Shen Xin was not surprised at all that Xi Muhan and Lu Ning's new works were taken back for revision.

Is "The Girl Who Traveled Through a Parallel World" serialized?

The level is certainly enough.

Xi Muhan has shown a strong creative ability in "Ding Shi", and Lu Ning's creative level is even more different from before.

Therefore, there is no reason why the comics created by the two people together should not be serialized.

The most fundamental reason why Hook is asking the two to readjust the plot is that the requirements for the works are different - the magazine hopes that the new work of the two will become a new pillar, rather than a work hovering in the half.

Xi Muhan and Lu Ning modified the name again according to Hook's proposal, and now because Lu Ning also uses a pen display, it is more convenient to modify.

As for the title of the book, the two of them thought about it for a long time, but they really couldn't think of a suitable name.

After all, it is still difficult to reflect the theme of the story with a small number of words.

In Shen Xin's studio, the assistants left one after another, and Xi Muhan and Lu Ning also discussed the progress of the comics with Wu Xiaoli, and later, Yan Fei and Wang Wenhong also participated, and the discussion was very happy.

After Shen Xin turned off the pen screen and computer, he yawned loudly, came out of the office, and saw that the five people were still discussing in Lu Ning's studio, so he knocked on the door.

When Lu Ning saw Shen Xin, she immediately stood up, and the other four people also consciously gave way a little.

"What for?"

"A name. Team leader Hook said that "The Girl Who Traveled Through a Parallel World" is too long, and it is better to compress it. Wu Xiaoli explained.

"I think it's a good name, and I say the selling point directly." Shen Xin said with a smile.

Choosing a name for a book is a very particular thing, and the same is true for the Internet, so it is better to have a selling point. For example, the system text has "xx system", this is because readers may search for this book when searching for the popular word "system", and similarly, there are books of "XX God of War", "XX God Emperor", and "XX of Rebirth", which is also because of this reason.

However, the names of some manga are also guessable, such as "mix" and "H2" by Anda Mitsuru, "Five Star Story" by Nagano Go, etc., if you don't read the manga, you will never guess the content of the manga, and even the subject matter will be difficult to think of.

For "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World", Shen Xin felt that there was no big problem.

"Really? That...... To change or not to change? Xi Muhan hesitated.

"Judging by what Editor Wu means, I'm not very good at this either." Shen Xin picked up the name and looked at it quickly, his brows raised slightly.

"Teacher, is there anything wrong?" Lu Ning saw that Shen Xin had some opinions on the revised name, so he hurriedly asked.

"I didn't ...... I just think the previous name was pretty good, but after the modification, it lacks its own characteristics. Shen Xin was a little regretful, "The plot after the first episode has some routines. ”

Wang Wenhong and Yan Fei looked at each other tacitly.

That's what they think too.

"Obviously, the first episode is more suitable for evil comics." Shen Xin added again.

"But creating evil comics...... There will be a limit to the length of the article. Xi Muhan said tangledly.

"Then it's up to you. If you want to create a manga with a high reputation, focus on the first episode. If you want to draw a long-form comic, focus on the plot later. It's just, I think, if you focus on drawing the rest of the story...... It doesn't matter whether the heroine crosses over or not, right? ”

"The later plot is related to crossing." Xi Muhan added.

Shen Xin couldn't laugh or cry, "Maybe, but readers don't know that there is a relationship between the two." Unless you want to emulate The Gate of the Destiny Stone, you can get along with each other. If you want to use crossing as a selling point, I ...... Personally, I'm not very optimistic. ”

Many times, the creator will set a plot, and this plot has a lot to do with the follow-up, but readers don't buy it and feel that the plot is redundant, which is actually the case.

Because the reader doesn't know the creator's outline, they can only see what the creator wants them to see, and the creator can't spoil it, so it's hard for both parties.

Take this new comic as an example, judging from the first three episodes, the relationship between the first and second and third episodes is not too big, which is also the most regrettable thing for Shen Xin, because the first episode has the potential to become a pillar, and may even become a classic of another evil comic.

The first episode of "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World" reminded Shen Xin of "Another", the atmosphere is very close, the two can draw a decryption comic, but the decision is in the hands of Xi Muhan, and Shen Xin doesn't want to put pressure on her.

The others also looked at Xi Muhan, who was deep in thought, waiting for her decision.

It's just that how to choose the direction of the story has never been a simple matter, and sometimes it may even make the achievements of the work go from prosperity to decline.

On this day, Xi Muhan didn't give a result, and it wasn't until later the next day that she got everyone together and said her thoughts - to dismantle "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World".

How to dismantle?

This question comes to everyone's mind.

"It's to disassemble the first episode and the later plot. From the first episode of the original version, a new comic has been extended, focusing on adventure and decryption. The content in the back is redesigned to be in love, adventure, and add some mythological or monster elements. It's just that in this case, I may have to wait a little longer for me to rearrange my work. As for the name of the new work, it's still called "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World". ”

Xi Muhan apologized to Lu Ning and Wu Xiaoli.

Shen Xin nodded, he understood Xi Muhan's idea, that is, to divide this step of the comic into two completely unrelated works.

In this case, Shen Xin is still looking forward to the first story, in Shen Xin's opinion, it does have the potential to become a pillar, or even surpass other comics of "Comic Future", of course, provided that "SLAM DUNK" is excluded.

After Hu Ke learned of Xi Muhan's decision, he didn't say a word for a long time.

Unexpectedly, his words postponed the serialization date of a new work by a month.

The time entered December, and the schools shortlisted for the national competition were determined one by one, and Fang Man also transferred the information of the major colleges and universities to Yan Fei, and then Yan Fei sorted it out and handed it over to Shen Xin to draw the character.

At the same time, the full-color version of "SLAM DUNK" has finally been finalized, and after Yu Chen and Shen Xin agreed, it was determined that the full-color version would be sold in limited quantities of 100,000 copies, and the unit price was set at 100 yuan.

The full-color version is just the icing on the cake, and SLAM DUNK is still sold as a single copy of the regular version.

Of course, these contents are just things that Yu Chen and Shen Xin discussed privately, and on major platforms, Yu Chen and the magazine of "Comic Future" only said one thing - the single book of the full-color version of "SLAM DUNK" will be released in the first half of next year.

This news is indeed great news for SLAM DUNK lovers, many people are talking about the full-color version of the comic on the forum, and they are gearing up to buy a copy.