Xu Yuanzuo read: "The wealth of the king is hidden in the people, and the people are rich, how can the king be poor alone?" If it is said that the monarch and the people are one, in order to mourn the public. ”

Zheng Yue said: "Can you see the neck of the dragon's head? ”

"The wealth of the king is hidden in the people, and the people are rich, how can the king be poor alone?" Xu Yuanzuo said.

This answer is clearly correct.

Zheng Yue said again: "The flexible pivot is visible? ”

"In the 'unity of the monarch and the people'." Xu Yuanzuo thought for a moment and replied.

Zheng Yue said: "Therefore, we must first lead the leader in front and apply for the hub in the back, and this hub is the key to the following elaboration." If you look at your problem-solving, how can you extend it? ”

Xu Yuanzuo didn't expect Zheng Yue to have a "paperclip teaching method", and went back to it to see his broken question: "The sage's trip is hidden, and the non-sage can't be enlightened!" For a while, it seemed to be jammed in my head, and I couldn't deduce it.

It seems to be really a "broken" problem!

"Can't get it?" Zheng Yue said coldly: "Because although your title is broken, there is no 'breath' left." There is no 'breath' to solve the problem, just like a sewing needle without a needle nose, how to lead the thread? ”

"Yes." Xu Yuanzuo hurriedly used his brains to revise the question.

Zheng Yue took a sip of tea and said, "I'll make a small change for you, you see: it is appropriate for the saint to hide, and the capable person will start to show it." ”

"The saint's trip to Tibet" was changed to "the saint's trip to Tibet", the meaning is exactly the same, but the sentence structure is slightly adjusted, and the word "appropriate" is added, which just has the extended "breath".

As for the second half of the sentence, it has completely improved by an unknown number of grades!

The word "俟" wrote a rare and valuable meaning, and the momentum suddenly lifted up. It's like looking at the mountains, changing Xu Yuanzuo's flat and straightforward statement.

Although virtuous and capable are synonymous, they have their own emphasis, and the sage is biased towards quality. Those who are able are biased towards cultivation, and slightly adjust and echo the word "Tong", which can be described as a model of refining words.

As for "revelation" and "subtle revelation", the latter is in line with the Confucian principle of "subtle words and great righteousness", which contains but does not omit and leads but does not provoke. At first glance, it is the text of the Confucian sages. Xu Yuanzuo's "revelation" is like a straightforward and rude person, who has no heart for Wenxiu at all.

With such a change, the style has gone up, and the air outlet has also been obtained, so it is natural to take on the topic.

"It is not easy to cover the saint's line of hiding, and it is not easy to regulate it, and it can be said from a few faces."

Zheng Yue didn't wait for Xu Yuanzuo to think about words again. directly said a sentence and asked Xu Yuanzuo to copy it: "You have too little experience in writing, so it's a waste of time to be in a hurry now, and copy it down and go back to ponder it slowly." ”

Of course, Xu Yuanzuo used his pen like a fly and wrote it down.

"The key is the word 'breath', which must be pondered and not forgotten. Not only is there a breath in the problem, but the full text is three to five hundred words. Leave a 'breath' everywhere so that the text doesn't fall off. I can't bear it up and down. Zheng Yue broke the trick, which made Xu Yuanzuo feel empowered.

Xu Yuanzuo can be called a master of liberal arts, and his writing skills will definitely stand the test in later generations. However, after all, he is not the secretary of the big leader, nor is he a professional writer, and he does not work much on the article. In addition, there is a lot of modern writing, and he emphasizes the expression and does not care about the expressiveness. Wensi is a world of difference.

What's more, it is difficult for amateurs to work character refining.

Baguwen should have rhyme, confrontation, and charm, so it should be based on appropriate words.

After listening to Zheng Yue's professional advice, Xu Yuanzuo finally opened his eyes.

