It's been a long time since it's been bubbling.

Actually, after writing the beep beep last month, I also saw a lot of questions from everyone's responses, but I ......

I'll be honest, I'm trying to revise as much as I can, but the more I write, the more embarrassed I become.

You pointed out that my relationship between Roland and Kate was not full, and then I wrote a little theater similar to a doll's kiss, and it turned out that whether it was the effect or the smoothness of my writing, it was an explosion.

You pointed out that I had too much narrative text, and then I used dialogue to write about Fox and Warner these days, and I ended up honestly, I think I was still writing narrative......

I can see the problem you are talking about, and I want to solve it, but after I tried it for a month, I found that not only did I not solve the problem, but it became more verbose?

Because I deduce the outline writing mode from the results, there is not much tension in the plot, so that there is a situation where the narrative rushes the plot, but after the expansion of the writing, I found that the original fluffy net is now not even elastic.

I'm so confused!

When other writers find problems and solve them, how do I feel that not only can't find the problem, but also explodes in the learning process after you point out the problem and feel justified?

It's annoying.

The chapter I'm going to send today was written last night.,I took the time to change it during the day today.,But I think there's a problem with how to change it.。

I'm not struggling with words, and you know that I use punctuation a lot.

It's just that the whole deception is twisted to read, and I feel that something is wrong all over my body.

I'm so upset, but I don't know what's going on......

"Once Upon a Time in Hollywood" was written today and was too rubbish, so I deleted it. I am hitting it in my hand, please wait a moment,

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