Impressions:

The first section of the text written last winter was settled in 98 words for a long time (how embarrassing is it for me to make up my mind to "borrow"). Then I made up more than 500 words this spring.

After the official publication of the article, reviewing the outline, full of errors and omissions, revising and filling in, and reviewing the text of the first section of this chapter again, there are also many problems. For example, the age layout of Xi Shi does not conform to the process, and after thinking about it for a long time, he is ready to solve it with a sword.

But then I found that a lot of poems and character development should be Chang'an (examination room) for *. However, the origin of the center of the Great War has been considered to be Luoyang (Imperial City Rebellion) for *. In terms of route design, Xiao Fan'er is about to set off for Luoyang to start the climax of the book. Instead, others gathered in Chang'an, looking forward to receiving the appearance fee? Big head, big head (do you know the feeling of collapsing like a stump?) ）。

Preset fifty-eight chapters and fifty-eight years, N subsections (no cap, write it.) ）。 There are at least a few thousand characters with names and surnames and obvious personal characteristics, birth, old age, sickness and death, joy, anger and sorrow, emotional entanglement, life ups and downs, interspersed with each other, connecting the past and the future, and corresponding up and down. So many names can be written, and they can be easily used as soon as they are "borrowed". But it's a pity that it's not a puppet, everyone has their own life development, you come and go, on the land of the motherland, over the mountains and mountains, by boat and sedan chair...... In this way, I want to write vividly, the direction of life is logical, and the dialogues of the characters are brilliant. I am shallow, I have never been influenced by officialdom, shopping malls, love fields, colosseums, etc., and I guarantee with the author's lost highest diploma "Primary School Completion Certificate", I really want tears and tears and a sad cry: "The concubine can't do it!! ”

If you want to overturn and rewrite, you are not very willing. The first section is a work of throwing bricks and jade, and the finishing touch. But after reading it over and over again, I only feel that the words are not meaningful, the writing is dry, and the story is obscure and naïve (I want to be innocent, but I can't find that feeling). I really feel that my cultivation is not up to the standard of writing, and I want to throw away my armor, run away, ride the wind, fly as far as I can, and no longer be contaminated with this thing.

But my brother is a pure man and a real man, and he is unwilling and unyielding。。。。。。。。。。 After a long silence, thinking of those who went forward and followed the streets, and thinking of the eight billion readers who were looking forward to it, I decided to go against the wind and fight bravely against the sky, for the sake of the manuscript fee (piracy, please automatically replace the manuscript fee of this office with Wendao Prosperity, thank you, thank you!) ), rushing>>>> if you don't accept it, you are afraid of a ball, as the saying goes: G dead bird upwards, not dead and then shaking!!

Sing a song: For the sake of the people, there is nothing that cannot be done. The source of the battle is the first --- side - the goal of victory------- (author's comments) is the end of the ---------book (money)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~You wait for me, I'll be back!! Ahh Ahh

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Finger tap to confirm the release, and sent out the testimonial, and the handsome man let out a long sigh of relief.

Sighing stubble, melancholy eyes, take a puff of the left index finger and middle finger sandwiched between the last half cigarette butt from the front marked "The company's tips - smoking is harmful to health - do not smoke in non-smoking places" on the back marked "Quitting smoking as soon as possible is good for health, quitting smoking can reduce the harm to health" (the author said weakly that this is for the anti-smoking and tobacco control publicity and education to make his own modest efforts, maybe it is probably estimated that it is not for crazy water word count. ), a little decadent, quietly looked at the lovebird on the plane tree outside the window, and occasionally flew over two butterflies, only then did he stir the lonely heartstrings, wave a little, and sigh leisurely: "I was originally a man who aspired to become the king of the pirates, and the sea of stars is my journey." ------ hateful, hateful. Even if it's just a long night, no intention to sleep, and the old man chats about juvenile madness on a whim, why was he sent here for free pension? One misstep becomes a thousand years of hatred. ”

Boundless thoughts, self-pity and self-pity. Recalling the young and frivolous at the beginning, the bold words he made, the moment when Lang Lang picked up his bag and chose to wander the world, it seemed that he could become the general manager in the next second, become the CEO, marry Bai Fumei, and walk on the illusion of the peak of life, and couldn't help but leave tears of remorse. muttered "The Runaway Child", "Tears in the Iron Window", and "December in Prison" (no more crazy lyrics here, so as not to attract the saliva of eight billion readers.) ）

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With a "clang", the door was kicked open, and a slender leg wearing reticulated socks appeared in the eyes of the handsome man who looked back in shock, and the brand-new black high heels MS shiny and shiny with cold light.

