Chapter Three: Secretly Crossing Chen Cang (I)
At half past one in the afternoon, the language test officially began.
According to the test method of the number of comprehensives, Qi Lei first found the meeting and sent the score questions, and then stretched his neck to call the airdrop, and stopped before the invigilator lost his patience.
I finally filled in the blanks, choices and judgments, and the reading comprehension and memorization of the text were temporarily skipped and turned directly to the last page of the essay question.
As expected....
"Write an essay of more than 600 words on the topic of "My..."
Qi Lei looked at the essay question, and at the same time he couldn't help but feel apprehensive while secretly breathing a sigh of relief.
In his previous life, he got a high essay score because of his grandfather's illness, in this life, can he still write that feeling of true feelings?
Perhaps, after all, the level of wording in junior high school is not comparable to the level of writing that he writes every day in later life.
But is it possible to get a higher score than the next generation?
It can only be said that it is unlikely.
Because looking at the essay questions, Qi Lei actually had a different perception from his previous life.
This topic... It's not simple, there are pits!
At first glance, "my...", many people's first reaction is: my father, my teacher, my classmates, my kitten, my childhood and so on.
These have not been written in previous studies, and at first glance they are the most ordinary narratives
However, Qi Lei found an intriguing detail, the essay question does not stipulate the style.
"Write an essay of more than 600 words on the topic of "My......."
What is my!? But there's no rule that it must be a narrative!
You can write argumentative essays, you can write prose, and even poetry without going off-topic.
That's interesting, it's a big hole.
You must know that essay grading will definitely be mixed with the subjective emotions of the marking teacher. Whether it is the high school entrance examination or the college entrance examination, it is impossible to get a full score in the essay, but it is also impossible to get a zero score in the essay.
How many points to give is all in the thought of the marker.
This essay question, you don't have to think about it, you know, the vast majority of candidates will write according to the narrative, and it must be my grandfather, my mother and the like.
Invisibly, among the genres of narrative, argumentative essay, prose, and poetry, he chose the most common theme.
No matter how well it is written, it is the same in the eyes of the teacher.
Later generations of Qi Lei's article written by my grandfather was excellent and impeccable, but it only scored 40 points.
When you think of getting a higher score, either you are only eight buckets high and your skills are amazing, or you are innovative in the subject matter and make people shine.
Thinking of this, Qi Lei had a bold idea.
Give it a go? Don't write about grandpa, but change to a subject that has a chance to get a higher score?
Truth be told, there's a risk, and it's a lot risky. In case you mess up, you'll get more points less! It doesn't fit the mature and stable temperament of my middle-aged soul!
But if you are not willing to be a salted fish, are you still called a young person if you are not angry?
After pondering for a long time, he typed the draft again, and finally, Qi Lei got the written test paper:
"My Motherland" ......."
The topic requirement is 600 words, and there is no upper limit.
But Qi Lei knows that the length of a middle school essay is around 800 words is the best.
It will not be too short to be unclear, and it will not be too long to disgust the teacher who has to read at least hundreds of essays every day.
So, this essay in the form of essays is just a little more than 800 words.
At the beginning of a paragraph of Internet celebrity text that is very recognized by the public in later generations, combined with the general environment of 98 years of flood fighting and rescue.
Qi Lei thinks that he should be able to stand out and win the love of the teacher, right?
It took about 30 minutes to complete the composition.
After looking at the time, the two-and-a-half-hour exam time had only passed a little more than an hour, and Qi Lei did not choose to hand in the paper immediately this time, but retreated to the reading comprehension and memorization questions.
Write down the reading comprehension according to the level of your own cognition, and you don't let go of the memorization questions, even if you make it up, there is no empty space at all.
Again, Chinese is the most subjective subject, especially in this era when there is no computer marking and only the teacher's eyes are relied upon.
You can't tell which word or sentence will make you that much.
After the writing was full, Qi Lei reviewed all the test papers again and made sure that there was not even a single punctuation mark or omission, which was reassuring.
Punctuation is also a point!
After doing all this, there is still more than half an hour left, and I habitually care about the next door.
I saw that Xu Qian had already answered all the questions, including the essay, and was checking it.
Qi Lei glanced at the title of her essay - "My Secret".
I can't help but light up, it's very novel!
No longer hesitate, get up and hand in the papers.
In this regard, whether it is the invigilator or Xu Qian, they have long been used to it.
Xu Qian even wondered, did this guy fall asleep and actually dragged on for two hours?
glared at Qi Lei viciously, with a posture of hating iron but not steel.
And the invigilator didn't have any hope for this very special poor student.
took the test paper and looked at it, couldn't help shaking his head and smiling bitterly, and said again in his heart, "It's a pity for this kid!" ”
The invigilator's name is Li Yanhong, a teacher at No. 2 Middle School and High School, and he teaches Chinese.
In addition to the composition, after reading the previous parts, it is estimated that with these 100 points, Qi Lei will be able to get 50 points.
This level is simply outrageous.
Feel free to flip to the composition, "My Motherland".
The topic is still unwavering, and even a little cliché.
It was almost predictable that Impression Qi would lose half of the way.
In fact, it is normal, as soon as she sends a volume, she knows that many good students will fall into the pit in this year's essay.
This is an obvious trap, my motherland, is not new, how many candidates will lean on it.
In this year's essay questions, I don't know how many good students have to sink into the sand, let alone poor students like Qi Lei.
Scrolling down, I found that there was also a subtitle: "If miracles have a color, it must be Chinese red!" ”
"Huh?"
Li Yanhong sighed softly, causing the candidates below to look sideways, not knowing what happened to the invigilator.
But Li Yanhong was surprised here, and this subtitle was a bit interesting.
"If a miracle has a color, it must be Chinese red", from a professional point of view, this is a mimetic sentence.
Do miracles have colors? Of course not.
Miracle is an adjective, not a concrete thing, how can it have a color?
However, this candidate said that miracles have colors, and gave the answer - "Chinese red".
From the point of view of the sentence, that is, the color of the miracle is Chinese red.
However, this sentence has to be interpreted in reverse: China's color is a miracle! China is a miracle!
This sentence is uplifting, and even a little amazing.
Li Yanhong secretly praised, just a subtitle, and the topic has already been clicked, and the slightly clichéd title "My Motherland" on it is no longer ordinary, and it has been sublimated all of a sudden.
"Not bad!"
Li Yanhongxin said that this topic is worth at least 10 points.
Looking down further, I was stunned again.
"Prose?"
She found a second surprise, and the whole person was in a lot of energy, she originally thought it was a narrative.
He moved and leaned back on the podium, watching the rest with a hint of anticipation.
Then, Li Yanhong was completely stunned.
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