Xiaobai looks at the characters and atmosphere in "Tian Khan".

At present, I only see Chang'an looking back at the pile of embroidered volumes, so I only comment on this part (newcomers on the road, not so much a comment, but rather a nonsense).

Characters

Xue Chongxun

The opening chapter is a meeting with the heroine Yubun Ji (the heroine of the first volume) at the temple, and throughout this chapter is the story of an infatuated girl. Immediately afterwards, he went to meet Princess Taiping with his brother, and here it is said that the pig's foot and Xuanzong are incompatible, laying the groundwork for the following, that is, the main theme of the novel (that is, killing Xuanzong to save his life).

The supporting roles in the back came on the stage one after another, among which the incident of receiving the girl in the room aroused the contradiction in the heart of the pig's feet, and it can be seen that the pig's feet are bound by the thoughts of modern people, and they are a little disgusted with the girls in the room. This is done reasonably by the author, and it is strange if there is no impact! But the matter of Sanniang in the back is a bit too hasty, since it is the early stage of soul fusion, the memory of modern times must have a great impact, and the impact on the style of pig's feet must still have a great impact, although it is not dominant, but it is by no means low! How could a pig's foot become cold and heartless all of a sudden? Especially when killing the wife and children of a supporting role, that is called a decisive killing! Although it was forced to be a scoundrel, it was a bit hasty. During the rape of Yuwen Ji, it didn't look like he was influenced by modern thoughts, don't say anything about being forced to be a scoundrel, after all, it is a modern memory, how can he be more ruthless than the ancients when he does this!

Pig's foot raped Yuwen Ji, killed his fiancé, and later framed the prince's close ministers, this qiē was only to force Taiping to launch a coup d'état! And Princess Taiping's distrust of pig's feet also hints at the cruelty of the royal battle and the royal affection, so that there is a new positioning for pig's feet! At first, we had the impression that the aristocratic son seemed to be omnipotent, but in fact his power was smaller than that of a chicken, and he was not even trusted by his mother, and in order to win the trust of his mother, he had to do some inferior and despicable things against his will!

With the development of the plot, pig's feet seem to have improved their status, but in fact, he is still a pawn in terms of the overall situation. Compared with the depth of Princess Taiping, Pig's Feet is undoubtedly a novice, although he knows history, but it does not mean that Pig's Feet has the ability to change history, knowing that there is little hope, but he has to run for survival!

Xue Chongxun seems to be an unscrupulous villain in order to survive in the author's pen! In order to win the trust of his mother, not to mention raping Yuwen Ji, he also killed Gao Lishi's cousin; In order to force his mother to make a coup d'état, he did not hesitate to brutally kill innocent women and children against his will. From another point of view, Pig's Foot seems to be a gentleman, who can't bear to be beaten by his daughter, and the second will be used as a maid, for a singer can offend the court (although he is scheming, the fact is the truth), and for the killers around him, sometimes gentle, sometimes cruel, so it seems that Pig's Foot is a capricious person.

In fact, although he has been influenced by the thoughts of modern people, he is still Xue Chongxun himself in his bones, in order to survive, for the sake of his relatives, he can do things against his will. Seeing Princess Jincheng marry into Tibet, he was indignant, lamented the nest of the Tang Dynasty, and was deeply ashamed! In my opinion, the reason why the pig's feet are so kind to Princess Jincheng is that she is secondary, and the more important thing is to maintain the majesty of the Han people, and Tubo is so rampant!

Generally speaking, Xue Chongxun's sinister character sometimes reveals a trace of kindness, but he is indeed ruthless in his bones, he is more like an emperor, an imperial figure like Li Er! From this point of view, the title of the book Tian Khan is also a matter of course!

Yuwen Ji

In the text, the character of Yu Wenji can be described as a kind and infatuated, filial to her parents. In addition, she has another identity - Yuwen Divine Doctor. Yuwen Ji, who studied under the hand of Li Ghost, is definitely a legendary figure in the apricot forest, and when the pig's foot asked the doctor to detoxify Meng Xiaoyu, the reverence for Yuwen Ji was overflowing, and he didn't even know that Yuwen Divine Doctor was a boy or a girl. It's just that most of the time, Yuwen Ji is a who is a beautiful lady and prays for money in the temple every day. Actually, I have a question here, since Yuwen Ji is an idiot, then who is it for?

Is it for Colliers' cousin?

Obviously not, when he started to be raped, he hated Xue Chongxun to the core, but he only respected his father's order for his fiancé, how can he talk about infatuation? No matter who you are infatuated with, it's not pig's feet anyway. Since there is already an infatuated lover, how can his attitude change so much after being rescued by a pig's foot? Don't say it's perfunctory to say that you've been touched by a pig's foot, for a who already has a sweetheart, it's not the main problem!