"You run, you run quietly again!" A beautiful woman with long hair in a light purple ponytail, sword eyebrows and phoenix eyes, heroic spirit, and a "tall" figure of about 175 stepped in, and said fiercely with silver teeth.

The handsome man who was still showing off his literary and artistic style, wandering in the sea of sorrow, suddenly scattered, looking at the world's biggest "enemy" who had once again shattered his illusion. I can't wait to dig a hole in the ground.

The sentence that is usually suppressed and suppressed in the depths of my heart exploded in my mind: "You are a hero, a giant, and a king on the Internet, but you are just an evader, an incompetent, and a loser in reality." You love so many people so deeply, you want others to love you deeply. But who can you give real promises, true love, and true happiness to you, so that they can spend their years with you like this, and grow old slowly in a happy dream? Shaohua is gone, and then sings about mistakes, misses, good friends are just friends, and ten years later, we are still good friends, right? Oh, by the way, good friend, how many good sisters do you have~~"

"Yo, you don't know me? Really nervous? Why am I so unconvinced? Slut!! Looking at the choice, "I thought about it on the wall" without saying a word, a dead pig was not afraid of boiling water, and the handsome man seemed to be loveless. The beautiful woman said again: "Didn't Xiaoge hum very happily just now, dumb?" ”

Stretched out his middle finger and slapped the handsome man's forehead hard: "Pretend to be crazy and stupid for me?" I'm really pretending to be dead. ”

With a "snap", the beautiful woman took out a pistol from the backpack behind her shoulder, and the frightened handsome man's brows jumped.

"Didn't you say I didn't have my own pistol? You can only enjoy it when you go to the training room. I was also angry, saying that he was a secret agent of the National Security Bureau, and he treasured a delicate Browning 96 pistol, which could be used to practice every day. I can't catch up with you in a hundred years of shooting skills. Hehe, now that I have graduated and joined the company, I have a gun, come on, let's practice! ”

Looking at the shiny barrel shaking in front of him, the handsome man took a deep breath, trembling like waking up from a dream and said, "Ah, biubiu, are you here?" I haven't seen you for many years, I miss it very much, what a day, hug it!! Hmm, I just thought about the mystery of life and wandered, no wonder. ”

Looking at the handsome man's claws, the beautiful woman-biubiu smiled: "I have business to do here, don't attack the police, I have a gun!" ”

Looking at Biubiu's cunning and teasing appearance, the handsome man was speechless, and he was aggrieved and retracted his eager wolf claws.

"It's still that virtuous. When the strange old man arrived in Xishan, I thought I was dazzled when I read the case file, but I didn't expect you to sneak back quietly. I asked the sixth sister, Yueyue, that stupid girl, she also gave me a sloppy eye and covered for you, don't think I don't know her careful thoughts, hum. ”

He took out an envelope from his bag again, "Oh, this is from that strange old man, and it's weird, I can't open it." Come on, open it for me and see, what's the problem? ”

The handsome man took it and took the opportunity to rub Biubiu's fingers, causing Biubiu to glare at him with a sneer.

The handsome man spat a little bit, opened the envelope vigorously, and pulled out a piece of paper from it, only to see that there were eight big characters written in capital letters~~~~~~~~~~~~~ put-down-obsessive-read-stand-i.e.-open-dry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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It seems that the old man in the Taoist robe in the distance is silently complaining: "If you can't write it or not, it doesn't matter if you break it, the words of the eunuch. No reader will say that the author is going to change quickly, my eldest grandson of the eighteenth generation is waiting to burn it to show me the ending. But I'm going back. ”