"If you say something like this, the creator will want to hit someone after hearing it~ Lun also ......" said teasingly, Jiang Yu walked into the classroom and immediately attracted everyone's attention.

Looking at An Yilun, who looked embarrassed, and Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who used to sit in the front row with his hands on his chest and looked unhappy, Jiang Yu was a little confused.

So he had to ease the embarrassment and asked weakly, "So, what's wrong?" ”

An Yilun also breathed a sigh of relief, as if he had seen a savior, and pulled Jiang Yu aside to tell what happened.

“…… So, you said something like that? No wonder Senior Sister Xiazhiqiu is angry~" After listening to what An Yilun also said, Jiang Yu said with a wry smile.

It's very simple.,After going home yesterday.,Kasumigaoka Shiyu (self-proclaimed) who kept coming up with inspiration.,Stay up all night and liver out about one-third of the plot line of Shiina Mayuri.。

So early this morning, because he only contacted An Yilun, Kasumigaoka Shiyu sent the script to An Yilun first, asking him to send it to everyone in the club, ready to listen to your opinions.

And then there's this scene that happened during the lunch break. Ahn Ye-lun, who is dissatisfied with the script but can't say why, said the above words that will anger all the creators and show that he is an incompetent but nosy producer.

"Please, Ah Yu, take a look~ I just feel a little wrong, but I can't say why." An Yilun also folded his hands and said solemnly. Obviously, Jiang Yu, who is also a creator, especially a light novel writer, can clearly point out what he feels is wrong.

"What about the script...... Give it to me. Jiang Yu said with an expression of "I can't help you".

"Ah...... You wait, you're still at Sister Shiyu's. With that, An Yilun also walked over and carefully negotiated something with the cold-faced Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and finally walked back with a whole stack of papers clamped with a clip.

"Senior sister, there are only electronic files, which I borrowed from the school's mimeograph room during recess this morning."

While saying this, An Yilun also handed over the manuscript.

"The speed of a business writer is really amazing......" Jiang Yu took the stack of papers, and then let out a sound of surprise.

There is no other reason than that the title written at the very beginning makes people, especially the planning, feel very subtle.

"The super-sound galgame "Gate of Destiny Stone'" created by Ethics-kun himself, and the plot line script of Mayuri Shiina (tentative)"

What's the point of such a strange title as "Ethics Jun"? Does it refer to Lunya? But I wrote the proposal...... In addition, there is no similarity between the words "Lunya" and "ethics" in the Japanese pronunciation, and it can only be said that the character "Lun" is written in the same way.

With an inquiring gaze, Jiang Yu looked at An Yilun who was waiting on the side. seemed to understand what Jiang Yu wanted to ask, An Yilun also shrugged his shoulders, indicating that he didn't understand either.

Well...... I always feel like I'm losing if I complain. So Jiang Yu ignored the title written by Kasumigaoka Shiyu that made people want to complain, and turned the page to look down.

After a cursory scan, Jiang Yu couldn't help frowning. This script is obviously different from the script when Jiang Yu played the game in his previous life, but this is also a normal thing, after all, the person who wrote the pen is different, although the plot development is still that plot development, but it can be seen that the script is still full of the unique style of the writer "Xia Shizi".

What really made Jiang Yu frown was the same as An Yilun, a strange feeling that he couldn't say for the time being, like a fish in his throat.

Obviously, it feels like something that comes out if you try harder, but you never get the right answer.

Scratching his head in annoyance, Jiang Yu looked at An Yilun apologetically, sighed lightly, and said, "I'm sorry, Lun Ye, I'll give you the answer when I get out of school, I still need to take a closer look." ”

An Yilun didn't want Jiang Yu to say the crux of the problem at once, but since both of them felt that something was wrong, then this script must be lacking something necessary in the eyes of the two of them, who are senior galgame players.

But after thinking about it, as a rookie writer who has only published one work, Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who has never accepted the work of a related game script, has already handed over an answer sheet that Jiang Yu did not expect.

But it seems that An Yilun only called himself over at noon...... Does this mean that you want to throw away your share of the work of overseer as well?

Although he thought so in his heart, Jiang Yu had no intention of refusing these things. After all, as the planner of this game project, what Jiang Yu absolutely can't accept is that this excellent project, in the hands of a group of novices, fell from a masterpiece in the previous life to a dung work in the mouth of players in this life.

Therefore, if he can take over the work of supervision, always pay attention to and adjust the progress of the club, it is something that Jiang Yu cannot want.

After saying goodbye to An Yilun and Kasumigaoka Shiyu, Jiang Yu took the script and went straight back to the classroom, and then began to read it over and over again.

Just like in his previous life, he took the trouble to study the plots of those excellent works in order to write the plot lines of his independently produced games.

So throughout the afternoon class, the teachers who had been paying more or less attention to Jiang Yu recently breathed a sigh of relief, and Jiang Yu began to do his own thing again, concentrating on studying the script in hand.

When school was about to end, Jiang Yu finally slapped the table as if he had a sudden realization, and said excitedly in a low voice: "So that's the case!" ”

So, naturally, Jiang Yu attracted the attention of the whole class and the teacher on the podium. "Do you have any thoughts on what the teacher said?" Jiang Yu stood up and quickly apologized, and finally sat down amid the laughter of the whole class.

After anxiously waiting for the bell to ring after school, Jiang Yu, who couldn't hold back the excitement in his heart, immediately prepared to rush out and go to the audio-visual classroom.

Then he was stopped by An Yilun, who was one step ahead, at the door, and looked at An Yilun in puzzlement, only to see his friend say with a wry smile: "Although I understand that you may have figured out the problem at noon, so you are in a very urgent mood, but let's slow down, right?" Let's not talk about the school rules, at least we can't explain it until Senior Sister Shiyu also arrives, right? ”

Jiang Yu let out a long breath, calmed down and said, "It's me who is too anxious, Lun Ye is right, let's go over after we pack up our things." ”

After returning to the classroom to pack up their things, the two walked briskly to the audio-visual classroom. On the way, Jiang Yu, who suddenly remembered an inconspicuous classmate, asked suspiciously, "By the way, isn't Kato going?" ”

An Yilun, who was walking in front, also said without looking back: "Ah~ Kato-san's words, it seems that there is something to do today, and at noon, he told me that he would not participate in the club activities in the afternoon." ”

"That's ......" Hearing this, Jiang Yu suppressed his curiosity and prepared to deal with the matter at hand first.