Author: Mr. Hatsunari Misamichi of Kotoshin has a thick atmosphere

The original review is weak, and I, a little white, can only play hard-headed and play like a monkey!

First of all, you said that Tian Khan is a relatively special historical novel, and from the author's style, character dialogues and landscape descriptions, you can analyze that Tian Khan is not as thick as other novels, and it looks a bit like a modern novel.

I beg to differ from that!

Take a closer look, I don't agree with the author's arrangement of the pig's foot identity and the style of acting from the beginning.

You must know that the leading idea of the pig's foot is the historical figure, not the modern man who travels through, similar to the alcoholic's guidebook, it is the historical figure who inadvertently gets the memory of the modern person, and the leading idea of the pig's foot is the ancient man. This is crucial and has a direct impact on the development of the novel as well as the experiences of the characters! The author has already mentioned in the article that the pig's foot is more inclined to the thoughts of the ancients, in other words, Xue Chongxun devoured the soul of the traverser, so it seems a little contradictory to use the modern description.

It is understandable if it is a modern person who possesses Xue Chongxun's body, but the pig's feet are not a modern traverser, nor is it Xue Chongxun, an ancient person, the pig's feet are a combination of the two of them, and in this combination, Xue Chongxun accounts for about two-thirds. So the pig's foot style is of course more inclined to Xue Chongxun, a historical figure, although it will also be influenced by the modern soul, but the impact is by no means earth-shaking changes, at least some living habits and leading ideas will not be greatly affected, so is it a little inappropriate to use the style of modern novels?

You said that the atmosphere of the Heavenly Khan was not thick enough, and my opinion on this point is different from yours. The word heavy has a lot of meanings in historical texts, not only the national righteousness is heavy, some seem to not focus on the national righteousness, in fact, between the lines have been written without a trace of the words about the nation, about human nature! Another meaning of the thick is the thinking about human nature, obviously for alternate history, it is difficult to measure it with the thinking of human nature! There are only two meanings for the fiction of alternate history, the first is for people to YY, and the second is the inheritance of history! Obviously, the author focuses on describing the selfishness and self-interest of human nature in the text, isn't this kind of alternate historical novel thick enough?

Besides, thick historical novels are not necessarily a bad thing, although the alternate historical essay is mainly for YY, but unconsciously it has carried some responsibility, when we read the alternate historical text, unconsciously has been more or less affected, for example, many novels write Li Shimin very selfishly, then we have unconsciously thought of Li Shimin very badly, at least the evaluation of this person is no longer blindly following the history book! In my opinion, Tian Khan's writing style is very heavy, and some of our readers can't accept the pig's feet and belly, selfishness, and capricious character, which is the result of Xifeng's unwittingly rendering the environment and characters in the text. If we read the first chaos in history, would we still feel this way at first?

Since the author positions the pig's feet as a black-bellied and selfish real villain, there are only two ways to make this kind of character better, one is to spoof like the first chaos in the history of Xiaohua, or to use nonsense like Xing Ye to contrast the character of the pig's feet. The other is to use a more dull and heavy language style to set off the atmosphere, which is a good way to deal with it! Xifeng is also trying to use some expressions to render the character of the pig's feet, rendering the heaviness and heaviness of the Heavenly Khan!

Historical details

You said that Tian Khan is different from most novels, and he is still relatively delicate in handling historical details!

My opinion on this point is the opposite of yours, and I have already criticized Zephyr for its lack of details in the previous post!

Before I refute you, I would like to ask the question, what exactly are the historical details?

Mr. Lu Xun once said that "Golden Vase Plum" is a classic novel comparable to "Dream of Red Mansions"! Due to some of the contents of the Golden Bottle Plum, in the eyes of most of us, the Golden Bottle Plum is an ancient erotic novel! The difference between us and Mr. Lu Xun is that we only see the color side, while Mr. Lu Xun sees the other side of the golden plum, which is its value! The Golden Plum Bottle is the first popular novel in history to write about small people, and Dream of Red Mansions is only written about dignitaries! Jin Zhumei wrote the bits and pieces of the little people, from historical events to common sense of life, these common sense of life is the most valuable place, and it is the place that can best reflect whether a novel is a classic novel!

It can be seen that historical details are not only the psychology and historical materials of historical figures, but also the real historical details must include the social atmosphere of the time, the living habits of historical figures, and the environment at that time......

However, the Heavenly Khan does not have these! The author ignores the common sense of pig's feet, I said in the previous post, I don't even know how big the pig's feet mansion is, and some of the sayings at that time don't know, what pig's feet usually eat and drink, what are their special habits...... None of these details were written.

