Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was still thinking about it, had not yet spoken, but An Yilun suddenly said: "That's right! Sister Shiyu, that's probably what I want to express. ”

"The plot is great, and the characters on the stage are also very good, but I just listened to what Ah Yu said, and according to my previous experience of playing galgame, the problem is that the psychological description of the characters is too much, which is very good as a novel, but not good enough as a script!"

"But after all, it's the first time I've come into contact with game scripts, right? It's understandable that this would be a problem, but I always felt ......"

Speaking of this, An Yilun also hesitated, wanted to speak and stopped, and finally didn't say anything.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's frowning brows never let go, and when he heard this, he looked at An Yi Lun and said seriously: "Don't worry about my feelings, Senior Brother Lun Ye, if you have anything to say, just say it." ”

"Hmm...... Okay, okay, but I still can't say, I just don't think it should be just this one......"

An Yilun also finished saying this sentence with an embarrassed expression.

"Enough, Lunya? You've become purely angry, right? Ying Lili said unceremoniously when she heard this.

"Bet...... Gas......? An Yilun was also stunned.

"I casually said that it didn't work, but I couldn't find what it didn't do, and after my companion gave an answer, I said something like this, you just don't have the steps to go down?"

Ying Li Li said sharply.

always feels that she is just standing in the perspective of the creator and venting her dissatisfaction with the layman's fingers. In other words, in helping the silent Kasumigaoka Shiyu, trying to convince An Yilun also.

An Yilun was also speechless, and subconsciously turned his attention to Jiang Yu for help.

Seeing this, Jiang Yu coughed lightly twice, stood up and said, "Senior Sister Xiazhiqiu, do you still agree with the question I said just now?" ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu sighed lightly, nodded, and said, "It's true that there is this problem, it's because of my lack of experience, and I habitually write the script as a novel." I'll make changes to these when I get back. ”

Jiang Yu nodded, and then said again: "But this version can also stay, as I said just now, it is not impossible to launch it as a novel in the future." But as Lun also said, there is another problem. ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyebrows, which had just been slackened, furrowed again, obviously as a best-selling author, but his own works were picked on one after another, and this feeling was naturally not pleasant.

That is, because the person who picks on the thorn is currently half of the industry, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu also recognizes the other party's creative ability, so he didn't have to be proud of himself.

"You have so many questions, so why don't you write it yourself!" Ying Lili said suddenly, causing everyone present to be stunned for a moment.

"Ying Lili, what you said ......"

"If you say something like that, you won't be saved, Sawamura-san?"

"What......?"

Hearing Ying Lili say this, Jiang Yu, who was smiling helplessly, was about to say something, but saw an unexpected person stand up.

"It's like the director has behaviors that shouldn't be done to the creator, and the creator has things to say to the director that shouldn't be said. That's what you just said. ”

"Kasumigaoka Shiha......! You...... Who the hell do you think I'm talking to? ”

"At least, that sentence just now doesn't help me."

"Uh-huh......!"

Although this is said, it does not mean that Kasumigaoka Shiyu agrees with Jiang Yu and An Yilun who also said that "there is still a problem".

The reason why Kasumigaoka Shiyu spoke out may just be because of his reserve, or the part that cannot be compromised, or the bottom line in the creation of the work, which happened to be touched by Yingli Li.

Then sure enough, Kasumigaoka Shiyu straightened up, even though there was a tired look in the ruby-like burgundy pupils, he still stared straight at Jiang Yu, and said in a serious tone: "Then let's talk about it, another question." ”

Jiang Yu can clearly feel a pressure from Kasumigaoka Shiyu or Kasumigaoka Shizi, as a best-selling author who has sold a total of 500,000 copies just for his debut, Kasumigaoka Shiyu obviously has his own pride.

At the same time, it is precisely because of this pride that Kasumigaoka Shiyu is gradually breaking away from the youth of a high school student, and is beginning to behave as mature as an adult in all aspects...... Well, it's true that it's mature in every way.

Nowadays, being constantly picked on by your juniors in what you are best at is unacceptable from any point of view. Because of this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's words have an emotional component that is rare in him.

However, in essence, as an adult who has experienced college life and workplace life, Jiang Yu still calmly withstood this pressure, his eyes were clear, and he said in a calm tone: "A successful script, in addition to controlling an appropriate degree in dialogue description and psychological description, also needs to be good enough in the tension of the plot." ”

"Ah~ Of course, Kasumigaoka's script can't be said to be bad, but maybe my plan gave you the wrong impression, which caused the plot written by the senior sister to be too compact. Although it is also very good, as a game, players may feel that the story development is too hasty when playing. ”

"My idea is to gradually express what we want to convey to the player in a leisurely enough daily life, with some explanations of professional terms, and then tear apart the cruel truth through the first plot breaking point - the death of Mayori Shiina."

"Of course, it's not to let the senior sister deliberately write more meaningless daily plots, it's just that as a work with a big plot in the later stage, enough foreshadowing must be buried in front, so that when the mystery is finally revealed, it will not make players feel inexplicable."

"Besides, as the first work launched by our club, as a work that gives the first impression to the outside world and labels our club, I think you also want to come up with a work of sufficient grade, right?"

"After all, it's a club with Kasumi Shiko and Kashiwagi Hideri~"

In the end, Jiang Yu summed it up like this, with a half-serious and half-teasing smile.

“…… Hum! Who do you think you're talking to? Isn't that a matter of course? Ying Lili, who listened to Jiang Yu's explanation in silence, snorted lightly, raised her head, clasped her hands to her chest, and said in a proud tone.

“…… The twist you think about is bad enough. However, the masterpieces that have established a period of time in the past will definitely arrange some surprise elements that will make the plot turn sharply......"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu showed a slightly bitter and helpless smile, and sighed softly without knowing whether to agree or not.