At the beginning, I felt that the author arranged for pig's feet to meet Yuwen Ji in the temple at the beginning, and it felt good with that infatuated story, but why did Yuwen Ji pray in front of the Buddha, and the author used a story to bring us into a misunderstanding, that is, Yuwen Ji is an idiot! Actually, I didn't want to think like that, but then Pig's Feet said and told the follow-up of the story, and I had to think so! Actually, I feel that the opening story is quite good, but it is not used at the right time! Because from beginning to end, I don't understand what Yuwen Ji did in the temple, and since there is no one who Yuwen Ji loves, it will be redundant to use this story here!

There is also a point, after being saved by pig's feet, how did Yuwen Ji suddenly become bold and even a little debauched? And to push back this trick, is this something that an unemployed woman can do? It's not strange in modern times, but it was in ancient times, although the Tang Dynasty was open, it wouldn't be so open, right? Think about it, when a woman who was forced by you to OOXX was saved by you, would she take the initiative to dedicate herself to reverse the situation?

Sanniang

Sanniang is a tragic character, not only her life experience and identity are tragic, but the misery continues after being taken in by Pig's Feet, and Pig's Feet called Sanniang to kill people, which is not a bit cruel for a woman. In the eyes of the pig's feet, Sanniang is a murderer, and when his conscience finds it, he cares about it, but he can sacrifice Sanniang's life without hesitation for his own survival, and this qiē is because the pig's feet saved Sanniang's life. In fact, the author has unconsciously turned pig's feet into a generation of emperors. Li Er can kill his brother for the throne, what is it for Pig's Foot to sacrifice a woman for survival?

Light rain

is definitely an infatuated woman, and it is a very tragic kind, Du Siniang like Meng Xiaoyu gambled her life for the sake of a negative man, in exchange for such an ending, how can it not make people sad and angry! The appearance of Xiaoyu is to comfort the pig's feet, the pig's feet have done a lot of things against their hearts, saving Xiaoyu is actually to comfort his conscience, the pig's feet are more for himself to save Xiaoyu, for his conscience not to be condemned, does he have the slightest sincerity? Meng Xiaoyu is an adjustment to the pig's feet outside of the tense life, although the pig's feet save Xiaoyu out of kindness, but instinctively it is to comfort his heart in the dark!

Princess Taiping

Similar to Princess Taiping in history, she has obviously become deeper after many coups d'état, but what's the fun of this? Even his own son can't believe it, and who else can believe it? Princess Taiping is actually Wu Zetian's shadow, she is too much like Wu Zetian, but she doesn't have Wu Zetian's decisiveness and foresight!

Tang Xuanzong and other supporting roles

Tang Xuanzong in the text does not write much, he is ambitious, ambitious, and enthusiastic!

Princess Jincheng is also a tragedy, the text is full of allusions to royal disputes, as well as the darkness of politics, in comparison, that Li XX (forgot, is the one who is very upright, the one who investigates the case) is much more cute in the whole text, in a world full of gloom, this is a ray of sunshine!

atmosphere

After reading the first volume, I generally felt that the atmosphere of the whole text was very tense, full of strife and darkness, the darkness of the human heart, and the darkness of politics. This is not a good situation for the whole text, so there is some [harmonious content] to ease the atmosphere. And the author casually expresses this gloomy atmosphere between the lines, but some traces of description are shown on the surface, which still needs to be worked on! Like pig's feet will sigh from time to time the disturbances of the world, so you don't need to write too much at all, just pass it off, so that the effect may be much better for a novel of political struggle!

detail

There are very few descriptions of the details of life in this book, and from the beginning to the present, the author has written very little about the details of the characters' lives, and I don't even know how big the pig's foot home is and where is the location? Not to mention the usual eating, drinking, and Lazar of pig's feet. For a novel to be vivid and rich, it is impossible to rely on the twists and turns of the plot and characters alone, and it is more important to start from the details, and the details of life can make the characters more fleshed out and more real.

After reading this article, in the near future, I remember at most the names of some supporting characters and pig's feet, and maybe vaguely remember some fragments, but other than that, I have no impression at all. This is still the situation that I just finished reading, and if it is a few months later, I may not have an impression.

What does this mean?

Explain that the book is actually a failed work (if you disagree with it, when I didn't say it)

The portrayal of the living habits of pig's feet is very unsuccessful, let alone the supporting roles, there are no pig's feet, and there will be supporting roles. From the beginning to the present, the author focuses on describing the officialdom and the various appearances of the characters struggling in the turbid world, but only omits the most basic and important point~~ The details of life.

Writing like this is actually the way to go down, and the old saying is repeated, and the details determine success or failure.

Details make the story more real and vivid, and it plays a very big role in the character, psychology, and construction of a world. Some people may say that this is in the Tang Dynasty, what did everyone do with the history that everyone is familiar with? That's why we pay more attention to detail. We don't know about that era, what is the difference between the eating habits of the Tang Dynasty and modern times, and what are the cultural differences? These are especially important.

If we just want to see pig's feet become emperors and then reign over the world, I believe that there are a lot of such novels on the Internet, and we don't need to read your books.

In fact, it's all nonsense, who doesn't understand the truth, it's just that it's difficult to do!

