"Let me help you revise the opening?" Are you kidding!

"Anyway, since you've seen the first two chapters of my book, and you're the first reader of my new book, feel free to take a look."

Maybe the guests looked at them too sincerely, not like a joke.

Xu Mu couldn't help but believe it immediately, and asked casually:

"So, you're stuck in the opening now, aren't you?"

"Ahh Sheng Yanfeng rubbed his chin, slightly embarrassed, "You help me take a look first, after all, you can represent real readers." ”

Xu Mu turned his head and glanced down at the document interface displayed on the computer, "Do you have mineral water to drink?" ”

"Yes, you wait for me."

Xu Mu exhaled a big breath, he couldn't even say this opening directly, it was called a mess.

Not only is the creativity old-fashioned, the selling point is not clear, but the plot jumps at the beginning, without any sense of substitution.

Seeing the great writer walk out of the study and go to find water for him, Xu Mu sat down slowly, pulled the document to the top with the mouse, and quickly skimmed through the outline of the new book that the guest planned to write, as well as the content of the first two chapters.

After a minute or two, when footsteps sounded in the study, Xu Mu had almost finished reading the documents on the computer, and he knew it in his chest.

Sheng Yanfeng walked over to the desk and put a bottle of Alpine pure water on the table, "How is it?" I haven't seen it. ”

"Look,"

Xu Mu grabbed the expensive bottle of water, unscrewed the cap, and went into his mouth.

After drinking sweet coffee in the morning, my throat suddenly felt a kind of comfort baptized by the cold of ice.

Xu Mu swallowed a few sips of pure water, raised his hand to wipe the water stains on the corner of his mouth, looked ahead and asked, "You also wrote this kind of traditional fantasy of upgrading treasure hunting before?" ”

"Well, a book is a god."

Sheng Yanfeng's expression was excited, but then he frowned slightly, thought about it, and said a little helplessly, "Why do you say that there are so many things for readers now?" Fantasy is fantasy, what else is traditional and untraditional? ! ”

"It's not that it's not traditional, it's that the reader is tired of reading! You think, the market is full of upgrades to loot monsters, and if you are a reader, you will also vomit. Nowadays, online articles seem to be more popular brain hole articles, such as Dihuawen. ”

"Di Huawen? I seem to have seen them discuss it in the Great God Group, but I didn't dig into it. The guest shrugged and dismissed.

"In layman's terms, Di Huawen is a dog licking text. Whatever others say, the protagonist can do it, which attracts contrasts. ”

"Oh~Yo, I can't see that you're still an online white."

Xu Mu smiled and waved his hand, and continued:

"Take your new book as an example, it's good to still choose the fantasy you're good at, but don't be old-fashioned in terms of plot. You can give it a slight change. ”

Sheng Yanfeng grabbed a life-saving straw like a guy who was about to drown, his eyes lit up all of a sudden, and he asked with anticipation:

"How did it change? You said. ”

Xu Mu twisted the cap of the bottle, put the mineral water next to the computer, and held the mouse to pull the document.

Without hesitation, he pointed out the problem, "I took a look, the protagonist of your new book this time is a little eunuch, and then sign in and check in the palace, step by step to upgrade the force value, or get other rewards, right?" In fact, it is quite innovative to use the character of a eunuch as the male protagonist! ”

"However, let's not sign in step by step for a hundred years, or a thousand years."

"Then do you think there is a more attractive opening plot than this step-by-step check-in?"

"Absolutely!"

"Say it quickly!"

The guest pulled out a chair and sat down, making a gesture of having a long talk with Xu Mu.

"Some time ago, because I was going to write a fantasy brain hole short story, I deliberately spent two days doing a superficial understanding of the market hot articles."

"Sure enough! You're also an amateur author. ”

"I'm not an amateur author, harm, don't mention me."

"Amateur authors can write and make money, don't be embarrassed."

Xu Mu shrugged his shoulders and smiled:

"Compared to following the trend of step-by-step evolution of the protagonist's strength, just take the theme of your sign-in, the core point is to sign in or punch in, you can get good things, then let's directly extract the core cool point, the protagonist doesn't need to sign in slowly, let's be simple and rude at the beginning, sign in directly for a hundred years or punch in for five thousand years!"

"Then go to the violent plot.,Produce cool points.,Show your protagonist's awesomeness and invincibility at once.,The reader's enthusiasm can be aroused immediately.,You try this direction.,The plot written is guaranteed to be much cooler than the current one that has written two chapters but doesn't know how to pick up the plot later.。

Sheng Yanfeng's face was full of sorrow, "The method you said seems to make sense, so can you think of some particularly cool plots, is it suitable for opening?" ”

Xu Mu was speechless.

The heart says you're plugging me up when you're writing, aren't you?

"Harm, in fact, as long as you follow the direction I said, write boldly, let go of writing, how cool and how to write, you will definitely be able to produce good results."

"I understand all the theories you said, but when it comes to the plot, I still can't put pen to paper."

Xu Mu and the guests glanced at each other and smiled.

With one eye open and one eye closed, he began to talk nonsense:

"If you really can't think of the plot to be cool, then that's it, your protagonist travels to a dynasty to become a pure little eunuch, I thought I would spend a miserable and miserable life, but I didn't expect to activate the sign-in system, that is, the golden finger."

