This feeling is that it has not been mentioned much before, and then it suddenly appears, making the reader feel strange.

The strongest sense of disconnection is actually changing the map. When creating, don't be too attached to one place or one aspect in the early stage, and don't give the reader a sense of closure.

In terms of food types, in this regard, "The Spirit of the Halberd" was handled very well in the early stage, such as the use of molecular cuisine, Chinese cuisine and French cuisine, especially in the autumn selection competition of the first grade, a large number of delicacies are eye-catching.

But the problem that comes with it is that a large number of new dishes are brought out at one time, which makes it difficult to surprise the subsequent dishes.

On "the-blue", chefs carry chainsaws or small guillotines and cook ...... Well, Shen Xin doesn't know how to cook, so he doesn't comment on this.

But what Shen Xin wants to say is that whether it is the lack of variety of dishes or the contradiction in the setting, it is not as good as another point, the sense of separation caused by the map.

In the middle and early stages of "The Spirit of the Halberd",The map of the comic is mainly in the Far Moon School Park,Or nearby places,With the development of the story,The Far Moon School and the advancement of the plot,Gradually mismatched,Need to lead to a new "map"。

Originally,"Ghost Father Chapter" is a good opportunity to bring the world outside of the Far Moon School Park into the reader's field of vision.,But I don't know why.,Fukuda Yuto gave up this practice.,As a result, the later plot and the previous plot,There is a problem in the connection.。

The tearing caused by the "map", or the impact of the protagonist entering different "maps", is actually a very serious problem, including online texts, there will be things that lead to the collapse of grades due to the replacement of maps.

The number of authors who are able to solve this problem is really too small compared to the practitioners.

Taking the city of the online article as an example, the biggest change of map is to turn from the city to the cultivation of truth, but the vast majority of them have collapsed here, and those who have passed this hurdle are almost the best in the city.

Shen Xin's words gave Xi Muhan a certain idea, she bowed slightly, and said softly: "If you want to add foreign dishes, you really need to prepare well." ”

"It's not just about other countries, it's about foreign players—by the way, if there's a foreigner, it's ...... in terms of language What are you going to do? After all, there is a language barrier. Shen Xin said curiously.

"Huh?"

Xi Muhan blinked his eyes, he didn't think about foreign cuisine originally, he really didn't have to worry about the difference in language, but now he had to think about it seriously.

"Remember, for characters who only appear once, you can make the other party not understand Huaxia, and if it is a resident character, you must be able to speak Huaxia fluently!"

"Huh? Can you speak Huaxia? Readers must be in the play! Xi Muhan was surprised, "They will complain about the setting, right?" ”

"Yes, the creation of the work should take into account the rationality, but the rationality is also in the service of the plot, if the characters do not know Huaxia, every time they say a word, and then someone else translates it, the fluency of the story will be greatly reduced, so, in the 11th area, the comic characters can speak a word of Japanese fluently, even if they are foreigners. When you are creating, just add a random reason, explain the reason, and don't pursue the logic too much. Shen Xin explained.

This will certainly be considered a wise setting by the Rational Party, but everyone is in a different position, and they only see it as a result, but they don't see why it is done.

If you follow their suggestion and assign a translator to the character, revise the name and manuscript, they will say, who goes abroad to be a chef/competition/school, and there is a translator standing next to them?

If a setting has 10% of the disadvantages and 90% of the benefits, then the author must use this setting.

It's not that the author doesn't know the disadvantages of the setting or plot, but it is necessary to comprehensively consider the impact on the whole work and the difficulty of creation.

Lu Ning has been following comics for a long time and knows some routines, but sometimes it's just speculation, like today, Shen Xin said it directly, which is indeed rare.

But the content in these words is more important to Xi Muhan, she is the original work, and she needs to consider the arrangement of the plot, so she has to face these problems directly.

"By the way, Sister Yan doesn't seem to have been here much recently......"

"Well, Sister Yan has been busy lately. Because of the matter of Zuo Yuan. ”

"Speaking of Zuo Yuan, how is he now?" Shen Xin suddenly remembered Zuo Yuan, after the announcement was made by Duoman.com, he didn't pay much attention to Zuo Yuan - he also had a lot of things.

"After "Minecraft" was unblocked, it was updated with two more words, which is over. He is now working as an assistant to a manga artist, and by the way, he draws the name of a new manga, and I heard that he also has to create a short story, and after getting approval, he can serialize. ”

"Normal. After all, he hasn't broken out of "Comic Future" yet, and although "Minecraft" has signs of momentum, it was snuffed out before it could raise its head. In fact, Sister Yan also wants to succeed once by doing this. I guess he's been drawing names for the next few months. Of course, after a lot of practice and revision, the next manga should improve. ”

The popularity of a work requires the author's strength, luck and nobles, and I don't know what kind of popularity Zuo Yuan's new work will have.

"There is still one thing, Sister Yan just mentioned it...... However, it doesn't have much to do with us. Xi Muhan raised his head and recalled.

It doesn't matter much...... So why are you mentioning this?

Shen Xin couldn't cry or laugh, but he still subconsciously asked, "What's the matter?" ”

"There seems to be a Chinese comic in District 11, which is a little popular."

"In District 11, there are a few more popular Chinese comics, isn't it common?"

"However, that comic is not well-known in China."

"What?" Shen Xin was a little surprised.

According to common sense, it is still very difficult for Huaxia's works to become famous in District 11, just like on the earth, it is also difficult for District 11 to enter the Chinese market. The lightness that readers can see, whether it is officially published or translated by enthusiasts themselves, has actually been screened in Zone 11.

If he didn't break out of the domestic market, but he was well-known in District 11, it really surprised Shen Xin.

"What's the title of the book?"

"I don't know......" Xi Muhan scratched his head, a little embarrassed, "Sister Yan only said it once, it seems to be related to dancing or dancing." ”

What's the difference between that and not saying it?

"It should be "Dancing Queen", it is indeed a fighting dance."

Fighting dance is when several people are divided into two groups and take turns in the center of the stage to do BREAKING movements. Originally, sports channels promoted this sport.

Shen Xin didn't know how to fight, but he looked very high.

"Fighting? It sounds like a lot of fun, too. The name is somewhat familiar, though. Shen Xin had some impressions, but he couldn't remember them.

"Teacher, Zuo Yuan had an accident not long ago, and he was swiped by someone to replace "Minecraft", which is "Dancing Queen". Lu Ning reminded.

"It turned out to be the ...... of that work" Shen Xin bowed slightly, suddenly interested in this comic.