Arrogant and domineering

In the twenty-sixth year of Jian'an, in 221 AD, Guan Yu went to Maicheng, was defeated and captured, refused to surrender, and was victimized by Sun Quan. His mount, the Red Rabbit Horse, was given to Ma Zhong by Sun Quan.

One day, Ma Zhong went on a table: the red rabbit horse went on a hunger strike for several days and will soon die. Sun Quan was shocked and urgently visited Jiangdong famous scholar Boxi. This person is after Bole, and it is said that he is proficient in horse language.

Ma Zhong led Boxi back to the house and went to the trough, but when he saw the red rabbit and horse lying on the ground, he couldn't stop neighing. Everyone was puzzled, but Bo was happy to know it. Boxi dismissed everyone, stroked his back and sighed: "In the past, Cao Cao did "Turtle Although Shou", 'Lao Ji is in charge of a long way, and his ambition is thousands of miles. The martyrs are in their twilight years, and their hearts are strong', I know that Jun Nian is the grace of General Guan and wants to go from it to the ground. However, Lu Fengxian Baimenlou died that day, and he didn't see you so dependent, why did he live up to your ambition of a thousand miles today?"

The red rabbit horse neighed and sighed: "I have heard it, 'The bird is dying, and its song is also mourning, and the man is dying, and his words are good.'" 'I am fortunate to meet Mr. Today, I can tell you from the bottom of my heart. I was born in Xiliang, and then Dong Zhuo obtained, this person flew high, killed the young emperor, and Wolong bed, he was really a thief, and I hated it deeply. ”

Boxi nodded and said: "Later, I heard that Li Ru offered a plan and gave you to Lu Bu, Lu Bu is the first brave general in the world, and everyone said, 'Lu Bu is among the people, and the red rabbit is among the horses.'" 'I want to live up to the king's ambition. The red rabbit horse sighed: "The public is wrong. Lu Bu is the most untrustworthy, he killed Ding Yuan for glory, assassinated Dong Zhuo for beauty, voted for Liu Bei and seized his Xuzhou, and beheaded his marriage envoy by Yuan Shu. 'People without trust, they can't stand', and such dishonest people are on the same level, which is really a great shame in my life! Later, I returned to Cao Cao, and although his subordinates were fierce generals, no one could be called heroes. I am afraid that in this life I will only be humiliated by the hands of slaves, and I will die between stables. Later, Cao Cao gave me to General Guan, and I once saw his martial courage in front of the Tiger Prison Pass, and saw his kindness and righteousness on the White Gate Tower, and admired him for a long time. General Guan was also overjoyed to see me and thanked Cao Cao. When asked why this was the case, General Guan replied: "I know that this horse travels thousands of miles every day, and now I am fortunate to have it, and if he knows the whereabouts of his brother one day, he can see it in one day." So is the integrity of the people. As the saying goes: 'Birds fly far with the phoenix, and people are virtuous and of high quality.' 'I dare not repay him with death?'" Bo Xi heard this, and sighed: "Everyone says that General Guan is an honest man, and what I heard today is true." ”

The red rabbit horse cried and said: "I don't want to eat Zhou Su's Boyi and Shuqi's high righteousness." Jade can be broken without damaging its whiteness, and bamboo can be broken without destroying its joints. Scholars die for confidants, people exist because of integrity, and I am willing to eat Wu Su and live in the world?" Bo Xi cried loudly and said: "Things are like this, how can people be worthy?" Quan Wen also cried: "I don't know that Yun Chang's integrity is like this, now this loyal and righteous person is harmed by me, what face do I have to see the world?"

Brief comment: After reading this on-the-spot essay, it is amazing. One is the novelty of the story. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled the touching story of the Red Rabbit Horse's death for integrity, and his imagination is really rich. The second is to be ambitious. The article personifies the red rabbit horse, so that in the dialogue with Boxi, it shows the praise and disapproval of Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo, and Lu Bu, and realizes the theme of "true heroes must be honest"; The third is that the language is old. The whole text is skillful in the ancient vernacular, scattered and intricate, clear and clear, and the writing is flying, this kind of old-fashioned language kung fu is beyond the reach of many candidates.

In 2010, the head of the composition scoring team of the Jiangsu college entrance examination praised it as "simply amazing", and the classical literature experts were also "stunned".

Yesterday, this reporter interviewed Professor He Yongkang, the head of the composition scoring group, who highly praised the candidate, "It is quite rare! The future is immeasurable! With his current cultural attainment, he can be admitted exceptionally!" and Wu Xinjiang, the leader of the scoring group for basic knowledge of Chinese and an expert in classical philology, also said that he was reading this "strange text" After that, I wrote 4 pages of annotations on the words alone. However, because the exam paper is still in an encrypted state, the marking teacher does not know who the candidate's surname is. It is hoped that this "genius of ancient literature" or someone in the know will take the initiative to contact this newspaper (hotline: 025-96096) after seeing the report.

"The first feeling when I saw this strange text was that I was very surprised! It is absolutely unique among middle school students!" Teacher Wu Xinjiang is an expert in classical philology, although he is responsible for the marking of the basic knowledge of the Chinese language, but when the literary marking team finds this strange text, he can only ask him to come to the rescue, "Not only do ordinary teachers who don't know and can't understand it, but even I, a teacher who teaches classical literature, don't understand everything, some have seen but have never used it, and there are forty or fifty ancient characters that I don't know at all." After I went back, I consulted the information and made annotations, and the annotations alone were full of 4 pages!" "But it's nothing just to be able to use literary language and write ancient characters, after all, this is a college entrance examination essay, and the relevance is the first priority." "The most commendable thing is that this candidate is different from "The Death of the Red Rabbit" and writing college entrance examination essays in oracle bone script, his composition is very pertinent, writing about the harmony between man and nature, the harmony between man and heaven and earth, and he uses his special language and special words to freely express such a theme, which is very commendable!" And for this candidate's literary style, Wu Xinjiang also vigorously admired, "It is not a Tang and Song Dynasty prose style, but an ancient literary language, with the characteristics of the body and the characteristics of the prose, very good at descriptive, the style is just right, and the characteristics are clumsy, Solid and deep, I have the impression that this style of writing is close to Yang Xiong in the Han Dynasty and Zhang Taiyan and Lu Xun in modern times, and as a middle school student, it is very outstanding. Moreover, whether it is his ancient characters or allusions, he uses them very smoothly and naturally, which shows that this kind of cultural cultivation has been internalized into his own things. Wu Xinjiang happened to be teaching practical Chinese writing in the liberal arts base class of Nanjing Normal University this semester, "But I have never met such a student, and I think he has surpassed me in this area." Wu Xinjiang said modestly.