"First of all, I would like to ask which two of these five scripts were written?" Su Shichen took out five of the eight copies, and the writing and plot arrangement of these five copies were significantly higher than the other three, and the pen was obviously two people.

"Three of them were written by Xiaohan, and two were written by the president." The girl called the mouse replied.

"President Han Yege, and Jiang Xiaohan, you must have written novellas or short stories." Su Shichen asked again.

"Well, I've been serializing the novellas I wrote in newspapers since high school, and Xiao Jiang has published two books since high school, and both have sold well." When Han Yege said this, Jiang Xiaohan felt a little embarrassed, the sales of his two books in front of others were indeed good, but in front of Su Shichen, he was not a little cold.

Su Shichen nodded slightly, Tsinghua University is worthy of being one of the most famous universities in China, with many talents, Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan can be called talents to the letter.

But this proves even more that Su Shichen's comments are unreliable, forget about the others, how can the things that Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan worked so hard to write not even be a script? This is somewhat unconvincing.

"Who wrote this?" Su Shichen picked up another script again and asked, "Who wrote this script?" ”

"I ......" a little timid voice, speaking is the sister paper called mouse, "that ...... Although I used to watch my mom write a play script, I ...... It's the first time I've written on my own, so. Possible...... It doesn't seem to be very well written. ”

"It's not well written, but at least in my opinion, this script is much better written than these five." Su Shichen once again gave an unexpected evaluation.

"Su ...... Shi Chen, this joke is not funny at all. The mouse thought Su Shichen was joking with her.

Su Shichen shrugged. "I'm not kidding at all, the script you wrote is a lot better than these five plays from a basic theatrical point of view."

"No, no...... Where? The mouse waved his hand.

Well, from the beginning, Su Shichen said that none of these drama scripts could be called scripts, and then to the current random evaluation, weishenme said that it was a random evaluation, even the mouse of the script author himself did not think that he was better than Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan, but Su Shichen said so. If it weren't for Su Shichen's prestige and amazing achievements, it is estimated that someone would have directly refuted it. Of course, although no one spoke now, the indignation on his face could still be seen at a glance. Especially Jiang Xiaohan's mouth moved, and he was already about to say something.

Su Shichen turned a blind eye to this situation and continued: "Looking at these scripts, it can be seen that the pen power of the two of them and the method of writing the story are very good. Of course, these five parts are better. But we're not talking about fiction now. The first half was still a compliment to Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan, but after a pause, the conversation changed, "What I want to say is that there is a considerable difference between a novel and a script. ”

"Don't talk about novels, even the difference between movie scripts and opera scripts is very big, how to summarize this difference......" Su Shichen touched his chin, "Simply put, the script has no emotion." ”

As the saying goes, the words are not amazing, and the death is endless. Su Shichen seems to be like this, and what he says is more and more amazing. This concluding sentence will surprise the seniors in the activity room as soon as it comes out, what is the script without emotion? How can someone who is engaged in creation have no feelings? That's something that only a layman can say.

To put it simply, novels can express the feelings that the author wants to express through words, and movies and TV series can also be expressed through monologues, but stage plays cannot. Therefore, the expression of feelings in drama is only through body movements or words, so all these things in the script are useless. Su Shichen sat on the table, holding a pen on the table, and crossed out all the emotions described on the side of these five scripts.

Although Su Shichen's action was unexpected, he did not encounter any opposition, and after a pause, he continued: "The other is the appearance of the characters, first of all, it may be necessary to play small roles in the movie, because in this way the characteristics of the main characters can be highlighted, which is completely necessary." But a novel can be expressed with a paragraph of text, and a movie can be used with the same shot, but in a stage play, can you imagine twenty or thirty characters on the stage at one time? ”

Let's not talk about the size of the stage, even if you don't consider the size, the audience of twenty or thirty characters at a time must not die randomly?

"Another point is that the relationship between the characters is too complicated to be expressed in the stage play. So these dispensable characters can also be deleted. "Another large paragraph was crossed out.

"By the way, another point is that the drama script is the same as the movie script, and the actor must be able to clearly know what kind of action to do when, what kind of expression, or what kind of lines to say, which is the foundation of the script. So these descriptions are very beautiful words in the novel, but there is no doubt that they are not useful at all in the script. Su Shichen can draw a lot with a single stroke, and almost one-third of the five scripts written by Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan have been crossed out.

After Su Shichen crossed it out like this, almost half of the five drama scripts written by Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan were crossed out.

Then put the script that had been marked "in tatters" with the script written by the mouse, and ask, "Which script do you think is better now?" ”

Now all the people in the activity room have nothing to say, because the facts are in front of them, what else to say? Jiang Xiaohan wanted to open his mouth to say something, but he also closed it, and the entire activity room fell silent.

"So I wrote so well?" The mouse muttered a cute word.

"Isn't the mouse script formatted? It's not all of them. "Some people may be because the script they worked so hard to write was completely denied by Su Shichen at one time, and there are some small unconvinced. Therefore, he muttered such a sentence in a low voice, but it was particularly obvious in the quiet activity room.

"Mouse's script, probably because I've seen the play script before. There is nothing wrong with the expression and format, but the dialogue is too straightforward, and the play has a very interesting rule, the stage play is a performance and not a reading, that is, the actors should not perform too few movements, and the combination of action and language is a perfect stage play. ”

"But if you follow the script written by the mouse, you can almost only use words to move the plot forward. This gives the audience the intuitive impression that they are connecting the script rather than acting out the script. Su Shichen's words were very organized, and most importantly, if you think about it carefully, it seems that it is really what Su Shichen said.