There's nothing to say about the plot of this book, from the beginning to the present, it's still very powerful, but the section where I met Li Xuanyi after leaving Chang'an didn't feel very good, and the content of that section was very vague.

The writing is okay, but there are some places where you don't really need to use very flowery language, the language is concise and does not lose its brilliance, and it is good to let the reader read without pressure, rather than using a bunch of flowery words to pile up.

Zhu Xian is known as one of the three strange books on the Internet, I don't know what others think, I always feel that Zhu Xian has a lot of poems at the end of each chapter, and there are things that don't sing songs, and I feel that this is moaning without disease. Like some great writers, they can't write gorgeous sentences, but they rarely use them, just use the most simple and simple concise language. Is it useful for flowery language, especially in middle school, when teachers love to speak, and if a student writes well, he will be praised? No matter how gorgeous the language is, it's just a floating cloud! Only the most plain language is the most moving!

Actually, these are all things that have been said before, and I am obviously doing more than one thing here, but I will write it down anyway.

There are private goods in this book, and the overall feeling is that it is a grain and grass!

Especially the character of the pig's foot, don't be a hypocrite! It is good that there is no such high-sounding reason as seeking the welfare of hundreds of millions of people to win the world!

It's not pretending to be a 13 party, unlike some books, obviously I want to be the emperor, and I have to pull the national flag!

Xiaobai is talking nonsense, if there is anything inappropriate, just laugh at it, don't be serious!

2011.3.15

West Wind Tight (Tian Khan Author): It's really cool to stand on the moral high ground and abuse your opponent...... However, because he is good at setting the values of the characters and describing the psychological process, in order to achieve the purpose of enhancing the sense of involvement. I don't really understand the psychology of Gao Daquan's characters, so I can't effectively describe them.

Answer: This kind of writing is more distinctive, just to make a good degree! For example, sacrificing the interests of many people (not a few, but a majority) for the sake of pig's feet is a bit too much!

Pig's feet are mainly Xue Chongxun's thoughts, and modern ideas are only auxiliary, I hope you must grasp this in the future!

Xue Chongxun is actually a real villain, a bit capricious (sometimes good and sometimes bad), and the reason why this is the case is actually the result of integrating modern consciousness. In fact, we always subconsciously look at the pig's feet with the eyes of modern people, so we feel that the pig's feet are capricious villains!

However, when we look at it from another angle, in fact, pig's feet are just to survive, because there is still a big mountain pressing on him, which can make him crush his bones at any time and die without a place to bury! Pig's feet are under such pressure all day long, and it is inevitable to do some disgusting things, such as raping Yuwen Ji and ruthlessly killing women and children, in addition to forcing Princess Taiping, it is also a way to relieve their own pressure. It's just that this method is a bit cruel in modern times, but in the Tang Dynasty, it was not impossible for a royal nobleman to do these things. Li Er can kill his brother for the throne, and it is reasonable for Pig's Foot to be forced to do these things in order to save his life, because the battle of the royal family is so dark.

But Zephyr was a little hasty in dealing with Yuwen Ji's affairs, it was too simple!

Although women were very open in the Tang Dynasty, they were very conservative about chastity. Pig's feet sacrificed themselves to save her, but she was very moved, but she didn't come back so quickly, and fell in love with pig's feet, in fact, this is not inappropriate, but this time period is too short. Yuwen Ji once hated pig's feet to the bone, how can it be eliminated by saving a life, this requires a lot of effort on the pig's feet!

Zephyr's Princess Jincheng is certainly a very important character, but she has very little ink for her. She has the impression that she is the best in the world, smart and scheming, but there is no impression other than that. On the contrary, she has a deep impression of Bai impermanence, she has a more miserable life experience than Sanniang, she is a loner in the dark night, mocking all kinds of things in this world in the dark. At the same time, she is an emotional woman, which can be seen from her attitude towards Sanniang. The pig's feet once kept Bai Impermanence, but Bai Impermanence yearns for freedom, because she has never been free!

The Tang Xuanzong that Xifeng is shaping can be said to be a failure, and I have almost no impression of him (if not the big boss), and Gao Lishi is also a face-painted character.

From Zephyr's article, it is not difficult to see that it is the corruption of officialdom and the madness of women seizing power. Taiping is actually Wu Zetian's shadow, but she doesn't have Wu Zetian's strategy and decisiveness, she can't do big things after all, and she is not fierce enough, and to be an emperor, you must be ruthless and tolerant!

In fact, there are really few historical texts like Tian Khan, and almost all of them on the Internet are under the banner of the nation after crossing (revitalizing China and expelling Fanbang), and then openly picking up girls, accepting famous generals, winning the world, and destroying the Quartet. Otherwise, it's a historical text of farming.

Of course, Tian Khan also has these problems, but it is just a little less, it doesn't look so bad, it's acceptable!

At present, it seems that pig's feet will mix with officialdom for a long time, and may fight in the Quartet in the later stage.

The above is the supplemental content!

2011.3.19G