Sleepless all night, Shen Xin and Xi Muhan are like this.

On the one hand, Shen Xin had to draw the original draft of the new comic, and on the other hand, he had to consider the lack of detail, while Xi Muhan was honest and read "Steel Chain" again, looking for the heaviness mentioned by Zhuang Si Yuye, as well as the growth of the protagonist.

It is really difficult for different types of authors to create different works, Shen Xin once wrote about the Internet and knows these well.

Therefore, whether Xi Muhan can successfully transform depends on whether she breaks through herself.

As for the growth that Zhuang Si Yuye said, Shen Xin thought about it, and he also had an impression in his mind, but Xi Muhan has been pondering now, and he can't bother it, wait until Xi Muhan's spirit recovers a little, and then tell her.

Shen Xin glanced out the window, and there was already a layer of gray light outside.

Xi Muhan stretched his waist at this time and stood up from the table leisurely.

"What's wrong?"

"Huh? Brother Xin...... You didn't sleep? Xi Muhan was surprised.

"You haven't slept, how can I put my mind at ease?" Shen Xin sighed.

Xi Muhan's cheeks were slightly red, revealing a hint of shame, "I'm sorry, Brother Xin, I'm worried about you." ”

"Are you feeling better now?" Shen Xin asked curiously.

"Hmm. I thought about a lot of things and was tired. Xi Muhan smiled, "But, fortunately, I have gained a little." ”

"Really?"

"Hmm. I'm thinking, why did I write it before, and no one said these words? Among the readers of "National Journey", there are also many people who find faults, but they do not find fault with the thickness or growth. Later, I figured it out, because I wrote the setting of those books, and I set the worldview, and I can guarantee that the style is consistent. But "Steel Forge" is not, Supervisor Shoji looks at my detailed outline from the perspective of "Steel Forge", so he feels full of holes. ”

"Hmm. Actually, that's what I think. His work of comparison should be "Steel". ”

"That's right. So, I spent the night thinking back on his comments and hoping to perfect the work. I also have some conclusions about the shortcomings mentioned by Superintendent Shoji. ”

"Really?" Shen Xin was stunned for a moment, Xi Muhan's face was not happy, but his eyes were more determined.

"Hmm. Regarding the growth of the character, in "Steel", Edward has no special skills, and his physical skills are not the most powerful, why does the reader feel that he is growing? This kind of growth is not that the force is more powerful than before, but as the plot develops, Edward ...... And Al, with his own efforts, to solve the mystery like a cocoon, Edward's growth is vision and mind. ”

"That's right." Shen Xin nodded, this was also his opinion.

However, it is not enough to see this, and it is important to think of a solution.

"11 episodes...... Even shorter, the two protagonists must be allowed to grow...... After all, they are separated from the great desert of Xingguo and Amerstories, and it will be difficult for them to make the decision to go to Amerstorius without an event that makes them change their attitudes, or if there are new discoveries. Yan Fei explained.

"Hmm."

"Unlike "Steel", these are two hostile protagonists, and their decision should be a coincidence, not a negotiation, so the story should have two lines, related to each other, but not mutually agreed. 11 episodes...... Two lines, the space is really tight. Xi Muhan explained.

Shen Xin was dumbfounded, and the double-line advancement involved the switching and arrangement of the plot, which was indeed much more difficult than the single-line.

Then there was the feeling of heaviness...... Now I have figured out that the sense of heaviness that Shoji overseer is talking about does not mean the history of the rejuvenation of the country, because the mere history has no meaning. The sense of heaviness he refers to is the connection with "Steel...... Personally, I think that if some of the history in "Steel Forge" can be reflected in the biography, it may have a good effect. ”

When Shen Xin heard this, he also fell into deep thought.

I have to say that Xi Muhan's words are indeed very reasonable.

Although he has deliberately increased the connection between the two works in the setting, that connection is more in the characters than in the background.

"Then what do you mean ......"

"Since alchemy has its own theory, then, alchemy will also have it, right? Also, in your name as 'Sage of the West', you mentioned a person who went to Heunggu...... Can that history be more detailed? ”

Shen Xin hurriedly shook his head, "This is not good, it will be used in "Steel Forge", you can appear as a legend, and the 'Sage's Stone' can also be recorded in the book." Knowing this, they chose to cross the desert and come to Amsteris. ”

"That's fine." Xi Muhan nodded.

"As for alchemy, it's also written in the setting. Although alchemy does use magic circles, there are essential differences between the two. Alchemy uses the power of the earth's crust, and its theoretical basis is 'equivalent exchange'. But alchemy is different, it was originally a technology produced by the emperor's pursuit of immortality, and later, the sage of the West came to Xingguo and introduced alchemy, which led to the current alchemy.

"If you want to master alchemy, you must understand the flow of matter, that is, the 'dragon vein'. If the result of alchemy is the recasting of new substance, then alchemy is restoration. ”

If you don't understand this part of the setting, it's hard to find the mystery in it.

Xi Muhan heard Shen Xin's explanation, came to the workbench, picked up the settings given by Shen Xin, and read them carefully again.

At first, she thought that this part was just talking about the origin of alchemy, but she didn't expect the principle to be in it.

"Hoo ......"

Xi Muhan sat weakly in his seat and sighed in the sky.

"Are you alright?" Shen Xin said worriedly.

Xi Muhan shook his head, his mouth was full, but there were tears in his eyes, "Brother Xin, it's so difficult." ”

"yes...... It's hard. ”

Shen Xin nodded, after a night of analysis, he also found that it was really difficult to make the setting of "Steel Refining", "If you don't want to do ......"

Xi Muhan shook his head, took out a tissue, and wiped away his tears.

"No, I just thought I could do it at first. But now...... I probably can't really write now. I'd love to do it independently, but the quality of this anime is more important. Brother Xin......"

"Huh?"

"I want to ask Sister Su Han for help...... If she has the time and is willing to come over, I would like to ask her for help. Xi Muhan's eyes were bright.

"Huh?" Shen Xin was a little surprised.

"After a night of thinking, I figured I could do a good job of the outline...... But what about after the subdivision? There are only good outlines, but some people can't write them, right? The style I'm good at is still a little different from this style. So, I would like to ask Sister Su Han for help. ”

Shen Xin breathed a sigh of relief, "I thought you were scared?" ”

"Not really!" Xi Muhan's tone was resolute, and he clenched his fists, "I can do it well." ”

Shen Xin yawned, and when he saw Xi Muhan's eyes, the depression in his heart was greatly reduced. <

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