Book Reviewer: Qing Twenty-Seven (December 16, 2013)

Ouch! Is it swollen and woody?!!!

I am seeing the place where I am rising, and the feeling of the text being cut off is very unpleasant! Grizzly bears are not happy!!

In just 15,000 words, it's like gently sketching a few sketches on a blank piece of paper. Although there are only a few brushstrokes, although very vague, you can see the grand layout of the whole painting in the future.

Who is a good match? Who is a good match?

The bamboo horse in the wedge is clearly not the gentle man of the Gong clan who moved Shen Ruchu in his heart. How did the bamboo horse occupy the position of the heartbeat? There are also the suspected male partners, several military masters, and the suspected cannon fodder Ma Gongzi - what kind of actions will these men with different personalities do by Miss Shen San's side? And the sick cat named Xiaobai is a fetish...... Babble, yes...... Don't go home classmates! Please hurry up and go home to code words!! At least hurry up to 150,000 words! Let's make that sketch a little clearer!

I haven't read Doudou's text before, and after swiping 15,000, I found that Doudou is so greasy, cutting in, starting the pen, and going straight into it without ambiguity; When it should be delicate, he is not stingy with writing, and the writing is not a flowery statement, but from one or two actions, three or four eyes to depict, so that the characters "see the words as faces". I am deeply impressed by this kind of skill!!

And, I would say, dear Doudou, to let me tell you a little secret, I look at men and love to look at their hands...... The hand of the writer, the hand of the person who plays the piano, if it was in ancient times, there should also be the hand of the sword practitioner, the hand of the iron sand palm! Being held by those destined hands is a good match for "holding the hand of the son and growing old with the son"! Does the beginning of the doudou also have such a meaning?

Shen is the beginning, and the original intention is the same. I wish to be the heart of the text, and it will always be the same.

2013．12．16