Xi Muhan wanted to cooperate with Su Han, but he couldn't do so for the time being.

Su Han hopes to get involved, after all, "Steel Forge" has already shown signs of momentum in China, and it also has a good popularity in District 11, plus Zhuang Si Yuye's popularity in the industry is also very high, and at the same time, Shen Xin and Xi Muhan will also participate. All kinds of factors made Su Han feel that if he had the opportunity to write a script for this comic, it would also be a good experience.

However, she is now promoting the new book, and it will take half a month to go down this circle.

That is to say, in this half a month, she will not be able to return to Hongchuan.

Su Han was hopeless to join temporarily, and Shen Xin and Xi Muhan didn't feel discouraged, in fact, the reason why Xi Muhan wanted to ask Su Han for help was mainly in the creation of the script.

If the same outline is given to different authors, it will definitely be different.

This difference is not only reflected in the choice of words and sentences, but also in the control of the rhythm of the story.

Xi Muhan used to write in ancient style, with delicate writing, and emphasized that feelings emanate from the inside out, and unconsciously, the emotions of the characters have blended with each other.

But Su Han is good at reasoning, and emphasizes the suspense of the story, and sometimes, in order to achieve unexpected results, he doesn't even emphasize too much logic, which leads to the rhythm that Su Han writes faster than Xi Muhan.

In particular, in recent times, Su Han has also tried to change her style and want to make her style more diverse, in fact, her latest love is much better than before.

At the same time, in terms of creative experience, Su Han is richer than Xi Muhan, and the problem is not too big to deal with.

Since it was still early in September, Shen Xin was not in a hurry, and Xi Muhan took advantage of this time to continue to revise the detailed outline, striving to complete the detailed outline before Su Han came.

This time, Xi Muhan also began to try to determine the general rhythm of the story according to the length of a single episode, for example, the first episode introduces the background, the second episode foreshadows, and the third episode turns the gods......

Highlight each episode and add the appropriate content to it, redistribute the plot while removing superfluous details.

The original 11 episodes of the outline were simply reduced by one episode.

At the same time, Shen Xin also put forward his own opinion, although the work is a double protagonist, but unlike "Steel Refining", Zhang. Mei and Yao Lin have relatively independent storylines, so when creating, they can only focus on one character.

"It's better to take Zhang. Mei is the beginning, which can be borrowed by Zhang. Mei, lead to alchemy, however, the whole story is best to focus on Yao Lin, after all, Yao Lin still has Fu Ye and Lan under him. Fang, the difficulty of creation is slightly lower, so that there is nothing to say. ”

Xi Muhan nodded.

There must be more things happening between the three of them than one person, not to mention that Yao Lin, as the prince, is also closer to the emperor.

Xi Muhan has already thought about these things.

"By the way, there are some details that you also have to know, such as Xiaomei - that is the little panda, sometimes with Zhang. Mei's movements are synchronized. ”

"Hmm." Xi Muhan carefully wrote it down on a notepad.

"And, Ran. Fang can smell the scent of androids. ”

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was stunned for a moment, and looked up at Shen Xin, "Is she a 'dog'?" ”

“……”

After a two-week hiatus, "Steel Refinement" was serialized again, and "The King's Eye" was finally published.

Prior to this episode, Edward had to travel to Central City due to the need to conduct a qualification examination for a national alchemist.

After meeting Bradley (the president), Edward inadvertently mentions his master, Izmi.

Bradley thought about inviting Izmi to serve as a national alchemist, so he went to Dabris, and at the same time, Al was also captured by Glid, and Izmi kicked open the door of Glid's house in order to rescue Al.

Izmi initially tries to save Al back, but Al stops her.

"Please let my brother come over...... Glid taught us the method of artificial man, and my brother taught him the method of soul refining, this opportunity is rare......"

At Al's insistence, Izmi had to return home first.

Edward led Bradley to Darbris. After talking, Bradley unexpectedly learns about Glied.

On the one hand, Edward rescued Al and fought Glied, while Bradley mobilized an army to besiege Glied.

"The King's Eye" is about the duel between Glid and Bradley.

On the final page, Bradley's sword pierces Glied's throat as his blindfold falls off and a tattoo of a devouring snake appears in his pupils.

This scene surprised the reader.

"Bradley is not human!"

"He's the most powerful person in the country...... I didn't expect it to be an artificial person. ”

"I'm curious to know now, Edward, will they fight Bradley?"

"Can't beat it, can you? Bradley's swordsmanship is super strong, and Edward's physical skills are impossible to defeat Bradley's. ”

"I'm looking forward to the next episode...... It's a bit hard to guess. ”

This remark caused a good response among the readers, and "Steel Refining" also beat "The Legend of the Dragon King" in the small book and came to the third place.

Shang Haozhi is quite satisfied with the performance of "Steel Refining", and he has also seen the name of the follow-up nearly 20 words, and it is easier to control the trend of the entire comic, from the content he has read, the setting and layout have exceeded the average level of "The Legend of the Dragon King", and what is slightly lacking is - fighting.

Even if there are already some fighting scenes in the book, it is still a little not bloody enough for a royal road and even the top work of the magazine.

But even so, he still feels that "Steel" has the potential to become the new pillar of "Comic Future" - the kind that replaces "The Legend of the Dragon King".

Due to the addition of "King of Rock and Roll" and the revival of "Steelcore", the sales of "Comic Future" finally stopped.

At the same time, the online version of the manga has made good profits, although it is far from being comparable to "Comic Future", and even 50 manga sold in a week. It's not a tenth of Comic Future's, but it's another amount of income for veteran cartoonists – especially those who are already struggling financially.

"By the way, how has Mr. Shen been doing lately?" Shang Haozhi read the report sent by the sales department, looked up and asked Shen Xin.

""Steel Refining" was created normally, but Mr. Shen put some of his energy on the script." Wang Wenhong said.

Shang Haozhi frowned, "Please pay attention to his body...... What did Mr. Su say? ”

"She is still in Yanjing, and there are several bookstores to sign books, and it will take five or six days at the earliest. She had signed contracts with these bookstores, so there was no way around it. ”

"Hmm." Shang Haozhi bowed slightly, and let out a breath of patience.

Su Han is quite famous in the bestseller world, and he can't force the other party, so he can only hope that Su Han will return to Hongchuan as soon as possible.