"My Motherland"

- If miracles have a color, it must be Chinese red.

Five thousand years ago, we fought the flood just like the ancient Egyptians;

Four thousand years ago, we played with bronze like the ancient Babylonians;

Three thousand years ago, we thought about philosophy like the Greeks;

Two thousand years ago, we fought as valiantly as the Romans;

A thousand years ago, we were as rich as the Arabs;

And now, we're on a long and short page with the Americans!

For 5,000 years, we have watched the rise and fall of one opponent after another at the world's poker tables.

If miracles had a color, what would it be?

I said, it must be Chinese red!

.....

"Hiss!!" I gasped, it was a shock.

Despite her expectations, Li Yanhong found that she underestimated the essay.

Yes! This beginning is so shocking!

Looking down impatiently, "This...."Li Yanhong was shocked again.

"It's... Argumentative essay? ”

When she started to look at the style, she thought it was prose, but after reading it all the way, this candidate actually wrote an argumentative essay in the sentence structure of prose.

The three elements of an argumentative essay, arguments, arguments, and arguments, are all kneaded in prose.

First of all, "the miracle color of Chinese red!" "That's the argument.

Then, the arguments composed of beautiful prose styles come into view.

"The Chinese civilization is one of the five civilizations that have independently cultivated food crops."

"The Chinese civilization is one of the four civilizations that independently domesticated livestock."

"The Chinese civilization is one of the 17 civilizations that have emerged as languages independently."

"The Chinese civilization was also one of the first civilizations to use iron tools."

"Foreigners say that China is rising! And we say, no, we are revival! ”

"Because, on the world stage, we have dominated for thousands of years, and now, we are only a short absence for a hundred years."

Looking further down, in order to prove that the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation has existed since ancient times, the article reads:

"China has never lacked miracles, and the Chinese have never been afraid of danger!"

"Because, whenever disaster strikes..."

Hunan people will say, "If China wants to die, unless the Hunan people die!" ”

Shaanxi people will say, "The two wolf mountains are shaking, why do good men die for the country?" ”

Sichuan people will say, "If you don't retreat from foreign enemies, you vow not to return to Sichuan!" ”

Henan people will say, "The country is still like this, why should I regret this?" ”

Jiangnan people will say, "Send a message to pedestrians to cover their noses, the living are not as fragrant as the dead!" ”

Hebei people also said, "Yan Zhao has many generous and sad people." ”

The people of Liangguang even said, "Drinking ice for ten years is difficult to cool the blood!" ”

The Northeast man will say, "Why do you swear to die?" Fight hard to do your duty! ”

This is our China, where the world is full of people who don't want to be slaves!

This is our Chinese, carrying the indomitable soul of national loyalty on the backbone of carrying the weight forward!

Albeit....

We have been trampled through our homes by the iron hooves of foreign races;

We have been smashed by the cannon of imperialism;

We were once driven by slavery by invaders;

We were once abandoned by the whole world!!

However, we have never given up on China and have never forgotten the teachings of our ancestors.

Just as today, a century-old flood is about to overturn thousands of miles, but the defense line built by the sons and daughters of China with flesh and blood is full of anger!

Just to create another miracle, one man will conquer the truth of heaven!

This! It is the sons and daughters of China, the unyielding backbone!

This! It's the miracle color, the color of China!

Come on, my color!

Come on, my country!

.....

"Good !!"

Li Yanhong's shooting was amazing.

A veteran teacher who has been teaching more than 20 languages is actually excited and sweating profusely.

"Okay!"

“......”

“......”

“......”

All the candidates looked at the invigilator in a daze, "Okay? What's so good? Don't let people stay? What about exams! ”

Xu Qian frowned even more at the snow-white brows, suspicious: Can that guy get involved with "good"? Wouldn't it be for him? What the hell did he write?

....

And Li Yanhong also knew that she was out of shape, so she cleared her throat in embarrassment, and then had to be dignified.

Judging by her years of experience, this essay may be about to go wrong.

Stylistically speaking, the prose is an argumentative essay, which is novel enough. Structurally impeccable and perfect enough. The wording is also extremely capable, amazing enough.

Especially the sentence: China is not rising, but rejuvenating!