It is true that the author's psychological grasp of pig's feet is still very good, but why not deepen it with some small details of life? Historical details are what happened at that time, and what they said was the story of that time! Let's be clear, are we writing fiction or information? If it's information, it's understandable to ignore some details of life, but what if we're telling a story? Then it must be comprehensive, at least there must be details of life, a story without details of life is a story of failure, it can't let us have a sense of substitution, can't let us enjoy YY, then it's a story of failure! Moreover, even the historical data should also record the living habits and social atmosphere of the time, these are all historical details, if it is only more detailed in the characters and some historical materials, then it cannot be said that he handled the historical details well! On the contrary, we would also say that he did not handle the historical details well! Of course, the Tian Khan is quite good in the alternate history text, and there are a lot worse than the Tian Khan, and in the absence of comparison, we can only say that the historical details of the Tian Khan are handled well, at least there is no heavy dà bug!

Act unscrupulously

You said that Xue Chongxun acted unscrupulously and had a very strong temperament, and my opinion is exactly the opposite of yours

Is Pig's Foot really acting unscrupulous? Unscrupulous means to act recklessly, to act recklessly, to only think in your heart, and not to care about anything!

On the other hand, the pig's feet have been trembling and living from the beginning, because according to historical records, Xue Chongxun only has a year to braid, and Princess Taiping is not in a hurry at this time, of course the pig's feet are nervous! Framing the younger brother of Colliers from the pig's foot (?) Beginning, rape Yuwen Ji, kill women, girls and children...... This series of events seems to be unscrupulous, but in fact, these are all things that Pig's Feet have designed a long time ago, because Pig's Feet wants to force his mother Princess Taiping to rebel! Xuanzong's butcher's knife was on the pig's foot's head, he was restless, and his actions could not be described as trembling! The design of this series of events with the trembling of pig's feet can be described as well-intentioned, and every step must be carefully taken before stopping!

In order to survive, the pig's feet are unscrupulous, and even do something that seems evil to us, this qiē can not be described as unscrupulous, which can overturn the statement that the pig's feet acted unscrupulously

Not enough YY

You said that Tian Khan is not YY enough, and my opinion on this point is even more contrary to you!

First of all, let's ask what YY is, conquer the world, there are thousands of harems, countless stallions, and the world is invincible. Live forever...... These are YY! However, these are only broad definitions, and in a small way, life is everywhere! Now I'll talk about how Tian Khan is YY!

First of all, judging from the title of the book, Tian Khan is one of the biggest YY!

What does Tian Khan mean? It is the honorific title of Tang Taizong from foreign clans! Who is Tang Taizong? He is a famous emperor in history, Emperor Taizong who ruled the world and created the prosperous era of the Tang Dynasty! As far as the title of the book starts, it can be seen that the target of the pig's foot is the emperor who has no ancients and no one after him, isn't this enough?

Secondly, the crossing is even more YY, who can do it in real life? In this way, the crossing itself is YY!;

As for the drama about raping women in the text, I won't talk about it, let's talk about whether this is enough YY?

The pig's feet were on one after another, and all the women on the floor followed him stupidly, and they couldn't get rid of it! If you say that women are not enough, let's say Sanniang and Bai Wuchang, the standard queen of cold noodles! Yuwen Ji, a standard married woman + dream girl (other people's fiancées are more energetic) ...... That princess Taiping is even more YY, but it's a pity that it's a pig's foot! If Zephyr dares to overthrow Taiping, then he will become a god

The word YY has not appeared for a day or two, and there are different opinions on the definition of YY, but one thing is certain, that is, "cool", sometimes even very realistic novels are very YY, because we can't do it, so it is very YY. Obviously, you don't understand enough about the word YY

There are a lot of YY places in the day khan.,It can be said that this is a very YY novel from the beginning.,From the selection of materials to the title of the book.,To the pig's feet.,To the pig's feet The style of doing things can be said to be everywhere YY.,It's just that the author YY is not very outrageous.,It's not invincible in the world from the beginning.,When you see the back, you know how YY this book is!

In the end, you said that there are very few big scenes (wars), and I assert that there must be big scenes behind Tian Khan, and there are a lot of them, and for the name of Tian Khan, he has to fight everywhere, and the filial piety of fighting foreigners like a grandson is worthy of the title of Tian Khan

In the end, Brother Brick is sorry, who called you to comment on the Khan? G