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After the sentence "The Struggle of the Fool", the direction of the story exceeded the expectations of many readers.

Glid completely took possession of Yao Lin's body, and the situation was one-sided, and the Ellik brothers were also subdued by Envi and Gratoni. At this critical juncture, Scar Man Scar and Zhang Mei, in order to find the red panda Xiaomei, enter the basement and meet the androids and the Elric brothers.

The androids fought fiercely with Scar and May, and the Elric brothers took advantage of the chaos to regain their freedom, and at the same time, Edward also discovered one thing - May and Scar were able to use "alchemy".

Taking advantage of the chaos, Edward also told Scar the truth about the "Ishvar Rebellion", that is, Envi turned into an officer and shot the little girl.

The war is about to break out, but the Elric brothers and others are no opponents of androids, Zhang Mei and Xiaomei hide in Al's armor, and the two brothers are captured and sent to the headquarters, and have a frank conversation with Bradley......

With each episode of "Steel", the plot will progress to varying degrees, and as commented on the Internet, there is almost no waste plot in this comic.

Before you know it, the chapter of "Steel" finally touches on one of the two greatest tragedies - the "Rebellion of Ishvar".

This war is a war in which the strength itself is unequal, not to mention the powerful firepower of Amestories, just the national alchemist it has, which makes the balance of this war completely tilted.

One familiar face after another, one by one.

Hughes, Lisa, Roy, Armstrong, and, in the second half of the comics, the "Alchemist of the Red Lotus" Kimberley......

At the same time, Wen Li's parents, the Lockbell couple, who have been helping the people of Ishvar, also appear in the picture.

In the last two weeks of August, "Steel Forge" officially tells the story of the war, and the plot that was originally slightly stretched out is tense again, and at the same time, the cruelty of the war is also bloodily displayed on paper.

It was a war of annihilation, and Amestolius slaughtered the Ishvars and nearly wiped them out.

The discussion on the Internet about the "Rebellion of Ishvar" has not stopped since the "footsteps of annihilation", and this one has been implemented from the early stage and the dark line in the comics, which has been highlighted.

Since this plot is a memory, readers already know the outcome of the incident in advance. Therefore, when seeing this plot, many people can't bear to read it, otherwise, a sense of depression will come to their hearts when they read this plot.

Whether it is the small book of "ic future" or the ranking of the popularity list, "Steel" has a downward trend, and it has been surpassed by "King of Rock" and "Age of the Gods" respectively.

However, cartoonists and readers who have seen this plot are in a different mood.

Tragedy is the destruction of valuable things in life for others to see.

The more tragic and sadistic it is, the more memorable it is, and at the same time, it also deepens the depth and connotation of the story.

This is a double-edged sword, with both good and bad sides.

For the decline in the rankings, Shen Xin has also been prepared.

is like the disappearance of Zuo Wei, although the ranking of "Chess Soul" almost collapsed, but looking back now, if Zuo Wei had not disappeared, "Chess Soul" may not be so memorable.

Of course, although the "Ishvar Rebellion" is a tragedy, its impact on the work is far less than that of Sawei's disappearance, and the reason for this is that the sense of substitution is different.

Zuo Wei is equivalent to the status of the second male protagonist in "Chess Soul", but the civil strife in Ishbal is different, there are only a handful of people named by name, and besides, except for Scar, there are not many dead people, and the reader's feelings for these characters are naturally not as good as Zuo Wei.

It's just that seeing such a plot, inner depression is inevitable.

Shen Xin didn't care about this, this plot passed, and the ranking of "Steel Refining" naturally went up.

Unconsciously, in the evening, the aunt returned home after making a supper, and Xi Muhan led Lu Ning to the studio.

As soon as he went up to the second floor, Xi Muhan couldn't wait to say, "Brother Xin, Sister Yan said that the little book "Ding Food" won the 7th place. ”

"Really? It's amazing! Shen Xin saw Lu Ning behind Xi Muhan, and bowed slightly, "Teacher Lu, how do you feel about being serialized in "ic future"?" ”

Lu Ning smiled bitterly and said, "Master, when you say that, aren't you specifically stumbling on me?" ”

In the comic industry, an assistant is basically equivalent to an apprentice of a cartoonist.

"You suddenly called me master, I feel so old." Shen Xin waved his hand, he thought he was young.

Lu Ning rolled her eyes, this kind of thing is not up to her.

Having said that, Shen Xin was right, after all, he was really too young.

"Then call the teacher first, right? 《ic future》…… I can only say that the pressure is so high. Lu Ning sighed, "When I was in "Girls' Century", I always felt that it was easy to get the first place, in "IC Future", the top was the 5th place in the first word, the 6th place in the previous word, and the 7th place in this word, and every word felt like it was going backwards." ”

"It's normal." Shen Xin comforted, ""Chess Soul" was originally serialized on "IC Future", and the results were unstable, but at this time, the mentality must be controlled. As I said before, because it is a serial, the creator's mentality must fluctuate with the feedback from readers, and as for the plot of the story, you also have to make adjustments in time. ”

"Huh? How to adjust? No...... Didn't you say that you should stick to your own opinions? ”

"There are two scenarios. First, the reader's opinion should not be affected too much, but avoid the poisonous point; Second, the ranking of small books is very important, and sometimes, even more important than the sales of individual books. After 16, be ready to cut it down at any time. Therefore, the drawing of NA must be fully communicated with Sister Yan, but do not draw too long NA, at most two or three words, so that it can be changed at any time...... Xiaohan, you have no experience, these are actually for you. Don't take it for granted, you must discuss it with Sister Yan more. ”

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was stunned for a moment, then nodded, "Got it!" ”

"Also, there must be an overall plan, and for a certain period of time, different new ideas must be come up. The background of "Ding Food" is now, including molecular cuisine, the world's three major cuisines, and some small local specialties, all of which can appear, and the vision should not be too small. ”

Lu Ning and Xiao Han's eyes lit up, both of them focused on domestic dishes, and indeed forgot about foreign cuisine.

"Another point is that the construction of the world view must be well paved, otherwise the sudden introduction of foreign dishes or characters will make the comics have a sense of tearing."

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