Han Yege sighed. Obviously, he agreed with Su Shichen's statement, and his face was not good, this is natural, and many people in their cultural society have worked hard for so long, and they are all completely unqualified. Novels and drama scripts are really big.

Jiang Xiaohan had nothing to say. Holding his three manuscripts, looking at the paragraphs that Su Shichen had crossed out with a pen, his face turned pale and he didn't know what he was thinking.

Su Shichen is not only not a layman, but also uses a point-to-point comment to tell them that this is the real expert.

The atmosphere in the activity room changed from a hot atmosphere to the current silent and depressing atmosphere, Su Shichen secretly touched a cold sweat, and secretly wondered in his heart: "Is it too much?" Anyway, don't blame me, you shouldn't blame me. That's what they had to say to me. Wrong. Now is not the time to think about this, it seems that the most important thing right now is to restore their faith. ”

"Ahem." Clear your throat first. "Seniors, this is also the first time to write, no experience ......" Su Shichen suddenly remembered something, this activity campus opera is once a year, and the script has always been seen by the Cultural Society, so Han Yege is a senior, it stands to reason that it is impossible to make this kind of mistake, maybe something happened to the Cultural Society?

His thoughts were misguided, and he returned to his senses and said: "Writing a drama script this time is the business of the entire Cultural Society, and I have already joined the Cultural Society just now, so I should also help." Su Shichen said.

Su Shichen's words shocked everyone, and they began to be happy, Su Shichen's comments just now were so sharp, he should know the drama script very well, and with Su Shichen's help, it was definitely quite haode.

"When will you hand in this script?" Su Shichen estimated, "I've been very tight lately, if I'm in a hurry, then there's no way." ”

"The campus drama is going to be held on the 20th of next month, and there are just two months left, because the performance troupe still has to rehearse with the script, so there is still about a month to hand over the script to them."

"Haode, I'll try my best, we're about to start class, seniors, I'll go first." Su Shichen looked at the time on his phone, it was time for the end of this class, and he was about to leave the activity room.

"We also have to work hard, it was because we had no experience before, but now that we have experience, this matter of the script can't put all our hopes on Shi Chen, we have to work hard ourselves. You will give us a detailed explanation of the format in a moment, the revolution has not yet succeeded, and the comrades must continue to work hard. "The whole culture club started the first effort together.

……

At this time, Su Shichen had already come to the classroom, waiting for class, and thought about it in this spare time: "Drama scripts, comedies, tragedies, historical dramas, "A Midsummer Night's Dream", "Hamlet", "Henry IV", isn't it just a campus opera, wouldn't this be too exaggerated?" ”

I don't think about it anymore, because the class has started.

After Su Shichen returned to school, his life entered a very calm stage, there were classes, and he walked around the school's garden between classes, and when there was no class, he naturally went to the room to write fairy tales, and what he had to do was to complete this collection of fairy tales in the shortest possible time.

So this level of seriousness can be said to be a waste of sleep and food, and with such efforts, in two weeks, Su Shichen finally wrote the fairy tale "Everything Will Be Fine" completely.

is just to select the story in his mind and write it down, Su Shichen still took half a month, the reason is because Su Shichen not only copied it, but also made modifications, "One Thousand and One Nights", "Hans Christian Andersen's Fairy Tales", and "Wilde's Fairy Tales" will be selected in these three books, and the stories selected in these three books will become more Chinese.

I sent the manuscript to Wang Ni's mailbox, and then a phone call came.

"Auntie, the manuscript of the fairy tale collection has been sent to you."

"Well, I see it."

After sending the email, there was less than a minute between his call, and Su Shichen asked, "Aunt, you won't keep staring at the mailbox, will you?" "Otherwise, how can there be such a coincidence.

"It's not just a coincidence, the name "Everything Will Be Fine" is so strange, does it have any special meaning?" It's like the name of a healing novel, or a song, but it doesn't feel like the name of a collection of fairy tales.

"It's a little meaningful, by the way, aunt, you said before that the propaganda is ready, so when can the book be published?" Su Shichen asked, "Can I do it tomorrow?" ”

"In a hurry? Even if it shortens the publicity time, it will take time to print and typeset, at least until the day after tomorrow. "It's a rush to print and publicize the day, and then to publish a book, but fortunately, Wang Ni's preparation is very perfect.

"Send the manuscript to the typesetting."

The attachments are downloaded to a USB flash drive and typeset by the secretary.

At the same time, Wang Ni dialed the Jihua Department of the Propaganda Department: "According to the original plan to promote Jihua, coordinate with the publishing department to carry out publicity." ”

Shanshi Company made efforts, and the fairy tale collection "Everything Will Be Fine" written by Su Shichen sailed......

PS: Many readers ask the kitten if the update time is stable, in fact, the kitten has no accident is two changes a day, but because of writing novels, I have now developed the habit of sleeping during the day and moving at night, (this is very bad, because the kitten originally had stomach problems, sleeping during the day, so that the kittens could not eat on time for a long time, and the stomach problems became more and more serious.) Started writing in the evening, so the chapters were all posted in the early hours of the morning.

You don't have to stay up late waiting for the update, because when you wake up the next day, you can see the two chapters of the update, which is quite stable.

The kitten has become a night cat, and in this case, don't throw away the monthly pass, reward, what are you waiting for...... (To be continued......)