After Lu Ning drew "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" by himself, the storyboard has been significantly improved compared to before, and the characters given are more proficient, and even vaguely have the shadow of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny", which shows that Lu Ning has gradually developed his own style.

The name of the manga is relatively long, called "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World", and as you can see from the name, this manga is different from other traditional comics, and it is based on girls as the first perspective.

Such works are very rare, because there are magazines with girls as the first perspective, and usually, the readers of this kind of comics are mostly girl-oriented comics, and magazines are also called girl's magazines, such as "Girls' Century".

This kind of work is more delicate, and because it's a girl-oriented comic, there are more handsome guys.

However, "Comic Future" is a shonen manga, and most of the readers are boys, and even if there are female manga artists serializing it, most of them describe the story from the perspective of boys.

Like "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World", the title of the book shows that the perspective is a girl, and it's really hard to say whether this kind of comic can attract readers.

Hook took out the wind oil essence and wiped his temples.

This comic, you must concentrate on it, otherwise, making a wrong judgment is not good for the two teachers and the magazine.

I said...... Xiaoli, ah......" Hook put away the wind oil essence and looked at Wu Xiaoli.

"Huh?"

"I ask you something...... Well, you've seen this name, right? ”

Hook also knew that the answer was "yes", but he was still not reassured.

"Team leader, this name was finalized by me and Teacher Xi Muhan for two weeks." Wu Xiaoli said patiently.

"You know Comic Future is a shonen manga, right?" Hook asked again.

"Of course I do." Wu Xiaoli nodded.

"That's good......"

After hearing the "yes" answer, Hook took a deep breath and his gaze fell on Name again.

Now that Wu Xiaoli knows this, then he can rest assured to watch it.

"The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World" tells the story of a girl named "An Jie", who has always had a good impression of her male classmate Wang He, but she is introverted and has never dared to confess to Wang He.

During a class trip, An Jie met Wang He on the beach, and the two looked at each other and smiled.

Suddenly, a big wave rose on the beach, and before An Jie could run away, she and Wang He were involved in the big waves.

The sudden change made Hook's scalp numb and gave him a lot of goosebumps.

This turning point came too quickly. It's just a surprise.

The heroine died suddenly in the first word? What is this God unfolding?

Wait, the title is "The Girl Who Traveled Through the Parallel World"...... The heroine shouldn't be able to cross over, right?

Hook turned the next page again, and sure enough, Ann Jie opened her eyes, she was lying on the bed, and the alarm clock on the table showed 6:30.

It turned out to be a dream.

An Jie quickly dressed, washed, ate, and took the subway to the school, but when she was previewing, her eyes moved to Wang He, but there were other people sitting in Wang He's seat.

Until the end of the first class, Wang He still did not come.

"I just found out that Wang He ...... Seating ...... Was it changed by the teacher? An Jie was embarrassed to ask directly why Wang He didn't come, so she could only ask her table mate from other aspects.

The same table turned his head in surprise, looked at An Jie, and touched An Jie's forehead with his hand, "Do you have a fever?" ”

"What's wrong?"

"Wang He is dead...... Passed away a year ago......"

Reading this, Hook got goosebumps all over his body.

It seems that the plot is bland, but the direction of the plot is a little unexpected.

This comic ...... Some heretical cartoon meaning.

Hook held his breath again and continued to look down.

An Jie thought that her table mate was joking, and hurriedly asked about several recent group activities, but found that her table mates denied all of them.

An Jie was unwilling, and when she returned home at night, she turned out the class photo, and there was no Wang He on the photo.

Clearly...... There is Wang He.

An Jie remembers very clearly, she has seen this class photo many times, and even Wang He's smile is clearly remembered.

Just when her mind was full of doubts, something suddenly tapped on the window. She tiptoed open the window, and suddenly a person curled up and stepped on the window edge, and it was Wang He......

After reading the first episode, there were countless reversals, which made Hook addicted.

Subsequently, the second and third words are to advance the story, and An Jie did cross over, because she can see things that ordinary people can't see, goblins. And from this, the plot unfolded.

"How? Leader. Wu Xiaoli asked.

"Yes, the quality of the first episode is the highest, and the plot of the last two episodes is stable, unfolding the world view, and it conforms to the rhythm of the comics......"

Wu Xiaoli nodded again and again, "I think so too." ”

"But there's one thing...... No, I think it's a little bit less fluent. Hook hesitated.

"Huh? Have it? ”

"It's not too big, but I think the reversal of the first word is too much. IF THIS IS AN EVIL MANGA, THEN THIS OPENING IS EXTREMELY EXCITING, AND IT CAN EVEN OVERPOWER ALL THE MANGA EXCEPT "SLAM DUNK", BUT IT IS CLEAR THAT THIS IS NOT AN EVIL MANGA, THE MANGA INTRODUCES YOUKAI, BUT THE YOKAI IS NOT DIRECTLY RELATED TO WANG HE'S DEATH...... In fact, when a person dies, the atmosphere of the story becomes serious and depressing...... Is it possible to replace it with an excuse such as a transfer, otherwise, the tone of the story is too dark.

"Of course, I'm not saying that there can't be a dark tone, but that the tone is laid out in the first episode, which does not match the atmosphere of the second and third episodes, and it is easy for readers to feel 'fooled'. Personally, I suggest that the dark tone of the first episode be put away a little. ”

Wu Xiaoli frowned, carefully thinking about the name, and the whole atmosphere of the story, I have to say that what Hook said also makes sense, the atmosphere of the first sentence is too heavy compared with the next two words.

At the time, I was just trying to attract readers quickly, but I forgot that this manga was not an evil manga.

It would be better to revise it again.

Wu Xiaoli wrote this down in her notes, and then asked, "Team leader, what are the shortcomings?" ”

"Nothing else, the overall quality is so high that people want to read it. However, it is still quite difficult to observe the world from the perspective of a girl, and I hope that the two teachers can create a wonderful work, and then the title of the book...... Isn't it too long? We're not light editors, so there's no need for such a long name, right? ”

"Huh?"

Hearing Hook's comment, Wu Xiaoli had a black line, and she felt that this was the most appropriate title for the theme.

Change your name? So what should it be called?

Wu Xiaoli scratched her head, it seemed that she could only discuss with Xi Muhan again.