In this era when everyone is talking about the rise of China from top to bottom, he actually does the opposite.

Not a rise, but a revival!

How much strength and self-confidence does a short sentence convey? It is not an exaggeration to say that it is a force through the back of the paper.

And the most important thing is that from the first sentence, it is almost a sentence of knowledge points, and every sentence has allusions.

For example: "If China wants to die, unless the people of Hunan die!" From Yang Du's "Hunan Youth Song"

"If you don't retreat from foreign enemies, you vow not to return to Sichuan!" It is the Sichuan army out of Sichuan.

"The country is still like this, why should I regret this?" "Inauguration Poem" from ***

"Yan Zhao has many generous and sad people." From Han Yu.

"Drinking ice for ten years, it's hard to cool the blood!" Liang Qichao's "Complete Works of the Ice Drinking Room".

At Li Yanhong's level, she only knows these allusions. For the rest, even she can't say where it came from.

This, this is a blank for a perfect score essay!

Thinking of this, Li Yanhong became nervous again, and carefully read the entire essay twice from beginning to end.

There are no typos, not even the punctuation.

Li Yanhong's heart was relieved, great!

I can't help but marvel again:

How many years has Shang Bei not produced a perfect score essay? How many years has it been since there has been a perfect score essay in the Harbin area?

It's amazing!

casually opened the test paper in front of Qi Lei and threw it out again in disgust.

"What's that? It's a good essay for nothing! ”

It's even a little crying and laughing, it's a waste to have such a good writing for such a poor student.

No way, it's a system that values scores and averages. If there is any shortcoming, no matter how strong the others are, it is useless, and they will not be able to go to a good middle school, let alone a good university.

Not to mention that except for this composition, Qi Lei is a mess.

Although Li Yanhong likes this student very much, judging from his grades, no matter how strong his writing ability is, he is destined to miss out on good educational resources.

The college entrance examination three years later is even more destined to be mediocre.

It's a pity!

...

And at the same time that Qi Lei amazed the invigilator with an essay, the No. 14 examination room, not far from the No. 17 examination room, was still 20 minutes away from handing in the papers, but Wu Ning wanted to die.

At this time, Comrade Wu Xiaobei was holding his gold-rimmed glasses, looking desperately at the composition question and the untouched composition paper.

"Is it really "My..."? How did Qi Shi's goods come about? ”

Wu Ning felt that he was very unlucky, unlucky.

Among the three brothers, his academic performance is the best, even if he can't be admitted to a key high school, he is still within the bargaining line.

He played well in the morning and thought that maybe there might be a chance to go straight to the key line.

As a result, he came to such a play in the afternoon.

Just now, when he saw the essay question, the whole person was stupid, which really made Qi Leimeng right!?

And themselves... Why didn't you believe your brother once? If you make a draft in advance, even if it is a belly draft, isn't it stable?

It's good now, I had plenty of time to write an essay, but I was frightened and stunned for a long time, and when I came back to my senses, there was a little time left, and he didn't have any ideas at all.

Wu Ning wanted to cry, "What should I do?" Qi Shi, you are a king and eight calves, but you are a bad man! ”

scolded Qi Lei more than 10,000 times in his heart.

What's the use of scolding, you still have to take the test! Directly cross the key line and save a few thousand dollars for Daddy, the great goal of still having to be achieved!

In a hurry, I thought carefully, and finally decided... It's a trick.

Gritting his teeth, he wrote on the volume: "My Dad".

...

"My dad is the director of the Education Bureau, and he is very busy every day......"

He portrays a dutiful director father like an old farmer who will finish writing his work before handing in his papers.

Well, not bad! Will the grading master give me "Dad" a face?

Wu Xiaobei thought so.

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(There is another chapter at 8 p.m.)

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Since the book was issued, I have seen a lot of old faces, and I have replied "long time no see" over and over again... I was full of emotion and couldn't calm down.

Thanks to the leader of the alliance of Nanke beauties, the leader of the alliance of "one and three points of poison", and the leader of the alliance of "12 bugs".

I also thank 125, the moon, and Xiaoxiao Xiaoyu for the reward.

There are also those old friends who cast monthly tickets, gave rewards, and left greetings.

Cangshan loves you, in the next life.... How? Say it yourself!