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What is manure? As the name suggests, it is a work that makes people vomit like feces.

The so-called light novel written by Yoshiki Kikiza is undoubtedly such a disgusting work.

Meaningless scene descriptions, cumbersome historical narratives, completely incomprehensible character movements, lines that feel contrived and incomprehensible, and even the characters calling each other are sometimes completely chaotic.

Of course, this is only a superficial problem. More fundamentally, his plot is completely meaningless. The so-called plot progress, the so-called development is completely zero, and I don't even know what the protagonist of Lu Dao wants to do and what the meaning is. It's just that I want to do that, so I do it superficially. Not even the slightest reason is explained in the book.

'Ahh The actual reason is because the protagonist has a deep reason to go. ’

When faced with my questioning, the timber seat answered confidently. But unfortunately, I have no way of understanding it at all. Since what can be said in reality is what you can say, why not put it in a book and describe it? Why do you have to play any mystery?

If I'm not mistaken, the most important thing in a novel is to be coherent, at least logically enough to express the thoughts. Even if the mind is shallow, it still needs to be written to express the true state of mind of the author and the protagonist. But it's a pity that there is no such change of thought in the so-called cosmic god of timber constellation.

It's full of lines that don't know why.,The heroine who didn't know why Lu Dao was upside down.,The name of the move misspelled by the English word.,The scene description that is not used as a transition at all.,And the awkward system route like a Korean drama.。 And as for the plot or something, it can be said that there is no at all. After going around and around for a long time, the most difficult thing to return to was the origin of the beginning. All the protagonist does is describe the setting, introduce the scenery, and then nothing is done and that's it.

This is the so-called cosmic masterpiece of the timber constellation. It's purely a crazy work made up of settings, self-awareness, crazy words, and a complete lack of knowledge of the so-called jumble of words. I don't think anyone with a normal mind would read.

"As an author, no matter what you write, you must first be aware of what you are writing. You don't even know what you've written, you just rely on your own confidence to create, and then it's over, do you think this is your victory, you can become a great writer? Don't be naïve, Mr. Kizuza. What you write won't be read. ”

I looked indifferently at the whitened timber seat on the floor and drew a cross on it with an oil-based pen.

"I think you should understand how fatal these thoughts are for a work, Mr. Kigiza. If you want to express something, write it in the book. If you want to describe something, write it in the book. Don't pile up words and sentences meaninglessly and think that they are powerful, let alone think that they are great writers if they describe enough. That's impossible. What you need now is not to write a light novel, but to write an essay to see what it means to start and fall. ”

I don't have to lie about that, the stuff he writes about is such scum. The protagonist is like a psychopath, suddenly completing a task in a few hundred words, and then describing how powerful a skill is in thousands of words, and then saying that the skill is useless. The skills described in the next few dozen words knocked down the boss, and I didn't know what to do at all.

Compared with these unbearable plots, the inverted sentences and inexplicable dialogues throughout the whole article are like spices. As for the misspelled English words, it was a harmless joke, and I didn't bother to point them out to him one by one.

"All in all, my conclusion is that if you don't think about it properly, I advise you not to write novels."

Putting the hair off my forehead again, I patted the wood on the shoulder.

If you don't have an idea, if you don't have talent, if you don't have meaning, then it's better not to lift the pen. Even if it is written for yourself, it has its own ideas. Writing an article for others with the psychology of writing for oneself is a blasphemy against words. For mediocre ordinary people, slow training is the best choice.

Youth does not mean that everything is allowed, and youth does not mean that it can be wasted. I'm not that pure person, I just want to tell that troubled guy about the general and correct world.

Mere efforts without learning lessons are meaningless.

Simply using momentum is just momentum. You can't do anything with your own efforts alone, and you can only impress the viewers by describing it. The most demanding people in this world are readers, and the least demanding ones are also readers. Because they want to see a story, and they only want to see a story. Any lyricism, the author's messy private goods, and disorganized descriptions, those are just the embellishments of one story after another. All they want to see is a story.

"I'm not going to just tell you that you can go ahead and write or how or how to get you out of grammatical and structural terms. I'm asking you what your mindset is. If you really want to write a good novel, it's never too late to read Robert's lectures on the Internet and find his book "Stories" to read it thoroughly. ”

Stuffing the crossed-up copy into the timber seat, I pointed out to him a path that was still the right one with a look of pity on my face. Newcomers who don't have the guidance of a master can only teach themselves, which is a matter of course.

"If you want to write a novel, you can take a look at the work of Kazuki Sakuraba in terms of description, this writer is very unique in terms of refinement. If you want to write majestic, then read Yoshiki Tanaka's works. The legend of the Galactic Heroes is still a classic that has been sung to this day. In terms of scripts, you can take a look at the box office poison Romeo Tanaka, although the box office is very dismal, but he is essentially a very good script writer. If you've read all of these works, study them before you talk about writing. If you want to write a book that conquers others, not yourself, then this hurdle must be crossed. ”

I don't recommend works such as Osamu Dazai or Ryunosuke Akutagawa to the likes of Kogiza, because their view of the world influences Kizuza's writing style. I also don't recommend it to the works of the Timber Seat Benge's reasoning, because it doesn't fit the impetuous view of the world of male high school students. So what I recommend to him are some more gentle and calm, decent characters.

If that doesn't help him, that's all there is to it. I watched the timber seat slowly get up from the ground, and turned away without even saying hello, and the mood that had been very depressed recently became a little happy.

Sure enough, the mood is to be relieved by the pain of others, and there is nothing wrong with what people say.