Reply to Grisha Zhiji:

Original Comment:

Personally, I like the author's style more, and the plot is designed more reasonably, but there are not many surprises for me. Just like a particularly white book, it is plain and real, and the words cannot surprise our readers and something that is not intended. The idealization of Tang bricks, the treachery of the Great Song Dynasty, the strategy of the silver fox, the intention of the rise of the Hanmen is not enough, and the blandness of the Ming Wufu. These works have their own linguistic characteristics and unintended plot designs. I hope that the author can bring us a wonderful plot and a special language style while sticking to his own style.

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Reply:

You're too accurate, it's true.

I think there is a big reason why my book didn't get a good grade, and the plot aspect accounted for a lot. The basic face-slapping plot can be said to be equal to nothing, which is very unreasonable.

In the process of writing, I always wanted to integrate the plot of a little slap in the face, but as I wrote, I unconsciously described it in detail, in common words, it was too much water (although I personally think that sometimes water is rich in the trunk), and this result caused the original strength to be slapped in the face faded a lot.

Just like the previous curved plow, it can be used to slap the face. But I didn't write it, because at that time I felt that I had already put too much ink on the quyuan plow, and I wanted to transition to the next plot as soon as possible.

In the previous comment, I replied to a brother's words, saying that it was about 200,000 words to basically end the route of the countryside and change the map to the county seat, but now, I am afraid that there are still many words to fully develop in the county.

When I arrived at the county seat, in fact, it should have been around 608 at that time, and I was ready to participate in the Battle of Tuyuhun.

In fact, these outlines have been done.

Thank you brother for your support, I will be on the basis of development, pay attention to the need to slap the face, although it is cliché, but occasionally not so obvious to hit the face, it is still quite necessary, and I personally like it, but the aspect of controlling the plot is not so smooth, and the face slap is not easy.

In addition, brother, if you don't have enough money, you don't need to give a reward~ According to the current form, it is enough to choke on the shelves~~ In case it can be put on the shelves, it is good to have the genuine version with the support of the brothers~~

In fact, a review, a collection, a little recommendation vote, or a 10 tip is enough for me to be excited for a while.

A few days ago, I have been changing, it's not that I can't write, but I feel confused, I don't know if there is any point in writing like this, after all, if you can't get the reader's approval, this book will definitely be wasted.

Again, your support is my motivation ~~Come on~

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No way, I originally wanted to reply in the comment area, but there were sensitive words in the prompt, and I changed several, but it still didn't work, so let's reply with a single chapter.

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