"After breaking and bearing the two shares, it's time to breathe." Zheng Yue said: "This 'tone' is the sage's tone. Solving the question and taking the topic is your own tone, so when it comes to the sage's tone. Everyone will change a kind of pen, the front is like a thousand pounds, here is to slowly say, the theme is not far from the four words "Zhongzheng Boya". ”

People who can become masters of liberal arts have a good literary heart. Xu Yuanzuo began to study on his own in college, neither with the guidance of famous teachers, but also with the same interests, and now he meets Zheng Yue to teach patiently, just like a long drought and nectar, he only hates the passage of time, and he does not feel bored and bored at all.

Even heard the highlights, Xu Yuanzuo even forgot about Hongchen, and just wanted to devote his heart and soul to the article, break into the Ming literary world, and fight for the top.

……

"In the middle of the Yan, it is the accumulation of the warehouse, and the so-called dependents are worry-free.

Between the fields, such as beams, and the so-called health care to send the dead has no regrets.

……

Those who hide all the Lu Yan have it, and they don't have to return to the treasury, and then it is my wealth.

Those who accumulate all the fields, you can use them, and you don't need to accumulate them, and then you have them.

There is no limit to what you want, so why worry about asking for something and not being able to get it?

Inexhaustible, why trouble and unpreparedness?

……”

"There are four strands here, which is just the bear's waist." Zheng Yue twisted his body: "Xiong Zhen beast, the huge force is on the waist, if you want to exert force, move your waist first." The same is true in the article, how do you hold the argument that the examiner agrees? It is necessary to regard the examiner as a prince and himself as a Confucian saint. The deep palace is high, and the princes are told to promote the way. At this moment, the waist strength is haired, the words are like whips, and it must be a good article with blood marks one by one! ”

Xu Yuanzuo saw that Zheng Yue spoke in detail, and the metaphor was thorough, which could be described as simple to understand, it was really not something that his twenty taels of silver could buy, and he couldn't help but feel grateful in his heart.

"If you want to write like a whip, it is best to use loose words. The four words are not urgent, the six words are not slow, and it is best to exert force. "Wenxin Carving Dragon" should also be read deeply when you have time. Zheng Yue took a sip of the teacup and moistened his throat, and said: "Before Gong Wenke, scholars didn't know what it was; After Duke Wen Ke, Confucianism followed his style. This is evident from this. ”

Xu Yuanzuo listened to it continuously, and suddenly felt that the teacher's words were also excellent sentences, and said with a smile: "The teacher is also a neat battle, and the whip penetrates." ”

Zheng Yue talked for a long time, and finally had a good time, and said: "You have a lot of allusions, which is because of the misfortune of reading. There are both advantages and disadvantages. The good thing is that the conversation is not boring. The writing is dictionary, and there can be an ancient style. The disadvantage is that in the scientific field, you must be careful and never use the allusions after Confucius. ”

Xu Yuanzuo immediately understood: "Yes, because I am speaking on behalf of Confucius, I am Confucius." If you use allusions from later generations, isn't it time-traveling? ”

"Crossing?" Zheng Yue was stunned: "Where is this allusion?" ”

Xu Yuanzuo searched in his mind, and it seemed that he had really not used it before, so he had to say, "Eh...... Fabricate. ”

"At a young age, don't take it for granted that you want to learn from Kong Beihai!" Zheng Yue scolded with a smile.

On the same day, Cao Cao broke through Yecheng, and Cao Pi accepted Yuan Xi's wife Zhen. Kong Rong wrote a letter to Cao Cao, saying: "King Wu will cut down and give the Duke of Zhou with Daji." Cao Cao didn't react and asked, "What kind of classics are there?" Kong Rong said calmly: "In this way, take it for granted." ”

This is the allusion of "taking it for granted", and Kong Rong has become the originator of the "apocryphal school" - before him, even if he made up allusions, and even forged tomb scriptures, no one dared to admit it loudly. From this point of view, Kong Rong is indeed worthy of being the founder of the school.

Xu Yuanzuo smiled and poured tea for the teacher. At this time, he was sincerely convinced, and there was no hint of stammering.

Zheng Yue drank tea, and suddenly heard the drums beating outside, and said suspiciously: "Do you want to announce it today?" Oh! It's really today! You go and think about it first, and we'll talk about it tomorrow. (To be continued......)

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