided when everything is peeled out. And all I have to do is to remove all the arrogance and vanity from him, and let him face his own things properly and formally.

So I'm sorry, but this is a hurdle you have to cross in your dream in the novel. If I hadn't pointed it out, someone else would have pointed it out sooner or later. This is a fundamental problem, not something that can be solved by simply looking for mistakes.

If hard work will definitely be rewarded, this world is like a fairy tale, isn't it?

Someone has to wake him up.

"The most critical part of a novel is the first 10,000 words. It's like looking at a person and keeping the first impression for a long time. If the first impression is not good, then it will take a long time to correct the impression again. It's the same with novels, first impressions matter. So my first impression was—"

I took a deep breath and felt a little cool on my forehead because I had lost the cover of my hair. Behind him, Yubihama and Yukimoto already showed a little pity for the timber seat. I'm sorry, but I'm not going to stop.

Because I'm a despicable and shameless Hikiya Hachiman, I will only use the fact of Hikiya Hachiman.

"-Mr. Yoshiki Kizuza, what I want to ask is that you are really writing a novel and not a collection of dung?"