Jiang Yu just curled the corners of his mouth lightly when he heard this, spread his hand and said easily: "So, Senior Sister Xiazhiqiu...... What is Kasumiko's answer? ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu smiled freely and said, "You're right. I really don't know how you, who are not a business writer or an insider in the game industry, know so many things. ”

"This script does have more or less problems in many places, and no amount of memes in the title can hide it."

"In terms of plot advancement, this time it was indeed my mistake, I was too impatient. Maybe it's because I'm pressed by the work of the club and the work of writers, and my mentality is a little unbalanced. ”

"Of course, please believe that I will adjust myself and finally hand over a good enough script."

In the end, Kasumigaoka's words were filled with a strong sense of confidence.

An Yilun also clapped his hands and said with a smile: "It is worthy of Teacher Xia Shizi!" ”

Ying Lili snorted lightly, but didn't say anything cool. Obviously, this fan who said that he had not read Kasumi's works but was quite familiar with Kasumi's creative style, expressed his silent approval of Kasumigaoka's words.

Even Jiang Yu, who has been picking on mistakes in the script today, has a lot of trust in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's writing ability. At first, you may wonder if the author who wrote "Love Metronome" can write a work with an otaku atmosphere like "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny".

However, after reading this script, Jiang Yu also had to admit that his previous understanding of Kasumigaoka Shiyu as Xia's Shizi was still too shallow.

Although before yesterday, he didn't know that Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was a senior with a black belly and a poisonous tongue, and Kasumi Shiko, the author of the first work that moved him after coming to this world, was actually the same person.

But as he said, it's all of them who have a certain stereotype about a writer who has only published one work.

Jiang Yu, who sighed that he had finally solved the problem of the script, yawned for a long time, stretched his waist, and said quite easily: "Then, I am looking forward to the masterpiece of Senior Sister Kasumigaoka~"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Jiang Yu, smiled meaningfully, and said, "I will definitely not disappoint Teacher Tu Su." ”

“…… So this title still spares me, right? Jiang Yu surrendered.

"Eh~ Ah Yu is really persistent in this regard." An Yilun also teased.

"I want you to take care of ......," Jiang Yu held his forehead and replied angrily.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at the two people in the complaint, and put on his usual smile that was a little cold, so as to show that he enjoyed the current atmosphere.

After a few people laughed for a while, Jiang Yu looked at An Yilun, who had just complained to each other, and said, "Then Lunye, has the problem you wanted to express solved?" ”

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Yingli also focused their eyes on An Yilunya.

An Yilun also nodded and said, "Almost, I was still thinking about what the problem was, but now I probably understand." The second illness is super interesting.,The "worldline convergence theory" also makes people feel super-burning inexplicably.,But in the same way,The ordinary life in ordinary daily life is also a part of the galgame that can't be abandoned.。 ”

"Hmm...... While I have reservations about whether or not the daily life in this game is bland, it's a good idea to give the player more hints and tips through everyday life before revealing the mystery. ”

"Of course, my advice is to grasp the degree of information leaked. It's a great feeling to have a vague guess and not get the right answer until the mystery is actually revealed! It can be said to be one of the motivations for players to keep playing! ”

"Although this degree is not easy to control, Senior Sister Shiyu must be able to write it! No, if it's not a senior sister, you can't write it! ”

In the end, An Yilun also fell into the state of excitement that he often showed, and turned into a brain-dead fan of Xia Shizi, so that Jiang Yu and the others had to look at each other, and then laughed and shook their heads at each other.

Especially Kasumigaoka Shiyu, listening to An Yilun's exaggerated praise, he calmly complained after laughing: "As a half-baked producer, but making this kind of request, I will kill you sooner or later......"

……

After glancing at the time, Jiang Yu said goodbye to An Yilun and others and left the audio-visual classroom, after all, he had to go back to cooking dinner and working......

As soon as he thought like this, Jiang Yu received a message from Kyoko Kato.

"The café is closed tonight, so your part-time job is canceled, so study at home/rest/play, high school students!"

Is that the branch of choice you offered me, Kato-san? Don't take life as a galgame! You can't use the S/L method!

But then again, being suddenly told that he didn't have to go to work, made Jiang Yu not know what to do for a while. It seems that in addition to the options given by Kyoko Kato, there are really other things that need to be done!

The unborn "Witch Queen"、The second volume of "Spring Things" is crying.,Hero-kun? Also, the rich old thief is beckoning to you~

……

After complaining without knowing who he was with—perhaps the god of this world (Kouhu)—Jiang Yu walked downstairs to his house, and then saw a rather familiar figure walking towards him.

Quietly waited in place, and after he approached, Jiang Yu greeted: "Little buried? Why did you come back at this time? ”

The girl next to him was smiling and talking, and he was stunned for a moment, and shifted his attention to Jiang Yu, and then his expression changed from surprise to joy, and he walked a few steps quickly to Jiang Yu, and shouted sweetly: "Brother~"

Behind the earth, a girl with short orange hair and a proud figure, with two braids just over her shoulders, and eyes of the same color as her hair were looking at Jiang Yu timidly.

Jiang Yu smiled and touched his sister's head, and then felt the kind of frightened rabbit-like gaze, looked at the proud girl in front of him who was wearing the same uniform as Doji, Jiang Yu nodded to her gently, and then looked at Doma and said, "Don't you introduce me to your friend, Xiao Bury?" ”

"Ah——! I'm sorry, brother. This is Ebi's famous dish, my classmate, she also lives with us~ Ebi-chan, this is my brother~" Tsuchima suddenly began to introduce each other.

Jiang Yu looked directly into the eyes of Ebi's famous dishes and said with a smile: "Hello, Ebi-chan." Thank you for being friends with our family. ”

Ebi's famous dish hung his head and said shyly: "You, hello, Onisan......"

I don't know if it's Jiang Yu's illusion, he feels as if he has seen wisps of green smoke rising from the top of the girl in front of him......

Steam Hime? Jiang Yu shook his head with a smile, putting aside his nonsensical thoughts.