"Well, and then what?"

"The advantage of his golden finger is that the protagonist has a chance to get a reward if he signs in anywhere."

"And then? Start practicing after the reward? ”

Xu Mu was speechless again, propped his forehead, and sighed:

"Why do you keep twisting and practicing? For example, sign in the Emperor's Library Pavilion to get the reward [Supreme Martial Arts Cheats], and then, sign in the Jinluan Palace, and get the reward [What Awesome Eyes], so, when the protagonist appears at the beginning, he has signed in for 90 years, you think, if he signs in for 90 years, then he already has a lot of rewards, right? ”

"Huh? How to pick up the plot later? ”

"Simple, you write it with reference to a real history during the reign of Li Er of the Tang Dynasty!"

"Writing a history essay? I won't. ”

"Why are you so twisted! I'm asking you to follow that ancient pattern of warfare! For example, just when Li Er had just led the Xuanwumen Revolution and successfully ascended to the throne, but at this time, the foreign enemy suddenly approached Chang'an City! Millions of wolves rode straight through Chang'an, to slaughter the city, the situation is critical, your protagonist has to take action, is the plot naturally led out? ”

Bang bang bang.

The guests applauded excitedly.

Then, his face darkened again, "But I still don't know how to make this opening, why don't you follow the plot development you just said, and help me make an opening outline or outline?" ”

Xu Mu: "......"

I am your ancestor!

Is it okay for a small little-known intern network manager?

You're actually—

However, Xu Mu had the successful experience of writing "The Great Demon King" last time, and snapped his fingers happily, "Okay!" I'll try. ”

"Then you write quickly."

"If I hadn't written a fantasy short story a while ago, I wouldn't have been able to have such a smooth plot inspiration today, so why don't you take a look at my book first?" Xu Mudang even peddled his masterpiece to the guests.

"What platform did you post it on? I'll search for a pen name. ”

"I published it in Dianniang.,You search for "The Great Demon King".,It's also recently published.,If you have book coins in your account.,By the way, give me a full subscription.、It's okay to reward the cute master......"

"No problem!"

While selling his masterpiece strongly, Xu Mu rolled up his sleeves and began to crack on the keyboard to write a detailed outline.

Sheng Yanfeng searched for the book "The Great Demon King", looked at the data of the book and was very surprised: "This book is so popular!" No wonder...... I said how do you do this with novels, I see. ”

"Hehe...... I'm smiling, compared to a big writer like you who has written five million words, I'm just a little trouble."

"It's hard to get started! Since you can write a short fire article, it is possible to succeed if you try to write a long one. ”

"To tell you the truth, my short story has been adapted into a stage play."

"Huh? Adapted?! ”

Sheng Yanfeng hurriedly returned to the homepage and looked at the bottom of the book's homepage, the publication time of the novel, "The novel published last month was adapted so quickly?" Who are you editing, isn't it ......, which film and television company bought the copyright and sold it for how much money?! ”

Xu Mu, who was grinning, told the guests about the stage play.

In the end, I only heard the guest patting his thigh, and sighed again and again, "I can't think of it!" I really didn't expect that the big screenwriter actually lives next door to your house! If I had such an innate resource, my novels would have been sold for copyright a long time ago, although I am not short of money......"

"I rewarded you with a cute master, which can be regarded as repaying you for the lesson you taught me today."

"Harm, you're too polite, we're all peers, where can we use it."

Xu Mu said humbly, sitting behind the desk, his hands beating blindly.

Half an hour later, he wrote while thinking, and when he looked back, he actually wrote a detailed plot for the first hundred chapters!

"Okay, see for yourself."

Xu Mu clicked on the document to save, and when he stood up, he moved his muscles and bones, "I'm going to go to the gym clothes to exercise after work today, and I feel that my body bones are going to fall." ”

The guests couldn't wait to sit down in their chairs and look at the computer screen with their eyes blazing.

Xu Mu asked, "By the way, how about the gym at Huawu Hotel?" ”

"Not bad! Not bad!! It's so cool! ”

"Huh? Can the gym still be cool? ”

Xu Mu immediately thought in his heart, could it be that there are beautiful girls in the hotel gym?!

Sheng Yanfeng quickly browsed through the outline, looked up and said in surprise: "If I weren't a veteran of writing fantasy, I wouldn't have been able to understand your outline!" ”

"Don't understand? I'm writing it very clearly. ”

"However, your plot design is very emotional, the first chapter of the little eunuch library sign-in, the second chapter even the sunflower treasure book, the first introduction to martial arts, and then the third chapter of the noble, that is, the emperor, came to read, so the plot is very smooth, full of anticipation."

"If you're satisfied, then ...... I'll go first. ”

"Let's go! Let's go to the gym together, I'm going to go iron for half an hour today, and then go swimming for 20 minutes, and then I'll start writing the opening again when I come back! Tomorrow morning, you come back, and I promise you'll see a brand new novel. ”

Sheng Yanfeng snapped the computer, got up from the chair with a sturdy body, and pulled Xu Mu to the gym without saying anything.