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This book gives the protagonist the ability to exchange items, but some readers will think about how to do it since they have such a powerful thing, dominate the world or something, which also causes some authors to write similar abilities, all kinds of restrictions, to prevent the protagonist from dominating all of a sudden, then there is no point in writing. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info

The reason why I didn't write about these restrictions is because I feel that I wrote about all kinds of restrictions at the beginning, and readers have a sense of constraint when they read it, and I originally wanted to write more leisurely, and I didn't want to be bound by this feeling, since everyone has this idea, I will tell you about it slowly.

And what I think is that when you look at the people who have superpowers in the movie, they basically end up being villains, such as those villains in movies like Spider-Man, and the protagonist in Super Runaway (the shooting technique is very painful), so he went a little crazy, and was killed by the second male, maybe you will ask no one to limit the protagonist of this book! If someone restricts it, he's not the protagonist but the villain.,And write about another person with the same ability.,I don't want to write it.,I guess everyone doesn't like to see it.,And it's the protagonist's ability that really limits the protagonist.,I'll introduce it later.。

Some readers say what's wrong with going directly to Japan.,If you go to Japan to kill at the beginning.,It's estimated that you can write a book after this paragraph is written.,Because the front is already very cool.,There's no point in the back.,There must be a process to conquer Japan.,The side of the space and space is really unhappy with Japan and directly makes a hydrogen bomb to destroy Japan.,Does this still need to pass the protagonist?

Regarding the setting in the forest, what I wanted to write before was (the super version of loving life and survival in the wilderness) that group of wolves did not give up on Ye Wen, they had been paralyzing Ye Wen, and finally found a suitable opportunity to attack Ye Wen, Ye Wen killed the wolf king with serious injuries, and scared away the two wolves left, and then Ye Wen bought life-saving equipment while collecting medicine in order to prevent another attack, these equipment were not used as decorations, and later encountered the attack of bears, tigers and other beasts, and saved their lives, Later, I saw that the panda as a national treasure was in a complicated mood for a while, and for some reason left tears, and the experience of the primeval forest made a cynical young man in society have a new view of the meaning of life, but I also thought that it was written so miserably in the forest, and it is estimated that some readers do not like to read it, so I will pass it through and imagine it with the reader, which is my mistake.

This mistake of mine has also caused some readers, appearing in the forest is like this and that is not powerful, it is better to appear directly in the city, but my setting is because the protagonist's special experience in the primeval forest has changed the concept of the protagonist, and later went to human society and did not cause the ability to lose control (I will write about what will happen if the ability is out of control later), if there are readers who are unhappy with my behavior in the forest, I can write some biography later, or rely on everyone's imagination.

In the last sentence, if you have any comments or loopholes, you can mention them to me or write down any solutions yourself, and I will make changes when I see a reasonable one.

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